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goguma

@goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

oh wow!
another ff from munchy! 👍🏼
awesome!

but i find arnav's character disturbing.
scary even...
poor kushi seems to always have only the bad guys to come her path...
and to witness all that cruel act...she could be in deep trouble!

but since this is just the beginning, i shall set my mind open...hahahaha

hope arnav doesn't make kushi the object of lust for him and his gang...🤢

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

ok ...arnav seems to a ruthless character again...so the first encounter has happened...

well the last part was a bit of had me squirming me in my seat...but then i am too much of ur fan to give up on ur works, just becoz u happen to write on subjects that are bold and daring and needs an open mind...

loved it

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

welll weelll i think we are def in for a surprise with this ff

its brilliant

thans for the pm

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

amazing update...

thanks 4 d pm

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naina

@warriorprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

wow...arnav 'bhai'...whilst it requires some mental re-calibration to move his image from corporate to bhai-giri, I think I like this angle. looks like some fire works in store for miss khushi in the future.

naina

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dingle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

I dont know why.. but this gangrape (call it what it is :P ) was more upsetting to read than all the shockers from Genesis.

I have to applaud you for your stomach churning topics Munchyji... Arnav and his gang remind me of the modern gangs that hang around putting girls in 'their place'. Theres been a very infamous court case here just last week for a gang rape on an 11 year old. sick mentality.

And Arnavs deeply entrenched in it. Im looking forward to showing how he's going to be redeemed, or if he's going to try.

Poor Khushi, she must feel so out of place and lonely with her family. I hope they warm up to her.

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Great update.. This is a whole new Arnav.. Dressing in pale yellow, thanking Devi Maiyya.. But the self sacrifice for the sake of his family is still there.. You've crafted him very well. I can practically see the contemptuous look he gives the world..

And what an introduction.. The first time Khushi sees him, he commits murder before her very eyes.. In cold blood.. And without a thought... She's going to hate his guts for a long time, is my prediction..

Thanks for the PM.. Looking forward to the next part.. This is going to be some ride! :)

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Saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

That was intense & I knew you would not disappoint with their first meeting. Wow, what an impression to have left on a young girl, especially when we know that they'll soon be meeting up again. I can well imagine K's horror & agitation. I desperately need to read more of this. Update soon & thanks for the pm.