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vanshi_maaneet

@vanshi_maaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

wow...luved it...
ridhim kitni cute hai...love her...}trishna kaha beech aa gayi...
n precap sound romantic...MaaNeeT in Pool...hayeee

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kaaGurti

@kaaGurti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

wonderful part dear. i imagined this scenes. thank u so much for this part. eagerly waiting for next part.

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inharika

@inharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

strange love
[maaneet ss]

Part 8

soo i left on tht dadi maa pushed him inside the pool nd he fell on geet... lolzzz...alll had giggled lotss...!!!

maan-> dadi maa...!!!9 he ws tanking her frm his heart bt on top showing fake anger lolzz)

geet was not able to beleev wt happnd... jst knw...!!!!!

geet getting hesitated nd all...

geet-> umm...i thnk mera ho gaya i wud leave knw u both enjoy okay...

aarohi gestured ridim to stop her...

ridim holded her hand nd said...dii mat jao naa...

aarohi-> yaa dii kitna maza aa rha hai plss dnt go...

dadi-> yaa beta aap bi enjoy krlo naa...

geet made her mind somewer she ws happy tht she gt to spnd tym wihh maan bt somewer tht gurly nd all ws stopping her...bt as all insisted she hd to obey thm... maan tooo was damn damn happy frm inside...!!!

maaan-> dadi maaa mujhe kuch kaam h,...m going...

oopppsss!! aeise keise he can go aftrall aarohi nd dadi maa wud nt lt ths happn...!!!

dadi-> aaap kahinn ni jaa rhe hain samjhe...!!!! kabi family k saaath bi tym spnd kiya kariye...!!

maaan-> bt...

aarohi-> nooo bt bhai...aeise keise aap jaasakte hain...atleast hume toh thoda tym dijiye...!!

ridim-> haan.!!

dadi-> ab toh dono juneja gurls ne bol diya ab toh ruk jaiye...

maan [st]->aere dono ne kiya hai...teeno ne ni...!!

[me-> lolll maan...y u dnt undrstand?? or u dnt want to??? tht u hadd...fallen fr her... :P]

maan-> hmm[with a weak smile...soo sad...bechara...:P]

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thn ridim started throwing water on maan nd geet.!!

1stly thy both wer quite uncomfrtable with eachothr...bt nw thy too started playing like geet throwing water on ridim nd aarohi nd sometym's on maan too.,

dadi maa wa damn happy to see both of thm enjoying...!! nd yaa she ws vry happy fr ridim nd aarohi tooo...thy desreve tht thy deserve all the comfrtss...!!!

dadi remembered her nd vaishnavi's talkss...!!

flashbaacckss...!!

dadi maa-> beta aap bhi naa...

vaishnavi-> maa ji... veise mujhe aapse ek baat poochini thi...

dadi maa-> kya beta??

vaishnavi-> maa ji veise bhagwaaan kre aeisa naa ho bt agar kabi mujhe kuch ho gaya toh aap geet kaa arrohi ka aur ridim ka dhyaan rakheinagi??

dadi-> pehle oh aeisaa kuch hoga ni...nd aap ko doubt hai kya ki hum unka khyaal rakh payeinge yaa ni...??

vaishnavi-> ni maa ji vo bas aeise hi...!!!

dadi-> beta deikhiye vo humaari poti b h...

vaishnavi-> jiii bt thn agar unhe kuch ho gaya toh?? aapko pta hai kabi kabi humein bahut darr lagta h...kya humaae baad inhe inke haq mileinge??

dadi-> aaapko darne ki zarroorath ni h...aur veise bi aap dono ko kuch ni ho gaaa...nd bhagwaan kare aeisa naa ho ki agar kuch ho bi gaya naa toh hum aapse vaada karte hain ki hum kabi inhe akela ni chodeinge...!!!

vaishnavi-> maa ji mujhe usska darr ni hai...aap toh jaanti hain ye samaaj ye duniya...upaar se sab inse se kitna jaltehain...humein humaari ni humaare baad humaari bachiyon ki chinta hai...ki kahinn ye duniya unhe...

dadi-> sshhh...aeisa kuch ni hoga...aur haaan duniya mein sirf bure ni ache log bi hote hain...

vaishnavi-> vo toh hai maa ji bt kuch aeise log hain jo humaari bachiyon par buri nazar daale beithee hue hain humein kuch ho bi gaya naa toh vo kahinnn humaari bachiyon ko nuksaan naa pahunchaaye...

dadi-> aapko aeisa kyun lagg rha hai??

vaishnavi-> vo maaji kuch dino se mujhe dhamki bhaare callls aa rhe hain aur iske baare mein mainnne inhe ni bataya...

dadi-> beta filhaal kal toh hum london jaa rhe hain ...bt aap chinta mat kijiyee... hum jeisi hi vaapas aayeinge...v'll do somethingon this topic...

flashbackss endss...

