Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan (RTMC ff) Part 9 Pg27

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )

Part 2

Recap:

Veer: par kya maa? apne mujhe bina bataye meri zindagi ka itna bada faisala kar liya? Kyon maa? Aap hi to kahtin hai mujhe apne dil ki sunane ke liye aur mera dil kehta hai ki main abhi iss sab ke liye taiyaar nahi hoon... mere par dabav mat daliye maa...

(Nivriti has tears in her eyes)

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Veer's room

Nivriti: Tumhe kya lagta hai Veer ki mai iss sabse khush hoon? Meri majboori ko samjho beta...

Veer: Maa aise kya majboori hai jiske liye aap mere saath aisa kar rahin hai? Aap to aisi nahi thi? Aryavardhan Mamaji ka to phir bhi samajh sakta hoon, par aap?

Nivriti: Beta Meri majbboti hai tumhare pitaji ka diya hua vada... aaj se 17 saal pehle, tumhare janam par bade bade raja maharaja tumhare Janam din ke jashn mein shamil hone ke liye Rajpur aye thay. Un mein se ek thay Maharaj Rudrapratap. Woh apni patni aur betiyon ke sang yahan aye thay... us samay tumhare pitaji aur maharaj rudrapratap ne ananya aur tumhara rishta paka kar diya taki Sumaina aur Rajpur ke rishtey aur bhi mazboot ho jayen. Saath hi saath bhaiya ne maharaj Rudrapratap ki badi beti Siya ka rishta Dharan se paka kar diya.

Main iss baat se anjaan thi , mujhe bhi kuch din pehle bhaiya ne bataya. Bhaiya ko laga ki mujhe tumhare pita ne sabkuch bata diya hoga. Par shayad unko yeh bataneka mauka hi nahi mila kyonki tumhare jandamdin ke kuch hi dinon baat unki mrityu ho gayi...

Par main tumhare pitaji ko achi tarah janti hoon, woh ye hargiz nahi chahte ki unka koi bhi vachan tumhari khusiyan cheen le. Is liye mere bache main yeh chahati hoon ki tum sirf ek baar Sumaina jakar Rajkumari Ananya se mil lo aur agar woh tumhe achi lagi tab hi tumhari shaadi hogi. Main tumhe vachan deti hoon ki agar woh tumhen pasand nahin ayi to mein kisi ko bhi tumpar dabav nahin daalne doongi. Bhaiya ko bhi nahi. Tum aur Dharam kal subhe hi Sumaina ke liye nikal jaana.

( Veer had tears in his eyes, his heart was full of gratitude for his mother )

Veer: Maa aap bahut achi hain, aur isliye jaisa aap chahti hain waisa hi hoga. Main Raajkumari Ananya se mile bigair iss shaadi se na nahin kahoonga.

Nivriti: Mujhe tumpar garv hai mere bache. Ab chalo jaldi se so jao . Tumhe aur dharam ko kal subha jaldi uthna hai.

( Nivriti left the room and Veer slept peacefully. All his misunderstandings were clear. He thanked God for giving him such a wonderful mother.)

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WILL UPDATE SOON. PLZ LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS...😊

Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago

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rashmi gautam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

rveer ki mumma bhot supportive h

mujhe acchi lagi.

so sweet she is...

do part ek saath ded iye.

oops! shaddi ho rhi h veer ki,

i mean baatein hi ho rhi h

dnt wry , shaddi bhi ho jayegi...

veer humne tho tumhare liye ladki dekh bhi li h

-ananya...

ekdum perfect h...tumhare jaise muaghty man k liye.

chalo ussese tho tum vapas mil lena.

mummy ki baat mani veer ne

achha baby...

good.

chalo ab next part.

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rashmi gautam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

hey, plzz i wud lov if u send the link of dis ff to every frind in ma frind list...

dey all r rtmc fans

dey willl lov dis

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samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
hey, plzz i wud lov if u send the link of dis ff to every frind in ma frind list...

dey all r rtmc fans
dey willl lov dis

Definitely😊

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Oo Wowww LOVELY ff dear:-):-) Amazing concept and SUPERB update:-):-) THANKS A LOT for PM me dear:-) I loved it:-) please cont soon...

