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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Nice chapter. Hmmm Arnav jealous of Abhi, cool i like him jealous.

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Hehehe...love the jealous Arnav !

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hahahah! no van der vaart hasnt retired he plays for tottenham!! in london! omg i love him loads hes sooo hot and fit!! i met the dude and all! ahaha im going mental now!! see what you doing to be!!

He hasnt retired? Ohhh I thought he did :p Tottenham.. Im so clueless :p HAHAh hot and fit! All those football players are though! The most muscular legs and stomach youll ever see! Awww, I didnt doo that! Your brain did! BLAME IT! I was just an aggravating factor *fakesinnocentsmile!*

Hahaha i cant wait for this week in iss pyaar atleast he blurts it out to her.. and ooh london hehe! he probz gets kidnap and Khushi saves him summat like that. they so unpredictable we just going to have to wait and see and watch it! i hate making predications rather watch it! lol

I just watched it though! It was pretty good! Although the first 10 minutes were just comedy, again. Usually I have nothing against comedy.. but the chick is trying to jump off a building.. just saying.. and even him running towards her ( which he does OH so Sexy-ly/ plus those pants and that shirt, with the belt, im kind of a puddle of goo on the floor. He looked marvellous to say the least!) was comedy style! Only the last 10 minutes they were serious! But all inall, good epi! WATCH IT! :D

haha i love annoying people! it's funLOL anoying my dude is the best, i just love how he gets all annoyed and warns me not to mess with him! but i go and cross the limits lol!

Annoying people just has this... FUN to it. When theyre like UFFF.. and you play all innocent, : oh I hope im not a nuisance and theyre like noo noo not at all, giving you the hands up to NOT STOP! Awww you go girl! Cross all boundaries! Its a good thing!

haha im glad they all love him! at least there wont be any arguments in the house regarding him!!

Im sooo glad for you! Really, fights in households are just a pain in the *ss!

haha yep im a nighter!! i done the updated it's posted! no class tomorrow because its bank holidayy whooopieee but going to revise lol! all day hardcore haha

me too. I like working through the night. Im always too distracted during the day.. and sleepy.. during the day. At night is when I come aliiive ( i think thats a song though..?) Btw. How old are you ( if you dont mind me asking?) :D -- im 20. Bbtw. I commented on your update somewhere around here:P

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: SankaDevi20

Hahahah! no van der vaart hasnt retired he plays for tottenham!! in london! omg i love him loads hes sooo hot and fit!! i met the dude and all! ahaha im going mental now!! see what you doing to be!!

He hasnt retired? Ohhh I thought he did :p Tottenham.. Im so clueless :p HAHAh hot and fit! All those football players are though! The most muscular legs and stomach youll ever see! Awww, I didnt doo that! Your brain did! BLAME IT! I was just an aggravating factor *fakesinnocentsmile!*

Hahaha i cant wait for this week in iss pyaar atleast he blurts it out to her.. and ooh london hehe! he probz gets kidnap and Khushi saves him summat like that. they so unpredictable we just going to have to wait and see and watch it! i hate making predications rather watch it! lol
I just watched it though! It was pretty good! Although the first 10 minutes were just comedy, again. Usually I have nothing against comedy.. but the chick is trying to jump off a building.. just saying.. and even him running towards her ( which he does OH so Sexy-ly/ plus those pants and that shirt, with the belt, im kind of a puddle of goo on the floor. He looked marvellous to say the least!) was comedy style! Only the last 10 minutes they were serious! But all inall, good epi! WATCH IT! :D

haha i love annoying people! it's funLOL anoying my dude is the best, i just love how he gets all annoyed and warns me not to mess with him! but i go and cross the limits lol!

