~HOSPES~ updated pg 70- 10/10/2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Candy 32 likes completed...

Demand fulfilled..

Now I wil start my torture...😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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grt yaar...
n chalo upd8 fast nw...jaldi jaldi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahaha...I wnt leave you until you tell me wen u wil updt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Candy late hu pata hai no sorry i know u ll kill me islie ab ati hu about ur SS(plz OS mat bol) me fully excited to know kon hai vo who is the boy nd who's the girl candy koi to clue chod deti taki hum predict kar sakte hai but NY dekhke lag raha hai Shakti nd Amar honge but Amar NY me kaise so pata nahi ho sakta hai Swayam nd Sharon bhi ho coz Sneha mast classical dancer hai pata nahi me full of confusion nd candy plz update it soon yaar aise kaise chod dia tune 😒 i wont demand more coz i know ur having exms but plz ek aur update just revel thm so that hum chain ki saas le sake plz candy only 1 more update plz nd haa ab to ur demand also completed na
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was awesome...and it was interesting too.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow..!! cnt believe i asked fr 30 likes and i got 40 amazing u people are yaar.. thnkz a ton.. love u all loads... n meow n poppy thnkz 2 u too.. updating fr u people specially haha...
k guyzz chota he aur is month ka last update he coz u all knw dat m gono b busy wid my xamz till d end of may so nxt updates for my ff n for my ss ya heard it right m making diss a ss in june only.. chry bt cnt help it no net at my home coz of d xamz... n ha sum1 suggest me a name fr dis yaar.. kitne din iska naam new os rakhu ha... ok enough of my bak bak here's d update... n pehele hi telling update chota he ok so joothas chappals all allowed.. xamz k baad bade bade updates fr sure hmm...

PART 2
1st person's POV contd:-

I was so lost in my thots dat I dint notice dat d dance had already stopped n der was d angel standing at d middle staring at me wid shock fear anger all at the same tym only…

I felt embarrassed for staring at her like this den to like a fool kept standing der staring at her. Don't knw wat had got into my head 2day.

She must hav felt so uncomfortable standing der wen she saw me. M such a big fool. Already she's in pain I think n fr d topping of d bitter cake m here watching her.

2nd person's POV:-

y…. y does this happen to me always.. m I that bad.. ohh god.. to remove all this stress all I could do was dance cause this was the way thru wich I felt relieved.. felt gud n d burden on my heart decreased a little..

For the world I hav a wonderful and the richest father.. d most known mother.. all feel m happy in this fake world. But they dnt even hav a second fr me.. I dint wanted this life..couldnt I hav a normal life…

Today I am suffering all bcoz of this fact that m d daughter of a richest businessman. He betrayed me. Gosh.. hw could I trust him.. y was I dat blind… daadima always says dat b away frm such boyz but no this fake world had covered my already blind eyes that I couldn't feel the difference between gud n bad. N here I m suffering bcoz of dat… I hate u.. u bas***d…u moron..huh….il kill him if he comes in front of me again…

I dint knw I was dancing fr hw long.. indian style wid ghungaroos was d most beautiful n mu most fav of all.. I felt I was in different world where I cn share my sorrows wid my dance…

Finally out of breath I stopped to hav a sudden shock.. sum1.. no actually a boy standing in front of me staring at me.. oh god I think so he noticed my tears by now cz I dnt knw fr hw long he's standing der.. plz isne mere aanshu nahi notice kiye ho plzz…

All I could do was…

1st person's POV:-

She juzz took her stuff and started to walk to d door…

I regained my senses n said…

"hie.."

She stopped n looked bak wid a confused look on her face…

"well I knw m standing here like a fool n m sry fr dat.. bt u danced juz dint let me go back.. ur an amazing dancer..n dat to indian style.. I love dem…"

All she muttered was a "THANK YOU"

Aww….!!! She was truly a angel… so elegant n soft voice.. I felt sum1's singing in my ears so beautifully… but here my angel's leaving again…. No hw cn I miss dis chance..

"well I knw itz rude to ask bt may I knw y r u hurt.. I mean I knw dat m a complete stranger to u bt u cn share ur feelings wid a stranger sumtyms itz gud actually.. n ur stress n pain vl also b reduced…."

Did I really say those words…. Man dis girl is driving me crazy coz m being d one who m nt usually… or is dis d real me..???

2nd person's POV:-

I felt gud wen he appreciated my dance…

But his nxt lines put me in complete thinking process…

Should I trust him wen already my trust's broken once..

My heart said.. yeah.. u cn luk at those innocent eyes.. u cn feel he is trustworthy…

I thot dat already kisi galat insaan ko apne life me laake mene bahot badi galti ki lets juzz try wat he says shayad mera man halka ho jaye..

"wel..er…I usually dnt talk to strangers but I feel I cn trust u.. lets go.."

1st persons POV:-

What!!!!!!! she accepted… god m on cloud 9 nw… bt control my boy coz she's in pain u cnt hurt her..

"thnkz.. lets go.."

N v strted to move out of d rehearsal hall..

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so here ends part 2.. hwzzz it n help me out wid dis ss k guyz.. hw u wan it and hw u wan d story to b k guyz plz.. so dis tym also d demands 30 likes plz.. aur vaise spamming bhi allowed he haha... cya tc till den vl miss u all... 😊 😆 😳

Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Amazing update.
It was lovely.
Still u didnt say who this gal nd guy are atre aur kitna suspense degi tu.
thanks for pm.
Update asap.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...loved the way u described their pov's...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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itna chottu kyu... jaldi chahiye next update please... pair pakding...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum updt yaar..
u described der POVs sso well...
plzz pm me...
all d bst fr ur xamz...

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