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samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Oo Wowww LOVELY ff dear:-):-) Amazing concept and SUPERB update:-):-) THANKS A LOT for PM me dear:-) I loved it:-) please cont soon...

Hey thanks a ton 😊Will update soon😊

How do you feel about the title?Do you think "Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan" or "Prem Kahaniyan" are better than the original one... plz give some suggestions😊

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Radhika Sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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res...😊

will edit tonight...

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samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )

Part- 3

Palace of Sumaina. Maharaj Rudrapratap, Rajkumari Sia and Rajkumari Ananya were seated in the main chamber.

Rajkumari Sia : Pitaji apne humein aur Ananya ko bulaya?

Rudrapratap: haan beti hum tum dono ko apna ek zaroori faisla sunana chahate hain.

( Ananya who look least interested before, now turned completely attentive at the seriousness of his tone. Her instincts told her that she is not going to like whatever her father has to say. )

Sia: Kaisa faisla pitaji?

Rudrapratap: Sia , Ananya humne tumhari Shaadi Rajkumar Dharam aur Rajkumar Veer ke saath tai kar di hai. Dharam Aryanagar ke rajkumar hain aur Veer Rajpur ke. Dono hi bahut bahadur hain.

( Sia and Ananya were shocked. Ananya's face turned white and then red with rage😡. Sia looked towards Ananya and got really scared . Her face was red with fury )
Ananya turned towards her father.

Ananya: Pitaji aapne aisa socha bhi kaisa? Aap achi tarah se jaante hain ki hum Shaadi jaise baaton mein bilkul visvas nahi rathte! Phir bhi... ? ( Rudrapratap angrily cuts in )

Rudrapratap : Tumhari himat kaise hui humse itne unche swar mein baat karne ki...? Tumhari yeh baatein bilkul bevakoofi se bhari huin hain. Tum wahi karogi jo hum chahenge.

(Ananya was trying hard to control her emotions, she never cries in front of anyone.)

Ananya: Kash pitaji aap kabhi humare vicharon ka maan rakh sakte... Kash hum ek Rajkumari nahin hote...apne apna faisla to suna diya pitaji par ek baat hum bhi kehna chahte hain. Hum jeete jee yeh shaadi kabhi nahin karenge.

Rudrapratap: aapko karni padegi!!! Hum aap... (ananya doesn't let him finish and storms of the room)

(Sia had tears in her eyes. She knew what Ananya might be going through...Kaash ap zinda hoti maa )

Sia: Pitaji aap Ananya ke saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain? Humein iss shadi se koi aitraaz nahi hai kyonki hum hamesha se hi shadi karna chahte thay...par Ananya?

Rudrapratap: hum aur kuch nahin sunana chahte ... aap apni tarah apni behen ko bhi raazi kijiye. woh bhi jaldi kyonki Dharam aur veer bas yahan pahunchtein hi honge.

( With this he leaves the room, leaving behind a confused Sia😕. Sia doesn't understand what she should do...)

In the Royal stable
Ananya is stroking her beloved horse Badal. She always feels relaxed when she is with him.

Ananya: Hum kya karein Badal? Hum koi shadi nahi karna chahte... Pitaji humein kabhi samajhne ki koshish nahi karte. Unhein hamare vichar ghatiya lagtein hain. Par Ananya apne vicharon ke bigair kuch nahi, uske vichaar hi uska astitv hain...Shayad agar unhe humare vichar hi ghatiya lagtein hain to hum bhi ghatiya lagte honge... Shayad voh humse pyaar hi nahi karte...

( Sia , outside the stable has tears in her eyes. She is unable to control her emotions and goes inside. Ananya sees Siya entering and quickly composes herself. She knows Ananya's tears hurt Sia more than anything.)

Sia: Ro rahi ho?

Ananya: Hum kyon royenge?

Sia: puri duniya se chupa sakti ho humsein nahi...

Anaya looks at Sia and hugs her.

Ananya: Sia Ananya ne aaj tak kuch nahi aanga pitaji siwaye azadi ke... Humein dhan daulat, aisho aram se koi lagav nahi... hum mehlon mein rehne ke liye nahi bane... Humein yudhkala mein ruchi hai ghar grahsti mein nahi... hum zindagi mein kuch banana chahte hain...