[actuaally tht ws ther last talk...!!! the nxt day wen thy went to london aftr 23hrss thy received a call saying tht thy wer dead.!!tht ws the shocking newss...till nw dadi maaa blame herslf fr thre death...if thy wud hav takn it seriously it wud nt hav happnd...!!! bt tht ws nt her fault...soo nw the ques iss...tht who's tht person who killd geet's parents...who made maan lost his memorey...who had takn off the loving caring handss up frm those little kidss...nd y those 3gurls hav to run away frm thre??? wta had happnd?? is some1 aftr thm?? who's tht person...did any1 knw him or he's unknwon wat...!!!!!!!!??? is geet hiding something frm maan nd dadi.?? she knew tht person??thre r sooo many quesss...]

tht's we aarohi went up nd switch on the cd...!!! nd the songgg started...!!

thee tuning...!!

[tune ws soo romantic tht thy felll fr each othr nd gt lost...both dreaming the same...thy wer in thre dream wrlds...escaped frm the wrld without lting any1 knw.!!]

as the wrdss started the ball room dance of maaneet started...maan in his dashing black...nd geet in gorgeous dark rred..!![same dress she ws wearing wich she wred on madhubala's shot of vivu nd her dance...maan wore vivian's costume nd geete in madhubala lukin same as gorgeous as thre...]

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

[thre ws no 1 in the poool in thre imagination...just maan nd geet made maaaneet nd the stars nd moon...watching thm...to tell othr luvers tht seee thre ws 1 couple like maaneet...who wer maan nd geet bt later become maaneeet...moon ws to tell thm hw thy met wt thy did hw much thy cared fr eachothr hw much thy respct...unki pavitrata kaa saakshi...thy we rso pure...tht purest & sweetest frm the aquaguard's water or any othr water purifier...]

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

[she ran frm thre smiling...maan followed her...thy wer taking roundsss of the pool it seemed like...finally he caught her...!!! nd hugged her frm back...!!! thy giggled...thn geeet again tried to run...bt her leg ws caught ...!!! its said anaa moch aa jana...sahi tym pr moch ayi,...he made a worried face nd made her sit on the ground as she ws already falleen..!!! he started luking her leg...asking if anything serious...!! he checkd her...]
Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bheed mein logon ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela itna hoon main yahan

[nd she being naughty splashd some water on him...!!! he caught her evil type cute giggle...he came to knew tht she didnt hav anythin on her legg she ws jst pretending.!!! she agian ran bt ths tym he didnt lt her goo much far..!! nd he just pushd her inside the pool...]
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

[she made ababy face nd lifted her hand soo tht he can hlp her come out maan thought she ws serious nd she may b caught by cold soo he gave his hand fr spport...bt geet is geet beinge more naughty she pulled him inside the ppoool...!!]
Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
Hadd se bhi aagey yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshaan hua mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya

[maan made a fake angry face...nd thn wen she ws lost in his eyes he splashed water on her...nd thn thy began too play...!!!! thy wer enjoying limitlessly...maan cuddled her around his armss...nd gave her a tight hug...wich slowly became passionable...!!! she turned in his embrace... her stupid flickss ws blocking his view he thought soo he removed those curls frm her face sensuously...!!! she can feeel in his evry otuch the need of her i n his life nd the need of his in her life...!!!]
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

[he leaned frwrd to kiss her...the lips wer abt to touch eachothr...thy wer soo thirsty fr it...!!! bt thn suddenly...]

aarohi-> ddiii...[she shaked her...]

geet felt vry ashamed nd blushdd lots of tonss wen she rememebered tht she ws abt to kiss him...!!!!

get just gt up nd ran to her rooom...blushingly...

dadi-> aeere inhe kya hua??

while maan ws lost..!! in his dreamss too he ws abt to kiss her...wen ridim throwed water on him.!!

he ws nw back to his sensesss...bt could nt see geet in frnt of him...!!!

maan too left wen he realised wt he thought of just nw.!!

aarohi-> aere dadi maa indono ko kya ho gaya...itna sharmaaa kyun rahe thhee.??

dadi-> pta ni bete,,...by the way bahut tym ho gaya hai...ab aap loag chaliye change kr lijiye..!!! its quite late..!!

aarohi nd ridim too came out went to thre roomss freshend up...nd come.!!

all met at dinig hall fr diinneer after 1 hr.!! till thn geet ws in shouch hw cn she thought of hiim like tht same maaan ws feeling both wer lost...!! blushingg...