Annoying people just has this... FUN to it. When theyre like UFFF.. and you play all innocent, : oh I hope im not a nuisance and theyre like noo noo not at all, giving you the hands up to NOT STOP! Awww you go girl! Cross all boundaries! Its a good thing!

haha im glad they all love him! at least there wont be any arguments in the house regarding him!!
Im sooo glad for you! Really, fights in households are just a pain in the *ss!
haha yep im a nighter!! i done the updated it's posted! no class tomorrow because its bank holidayy whooopieee but going to revise lol! all day hardcore haha

me too. I like working through the night. Im always too distracted during the day.. and sleepy.. during the day. At night is when I come aliiive ( i think thats a song though..?) Btw. How old are you ( if you dont mind me asking?) :D -- im 20. Bbtw. I commented on your update somewhere around here:P

Lmao!!! I'm not over the fact you thought Van der vaart retired!! I'm in shock! Woman you need to start watching the Premier League again! ahah! It was you that started it all, now i need to start perving on them! haha!!

I just watched it now as well! no man he looks so fit it's unbelievable! The way he ran and jumped! Even though his shoes put me off! Loved it when he was like I don't love Lavanya and don't think I ever did! He was meant to confess there and then! HMph!

And he hugged her and wouldn't let go of her! And then he ruined it by accusing her in the precap! Can't wait till he get's kidnapped and he finds out the truth! What if Shyam takes his fingerprints or summat and transfers all the property then what? I don't want him to become all poor!

Haahaha! I will pester anyone, if they ignore me LOL!

Haha yeah I hatee Family fights, I only witness them on weekends because I'm away at uni! Whooop!

I'm turning 21 next week! My age on here is wrong! lol!

Hahah! I love doing nighters!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: shraddska
Congrats for new thread...🥳 Thank you!

Whoa!!! You are super fast aren't you???
Gosh I don't even have a spot to hide... Haha I wasnt that fast, you were in hiding.

Two updates????😲
So sorry was away for the weekend... Oohhh where did you go

Update 8:
Arnav Khushi Face off was great...
Damn Amilia... When is Arnav gonna dump her???? Hahah he aint dumping her any time soon!!

Boy he was on the verge of making things right...
No wonder Khushi was pissed... who woudlnt...

Update 9:
Too good...
Someone's JEALOUS... Yay... haha! Yep he's jealous because has stolen his friend! And he's hurt he can't be her friend!

Go get rid of you girlfriend first or leave Khushi alone...
Arnav I think is much more messed up than Khushi...

Hahah I will pass that advice on to Arnav!!

Loved it...

Thanks for commenting sweeetie 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Zara-
i'm so glad khushi is feeling better and more in her zone with abhi. really liked it and happy for her. arnav being J about it is amusing but i really hope nothing happens to abhi.
xxx

Thanks for commenting 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: purplekid
Hey Aliya! Absolutely loved the update!

And Karan Tacker! Uff! How hot is he?

*Swoons, and stares off into space dreamily*

And the part where Abhi openly flirts with Khushi, albeit jokingly? I can so imagine Arnav getting pissed off, and Karan in that situation! :)

Please continue soon, and thanks again for you-know-what!

Thank you!! Hehe! Abhi! Everyone loves him already

Hahah! Abhi is a flirt! And he will do it more! but has no bad intentions!

Awww i'm always here to help :D

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SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Hahahaha you know what? if men can do it, we can do it. People like Kim Kardashian, Pamela Anderson, Paris Hilton, dudes go gaga over them. Sooo, can we not peeerv on other.. male specimen ( or female, depends on your preference) Dudes do it, chicks can too!! :D Sooo lets start discussing the thigh muscles now.. grrraauuw HAAHAHAHAHAH

Yeah im such an idiot when it comes to football or soccer or.. something :p I can never keep up :p But youre an avid football fan, I admire you for that. You can kick dudes a**es when it comes to football commentary. Youre like NUH-UH, I watched it and helll no, it wasnt like that and then u can get ur BF to back you up!

Oh my my my...!! Please dont get me started on his attire and the way he looked today. I wanted to jump through the screen and pull him out of it with me on the other side. His poor wife and Khushi are gonna think huh, where did Barun go.. Ill just be here.. KIDNAPPING him hahhaahha see, the upcoming track revolves around me and my unhealthy obsession with him :P But yeah, those pants, the shirt and the belt. DAYUM. I liked the shoes he used to wear better. The black ones with the white sole.. the ones that got mango ( not sangtra, it wasnt available) juice in them... Guess they were ruined.. :p but thooose were way hotter ( im a sucker for those kind of shoes anyway) and they would have looked better with his attire today.