Sia: Par tum yeh bhi to dekho ki pitaji nein aaj tak tumhein yudhkala seekhne se nahi roka...

Ananya giggles😆

Ananya: kaise rokte, Ananya bhaag nahi jaati?😉

Sia playfully slaps ananya and they share a good laugh...😆

Sia: Par ananya ek na ek din tumhe shaadi ke bare mein sochna to hoga. Kyon na tum ek baar Veer se mil ke dekho...

All the laughter dies from Ananya's face

Ananya: hargiz nahi , na to Ananya apni zindagi barbad hone degi na hi tumhari... ananya janti hai ki tum ek prem vivah karna chahti ho... Tum chahe jitna chupa lo... Ananya sab janti hai...

Ananya: Hum Badal ko lekar jaa rahein hain... kuch samay akela rehna chahte hain...

( Ananya blows a whistle, mounts Badal and gallops away...)

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4 hours later
( Sia is in her room worrying about Ananya, she hasnt come back yet.)

Sia thinks aloud😕: kahin voh sach me bhag to nahi gayi!!😆

Nahi nahi,vo humein bataye bigair nahi bhagegi!!😆

Lekin woh Ananya hai, woh kuch bhi kar
saktihai...!!!!😆

Hume use dhoondna hoga....

Sainikon!!!

Sainik: Ji Rajkumari?

Sia: Humare saath jaldi jungle chalo , Ananya ko dhoodne ... woh jab pareshan hoti hai to wahin jati hai...

Sainik : Ji

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Veer and Dharam are in the forest on their way to Sumaina...

Dharam : Veer tumhara yeh chota rasta kab khatam hoga? Agar jungle se nahi jate to kab ke pahunch jaate!!

Veer ( smirks ): Kyon itni jaldi hai apni rajkumari se milne ki... ;) zara sa bhi sabar nahi ho raha tumse😉

Dharam( embarassed) : Veer hum tumhein nahi chodenge!

Veer: Pehle pakad kar to dikhao 😉

They are about to gallop away when they hear a girl shouting. They dismount their horses and move towwards the voice...

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In the jungle

Sia: Ananya, ananya!!!!

Sia collides with Dharam and turns around and looks at him...They share a brief eyelock. Dharam is stunned by her beauty . Sia is also shocked to see such a good looking boy in the forest.

Veer: ahem ahem!!

( Dharam and Sia compose themselves )

Sia: Dekh kar nahi chal sakte... ek to waise hi hum pareshan hain, upar se tum bhi...

Dharam: Aap kaun hain?

Sia: hum Raajkumari Sia hain aur tum? Tumhe yahan pehle to nahi dekha...

Dharam 😳: vo vo... ( blushing)😳

Veer : vo vo kya ? bolo?

Sia( annoyed) : haan vo vo kaya?

Veer ( smirks): rajkumari sia, ye rajkumar dharam hain, Aryanagar ke Rajkumar aur apke hone wale vo 😉...aur hum inke bhai veer

( Sia blushes )😳

Dharam (composes himself) : Rajkumari Sia aap yahan jungle mein kya kar rahin hain?

Sia: hum apni behen ananya ko dhoond rahe hain, woh naaraz ho kar yaha aa gayi kyonki vo apke bhai se shadi nahi karna chahti...

Veer : use naraz hone ke liye jungle hi mila tha... pata hai yahan
kitna khatra ho sakta hai?

Sia ( defending Ananya ): Ananya apna khayal rakh sakti hai, vo is jungle ke chape chape se waqif hai.

Veer ( mutters to himself ) : kahin vo khud to ek jungli jaanwar nahi hai?? are maa kahan fasa diya apne mujhe😉

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ruchi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Congrats for your first FF...have read all parts...CS is very nice and concept seems interesting...I think I am going to have such a royal RTMC story after a long time...all parts are superb.

Continue soon and thanx for PM.

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samantha1987200

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Ruchi--
Congrats for your first FF...have read all parts...CS is very nice and concept seems interesting...I think I am going to have such a royal RTMC story after a long time...all parts are superb.
Continue soon and thanx for PM.

Hey... thanks ... I'm glad you liked it😊

I'll update soon and pm you😊

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