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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 13 years ago

You asked:

1. This is a bit risque! Do let me know if this fine or if I should tone down.

I don't consider that a serious question.😉

I love the image of a plum lace bra with two wet spots--a sensual visual that is difficult to forget.

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wafa.M

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was juz awsum...😉 😳

khushi'x appetite is juz oh my god!! 😛

continue soon will b w8n!! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was hot! And I loved it!

Haha she had to be hungry at the wrong time!!

Lol and Arnav serving food oh lala

Update soon :-)

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Samiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

NO!!! don't you dare tone it down girl... I've waited through 13 parts for this 😆... Make it hot and sizzling please 😳

Awesome update by the way👏

p.s. man how can khushi feel hungry at a moment like this😆

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome realy loved it . its ok for late update next time update it a little bit earlier

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farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

A truly Fabulous update...How could khushi think abt food at such in such an intimate moment? With khushi's eating tendencies all my sympathies r with arnav for this much awaited honeymoon. Regarding toning down i think u don't need to after all u r writing abt their honeymoon and its supposed to be romantic time plus u r writing it so beautifully that it doesn't look cheap or crass.

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Rehanna aka Parri

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Posted: 13 years ago

no matter wht u write...i always love ur work

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Alia

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nice update ..
love ur description ..
Khushi and her stomach .. Poor Arnav😆

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Sona

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved the first part where Arnav clearly notices the smallest things about her *drooling* 😍

And Arnav thinks of himself as an arrogant, thoughtless imbecile, good for him:)

She tasted of jalebis, of handmade Belgian chocolates, of roses and moonlight, of innocent dreams, of love...this line was my favorite 😊

Brilliant update, a little bit of dhak-dhak happened.

Update soon😊

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mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update yaar, arnav was soo cute towards the end too! :D

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