..Say It Again..-Kriyaansh OS

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divya_luvarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

lovely upd8
it left me really touchd...
but im happie it stopd at a gud note😛

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Sorry for being late...this is d last part of dis OS.Hope you wil like it n thanks for d continuous support throughout d OS.Read dis part only after reading d previous parts.

Last part feel sad that this has to end but kya kare everything must.

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SILENCE!!!!!SHOCKED!!! were d only response frm every1 around.Her hands were trembling, mayb she dint expect this never even in her dreams.Rey accepting his love infront of evry1 including sharon too.He held her hand in his expressing everything wud be normal.

That would have been the best feeling that u would She would have got it wen he held her securely.

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agirlhasnoname.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Me to speechless * dhen krke giring *

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

S : I never expected dis from you rey!!!!Never!!!!

Kria u may not expect it from him but we know how much he loves u and U'll Realise it too soon.

And that was really a sweet dialog Shings.

Sharon came upto Kriyaansh in her angry avatar making Kriya furious.As she came more upto Rey,kriya was feeling bad for him.She doesnt know how to stop sharon but she had to do something because she dint want to...no!!never want to get in d blossoming friendship of rey n sharon.So she started speaking randomly just to avoid some fight.

That was really sweet of Kria to think that Rey must not get affected cause of her mistake.True love is somewhere expressed wonderfully here.

K : Sharon issme Rey ki galti kuch bhi nahi hain..

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

She tried withdrawing her hand but rey held it firmly not giving her a chance n then gave some fierce looks just to tell her not to try again.

Wow that was the swetest expression and act Rey has done.

Sh:Humari beech mein tum baat nahi kare toh accha hain Kriya..Kyun rey.Pehle hee din mein aise nahi socha rey...u dint even bother to tell me before..meine kithni baar raat ko call ki.Tab bhi nahi bathaya aur calls bhi nahi lift kiya...u r not my rey!!U r changed..

yup Shron asked Rey wth friendship .This is cute.

This is a spl bond that friends share.

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

She said hitting him on d chest.He had to stop her, he released kriya's hand from his n caught sharon's arms from hurting him.Though he did dis to stop sharon, kriya felt not too much but a small creepy feeling in her heart, she realised his small grip on her was effecting dis much.She unknowingly herself has very large impacts on his small actions.Kriya was in no world to listen to d surroundings.She cud clearly tell where his palm made in contact with hers.She slowly lifted her eyelashes from her hand to him, he was hugging sharon.

Yup SHe was so lonely that she felt so bad.Where are her friends???

A pinch of jealousy ran thru her, her heart ached for d place dat was now conquired by Sharon.She wanted to be with him, she wanted to be in dose arms to tell how she was feeling, how she felt dose days.His hand wasnt even free to hold hers n give her some assurance.No one else from d gang came upto her, she felt d loneliness again but she felt bad...!!!!!

Yup this brought tears in my eyes.Sometiime even when all are around us we feel so lonely that the one person we miss takes the place of all.

She felt dat loneliness before too but at dat tym rey wasnt deir by her side but now he was here with her but still she felt d similar thing...lonely!!!!All d feeligs inside her heart formed a layer of tear in her eyes which soon ran down her cheeks.She wiped it away but she cant hide dose continuous ones which were flowing once more.

Yup those are had moments.But were are her friends Cant they see She is breaking from insisde.Y has nt even one come fromard to help her and assure her???

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

awsm di it was an awsm update and an awsm epilogue too

thx for pm

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

"Kriya", swayam shouted from a distance watching her breaking down.

finally Swayam noticed her.True friend ofcourse:)

On hearing Swayam, every1 turned to glare Kriya, she was controlling her actions, rey n sharon parted from each other n Rey went to Kriya, he rubbed her cheeks, he was d only person right behind her for everything.He tried making her normal by calling her but she wasnt in d condition to listen to anything, she took her place in his arms, the place which she was longing to n she belonged.He circled his arms around her for making it tight.

This must have been a really hard moment for Rey.And yup too emotional.Few feelings are hard to express

He felt her tears making his shirt wet but he felt gud, he wanted her to utter out dose hard feelings which he already felt once.His eyes were moist too, it was d tears of happiness, to have his love in arms.

Hmmm Finally they had a sweet moment.Hope the everything is fine now.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

K:Mujhe koi aur nahi chahiye rey..mujhe sirf tum chahiye.

Wow i had a big smile when i read this line.

She was speaking through d hug in an audible tone which was loud enough for d others to listen too around dem.Swayam was coming near dem to comfort Kriya but rey raised his palm to stop him from doing so.

Aww that was so sweet of him to come to sooth her.

He held her like dat while d gang sended off d ppl around except d gang.He felt her rest down in his arms, she was not crying anymore, she was feeling d secureness in his arms.He knows how much Kriya loved her friends.He wanted her to get back d love n care of her friends too.

Aww that was really sweet of Rey to think so.Defines new definition of Love.

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Kriya moved back when she felt a presence of hand on her shoulder, she slowly turned around to notice Swayam who was standing right infront of her holding his ears mumbling sorry all d while.Kriya cudnt help but laugh at his cuteness, they soon went into a friendly hug n d weaklings too gathered for a group hug.

Aww that was so cute act.I loved this scene a lot.

She was in d cloud 9 to get back to her friends n to get back d life she left back once, this became possible only because of one person...rey!!!!She managed to glance at him n told a silent thanks from her heart.Their was a whole hearted smile plastered on their faces, she liked dis new feelings, her place.She wanted to run back to him n settle in his arms forever, she was missing him in a very short span.

I loved the silent thanks part the most.She valued each and every relation she had and Rey was on top of it👏

Swayam who was noticing Kriyaansh LLHH spell all d while signified sharon too n sended her a msg to take d girls to d locker room while he managed d boys very easily.Kriyaansh were left alone for their time.They were standing at a distance often looking at each other.The first word n d first move was d only hectic thing to pass by for dem.

Cute.This had brough a small doubt when Rey had moved first to soothe her Still the first move again had a prob??