And that panther run hes got going on?!! *sweats* he runs so hot no? HAHAHAHAH see me typing paragraphs and paragraphs analysing every single aspect of this man. Barun, yaar, sorry for objectifying.. but I cannot possibly have another opinion of you than your physical appearance, and thats your fault. Basically, I dont know you personally, again, your fault, if you would have just joined me on the other side of tghe laptop screen here in NL, I would have said things like: Barun is so sweet, so nice.. and the panther run and muscles just add to it.. Now its the other way around, I blame u barun. Stll love you though! xoxo

I loved that part! She was trying to get loose and he hugged her like a 5 year old hugs ice cream! and then OUCH, he pushes her away. and then the swerve that they made with the camera around him, AWESOME! The precap hurt! He again accused her ( kind of) of being a golddigger ( if not, it will come, only to add to the stack of insults) and she was phasaofying his JIJA. He doesnt believe her, but his jijas crap goes down his throat like a bumpless-milk shake! :o

I think when he gets kidnapped, thats when hes gonna find out the truth about Khushi. Just think its weird that hes on the airport on the way to london. And the kidnapping MUST be Shyams idea.. to somehow get the property.. cuz thats all he wants.. and after that he wants to get in Khushis pants.. err salwar.. or those legging things she wears nowadays :p

My biggest fear was him becoming poor! Really. ASR is ASR because of his wealth, his arrogance and power! If thats gone.. whats left? ANd I heard they did this in GHSP? If he loses it for a little bit, i can handle it .. if its forever, hum ro denge!! :o

Haahaha! I will pester anyone, if they ignore me LOL! Haha yeah I hatee Family fights, I only witness them on weekends because I'm away at uni! Whooop!

HAAHAH i love it too :p I can hear my dad right now annoying my mom ( he is addicted to mcflurrys) I want 2! ( he says) my moms like NO; its not good for you. Dad: I dont care, i want 2 of them with Mars chocolate in it. Mom: *sigh* Simran: WHUAHAAHAHHAAHAH

I'm turning 21 next week! My age on here is wrong! lol!

Oh really?/ CONGRATS in advaaance! Youre my age ( for now!) thats cool :p No wonder we have so much to talk about ! :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: SankaDevi20

hahahaha no way! Abhi, the ultimate flirt! Just couldnt resist our little ms. Gupta no? :p and GOOD at ya, love a jealous arnav anytime! Abhi reminds me a little of NK, but then more business like :P And abhi is Karan Tacker.. this is getting goood! hhahahah so anyways.. I think may premonition, if I may, will come true! Perhaps arnav will use two-piece as a jealousy trap for Khushi :p since he is jealous of Abhi anyway! :p yeah.. yeaah.. Im feeling it! I love their banter, but when its business, its business;. But arnav has to get al cocky.. of course!OMG you wrote sh*t.. well you had to censor it too :p Awesome update Aliya! :D

Hahaha! He's going keep flirting openly!

Hahaha! Arnav is way jel cuz He ain't Khushi's buddy anymoree!!

Karan! Is the bomb I love him loads! LOL

He's going to use Amilia we shall see ;)

Hahaha

After our convo i was tempted to write Sh*t haha!

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SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

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'He couldn't just stand there and let Abhi flirt with her, she was his friend and he wasn't going to let him be all touchy feely with her when he was on the premises.' Could someone hand Arnav the dictionary so he can look up 'Friend' ? xD . Boy is he in too deep for his own good! :D

I like this Abhi guy even apart from the fact that he gets Arnav all riled up ;D .So this is the new character you were talking about huh? :DD Yes,my degenerate brain finally figured it out :P

AMAZING UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for the PM :)

Cant wait for M00OOOree :D