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precap-> really donnno...wen will update...bt gud news is tht m btrr nw...!!! bt thn the pending sckoool wrk ggrrrhhh...by the way jo bih ho i always hav tym fr maaneet...sooo dnt frgt to leave ur coommnts...!!!! plsss...it inspires me...nd silent readerss plsss.ssee m nt weelll thn also m updating plsss coommnttt...

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

hayyyeee love the update❤️

maaneet in their dreamland 😳☺️

hope ye dream jaldi reality ban jaye can't wait for that moment😍

take care of urself and glad to know that u r better now😃

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Pihu

@Parimishty

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awesome update...😊
hayee m wari jawaan kya dream tha Maaneet ka...😳
Just waiting for the time jab ye dream true ho jaega...😳
Plzzz continue soon...😊

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nisha gupta

@nish025

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

superb!!

maneet njoying der dream land!!😉

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kash53

@kash53

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

hey dear ...where r u??
waiting for update...

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inharika

@inharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

me updating noww...sorryy for delay...bt me not getting sufficient likess and commntss...i thnk u all dnt like itt...!!! 😭

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inharika

@inharika

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

strange love
[ Maaneet SS ]

Part 9...

hmm soo guys i know me cont. it aftr a long tym... sooo me really sorry...bt i hav a complain tht me nt getting suffiecient likess...i thought tht u all mst nt b liking it...bt thn i found some who really luvd it...soo me cont fr thm..!! :D hope u all will enjoy 2dy's updatee. :D nd yaa if i did any mstke i mean spell mistake or something thn plss frgiv me in adv...lolzz..!! enjoy...

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they met after 1 hour in dining hall...till thn thy wer blushing soo much i cant explain...

maan had made luv with trishna sooo many tym's he had kissd her or seen her...bt dnt knw y he's behaving soo strange 2wards geet...wenever he realise wt he ws dreaming of kissing her it made him blush dnt knw y... 1stly he felt it ws just an aattraction or he again wnt some1 to fulfil his desire...soo he had already called trishna...nd tld her tht he wanna see her 2dy at night...bt htn its half an hour he had talked to trishna...nd nw he' feeling something strange its nt his desire to want some1..its something else bt wt it is...thi feeling is totally unknown to him...!!! bt htn also he listened to his mind nd thought its just like tht aftr 2dys night wiht trishu he'll be fi9... soo he cary on avoiding his feelingsss bt somewe in his heart he knew he's wrong its something else othr thn his desire...!

whereas geet was blushing soo hardd...wenever she realise wt she thought abt maan it made her cheekss gooo dark pink... hw cn she thnk abt him like tht...

wheras here aarohi nd dadi maa noticing thre blushinggg nd talking in eyes .!!

aarohi frm eyess...-> dadi maa wats going on y r they blushing soo much like thy r married nd had just came frm honeymoon nd we r asking each nd evevry details of it...

dadi in eyes-> beta u r ryt odnno wat happn... seriously thy r strange vry strange...

aarohi-> tht's y i call thre love as strange lovee...

dadi-> u r totally ryt bacche vry strange nd insane love bt thy just hav to confes...

aarohi-> dnt worry dadi...we'll make thm do so...

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ridim noticed all wer silent no1 talking to her...

ridim-> geet dii no1 talking to riddu... [she made a baby sad face...]

aarohi hugged her sidewayss...

aarohi-> acha no1 talking to riddu...y??

ridim-> pata nahi...ridim ne kuch kiya??

[ she askdd soo cutely wich made evry1 smile...!! evn maan had a sweet cute charming smilee wich he never had befre...wich didnt go unnoticd by dadi...meansss she noticed it...nd smiled reliefly...]

aarohi-> aaee meri drama queen stop ur drama... she said antsdly...

ridim-> geet diii dadi maaa...[she made a baby crying face...]

dadi-> aarohi beta aap kyun unhe tangg[pareshaan] kr rhi hian...

geet-> acha chalo...riddu aap khana kha lo...

ridim-> nahiii...aaj ridim geete di ke haanth se khana khayegi...

geet-> acha theek hai aao geet dii aapko khila degi...

ridim-> nahi geet dii ki godi mein beith ke khayegi ridim...

aarohi-> tht's nt donee..!!

geet-> tu chup chaap khana kha...ridim aap dii k paas aao...

ridim gt up nd sat on her lap...

geet started feeding her...

dadi smiledd...!! nd strted having her food... same ws applicablpe with aarohi...😊

bt here dnt knw y maan was feeling jealous...!!!of ridim...geet feeding ridim by her handss...ridim siting on her lap...geet kissing her sometym's as she's sooo cutee...tht evry1 wud like to kiss her...! nw nt able to bear this unknwon feeling he excused himslf or say he's running away frm the fact tht he'd started falling fr her...!😡😡😡

all finishd thre dinnrss... nd went to thr respective rooms...!

geet in her rrooom sitting nd reading magazine...

aarohi ws trying hard to make ridim 🥱sleep🥱... nd here dadi ws watching ramayan in tv...

[me-> now u all must be thinking is scene se maan kahan chala gaya sooo let me remind u guyss...tht he'd called trishna ( it's her b'day 2dy) nd he's with her know...][urrrfff i knw u guysss wud hate it same here... bt lets see wt happn next cazi knw u all wud like it...😊]

maan sitting in sofa nd sipping is wine...( something is mixd in it by trishna... to fulfil her desires...as maan is acting diffrnt now... nd when maan reached farm house nd saw her laying on the bed nude he told her to wear something nd make his drink fr him by wich trishna gt irritated nd did all this to fulfil her desires nd make her b'day spcl...as she knw maan will loose his control nd she cn do wt she wnt... )

bt she didnt succedddedd...

maan-> okay trishna am leaving if u want i can drop u home...

trishna-> ummm maan wait fr few minss naa its my b'day u promisd me tht u'll make it spcl fr me by...

[befre she cn cont. maan interupted...]

maan-> yaa i remembr bt nw i dnt like all tht i dnno why bt i dnt thnk it wud be ryt...[by tht he start getting up frm his sofa...]

trishna came nd sat on the handles of sofa ...her hands on maans shoulder giving him side hugg...making sure her chest touch his face... { she knew her dreesss is damn short nd thn her neck is damn dep too...}(she knew earlier it ws maan's weak point ) [bt she is frgeeting its nt tht maan now...he's changed ...]

maan get up with a jerk...

maan-> i thnk we shud leave now...

and thn seeing he didnt lost his control yet... they havee to leave frm thre...whilke trishna was damn damn damn irritated with the behaviourr/... [ she frgt tht the powder wich she mixd ws 1 of the slowest wrking powder...her badluckk gurlss...]

[me-> i knw gurlsss u alll wud be danm happy to read her failure part lolzzz...nd nw coming something intresting tooo... wooo... while reading it m sure all will go gaga hehehe...]

after half an hour maan reached mansion...it was 12:30 in the night...till now alll wer sleeping except...geet...donno why she's nt feeling sleepy 2dy although she gt up early...!!! she knew maan was not thre/... she ws indirectlyy waiting fr maan...!!!she ws getting restless worrying abt him donno why?? thre wer so many quesss arosing in her mindd...!!! bt unfortunately she ws nt realising the answer or was nt wanting to realise it...!!!

here maan reached khurana mansion...

he dnt knw wt ws happening to him just he ws feeling uncmfrtable diffrnt...weak etc...

as geet heard his car's sound she ran downstairs only to see him in a vyr bad condition...

she run 2wards him nd askd him

geet-> wat happnd??? shud i calll any1??

maan-> no pls...dadi maa wud kill me ...nd will be woriied...

geet-> soo now wat i shud doo...

maan-> dnt do anything...i'll go by my own...

but he ws abt to fall wen eet hold him

geet-> fi9 wait i will hlp u out./...

maaan-> noo needd...

ggeet-> shut up...i said naa i'll hlp u...

[she said it with full authority...wich made maan smile dont knw. why... nd noddedd...while she hlped him...]

she made him walk towards his room thn made him lie down... in his bed...

geet-> wait.i'll bring u ur coffee... u'll feeel beettrr...

maan->thnku...!!!!

precap ...!!

hmmm maaan and geett romancingg...wwooo...

nxt update kal milegaa... hope u all likd this 1...nd yaa dnt frgt too commntt or atleast hit likee...!!!! :D will be waiting for ur response.eiknw its a short 1...bt thn sabr ka fla meetha hota hai...sooo wait fr 2morrroww...u will gt maaneeet sceness...1!!

Edited by inharika - 13 years ago