..Say It Again..-Kriyaansh OS - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhhaaa sahi yaad dilaya chocopie !!!

Dee we want update by 2morrow...

zyada late mat krna nai toh ur sissy will be gussa wid u...

nd bada update bhi chahiye...


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Posted: 13 years ago

Sissy urs is Fashion n Im mentally fixed.


U cant demand for all d works.


Poor me!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
OHhkkazzz
then...

Tab frm now onwards u have to give lambbbeee updates without cheating... on Fashion vala FF !!!!

fir bhi bolungi to update jaldi...:)

gussa mat hona if main kal comment nai kr paayi...
Kal mein raat ko hi onl9 aa payungi...

Nd ya mere SS nd FF pe unress krna mat bhulna... =P
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Posted: 13 years ago

I wil unres d comments.


I unres'd on ur FF only ss left.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok... It's your fault..tum itni achese kaise likh sakti ho am literally crying... Awesome update 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen will u updte the nxt prt...??

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Posted: 13 years ago


Waiting shings.Plz jaldi kar dho.



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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 3
One part is left it wil b updtd within 2-3 days.
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Rey n Kriya were heading towards the airport.Rey was in d driver seat while Kriya was in d beside seat adjusting her in d corner.He stole her glances kept his driving speed as least as he could.She continuously avoided his looks looking out in d window n by cutting his words whenever he tried to strike a convo.There was a complete silence in d car as well as in d atmosphere, it felt like even d breeze started flowing its powerful essence of life.He waited for her to sleep n so did she after dose brief moments of killer silence.This was d perfect action he wanted for his plan.He changed d route back n raged d car to full speed.He didn't want her to receive a sudden jerk so he placed his arm around her to balance to d changes.He made her lie down on his shoulder n directed his way to a house.He switched off d engine n picked her up in his arms, went to a door n managed to ring a bell.



A lady opened d door after it rang twice or thrice brushing her soft curls at d end n adjusting her broad spectacles.Her mouth fell open at d sight of her daughter n dat too with him.He dint bother to ask her permission he dashed thru d way to an empty room n made her lie down on d bed.

"Kya samjthe hain khud ko??", a voice spoke from behind.

He turned around to notice Smriti with her red-alert eyes.


"Mein nahin sochi ki Kriya kabhi aise kar sakti.Kriya u broke my trust once again.I dint expect dis from you Kriya", she said walking towards dem.


"Enough Aunty.Please hum bahar baat karte hain"



"Kyun??!!Hum yahaan bhi kar sakte hain Reyaansh N dont worry jo kuch bhi kehna hain yahi kaho..kriya waise bhi sogayi n mujhe yeh bhi patha hain ki tum usse..."


"Haa aunty mai usse pyaar karta hu. Aunty aapko sab kuch patha hain phir bhi uske saath aisa kyu kia?", he continued interrupting her.

"Kyu ??Sirf Isliye ki mein nahi chahthi mera beti ek Casanova ko pyaar kare..nahi chahe ki usko ek aise ladka mile jisse pyaar jaise shabd suit nahi karte".

"Aunty mai Kriya se sach mai pyaar karta hu vo mere lie sab kuch hai and kriya ne ye sab aap kelie kia vo aapko hurt nahi karna chahti thi islie vo khud ko hurt kar rahi thi. Kriya ke alava mai kisi ko bhi nahi dekhta"

"Stop it Rey mujhe pata hai maine ye sab experience kia mai in sab se guzar ke ayi hu"

"Aunty mai maanta hu but aapko agar lagta hai mai bhi un jaise log me se hu thn plz punish me kriya ko nahi mai usko aise aur nahi dekh sakta plz aunty"

"Mujhe nahi pata ki tum un logo me se ho ya nahi but iss time pe tum Kriya ko ghar pe drop karne aye ho islie mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe trust kar sakti hu mai tumhe sirf ek hi moka dungi agar mujhe laga ki tum bhi vaise hi ho then u shuld never ever come back in Kriya's life tum khud use chod ke jaoge"

"Thnkq so much aunty kya ab kriya college aa sakti hain??"

"Haa and vo tumse bhi baat kar sakti hai but on one condition"

"Kriya kelie mai kuch bhi karne kelie tayaar hu"

"Kriya kelie tumhe dance chodna padega agar tumhe ye manzoor hai then Kriya ko mai tumse kabhi dur nahi karungi"

Rey on hearing this was shocked,"Kriya ko paane ke liye mujhe dance chodna padega", he kept thinking.

"Kya soch rahe ho tumne kaha tum Kriya kelie kuch bhi karoge ab kya hua?"

"Mujhe Kriya chahiye aunty".

He was in more state to have a talk with her, he swept his legs to d door but stood nearby d door to ask out his mind.

"Aunty kya mein tujhse ek baat pooch sakti hun??"

"Haan Poocho Reyaansh.."

"Aunty tumhe...tumhe problem mujhse hain ya dance se.."

This was a non-responsive question to Smriti.There was silence, heart-provoking silence.Silence spoke in volumes.

"Problem dance se hain toh kabhi bhi solve kar sakte aunty..problem mujhse hain toh mein kuch bhi nahi kar sakti hun..mujhe toh lagta hain ki tumhe sirf aur sirf dance se problem hain Aunty...and mein meri zindagi mein dance tab hee shuru karte jab tum mujhe or kriya donom ko permission dhey n mein tujhse yeh permission bhi le hee rahunga"

She cud still hear d last words he spoke out hammering in her ears before he left d house.She herself broke down on d coach rewinding d question many times in her head just to get a correct answer.


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"Good Morning Beta", smriti spoke out tenderly awakening up Kriya.

Her eyes hardly opened to look at her smiling mom.It was like since ages she saw dat smile back on her face.

"Good Morning Maa..", kriya spoke out showing all her love carrying d same smile.

After a sweet stroking of her hair, she recollected d whole nyt.

"Rey..", she said aloud.

Seeing her mom ryt beside her she closed her mouth with d small palms of her.All her actions brought a plastered smile on smriti's face.She was more confused wid d reaction.

"Kriya time already 7 hochuki hain agar tumhe college jaana hain toh get ready n go..nahi toh its ok.I wont force you."

Another Jhatka.She was receiving all d surprises since d morning.First of all, a smile on her mom's face n dat too after many days n d second one she is allowed to go to college.

"Maa sach mein..!!!"

"Haan kyun nahi jaana.."

"Mom mujhe toh...par tum achanak se mujhe.."

She was lacking d words to complete d sentence.She was happy, a day which turned her life so suddenly, no one wil expect or can expect a day which changes from a dark cloud to a white breeze.It was d reality to be accepted.


Before leaving to college, she prayed her Universeji for d best life as like dis giving her mom a hug.


****


She reached d college in her excited mode.She wanted to do a slow dance to enjoy d moment but she never asked her mom again for dat.She asked n prayed for one thing dat was his happiness which he finds only in her.She closed her eyes feeling d air she had been used to before d few months.Her face had d enough glow to say how much she was desperately waiting for dis day.

She was a bit early to d college, her eyes were continuously searching for each n every1 she talked to, fighted wid n all she missed.She went to d atrium n found d whole gang having a talk deir.She noticed each n every one of dem.They were quite busy to have a glance at her, her eyes found rey, a small smile playing on her lips.Her concentration was shifted when Vishakha yelled, "Kriya".


Now all d eyes were on her, weaklings, dazzlers n also d students around too were gazing her.It made her uneasy.She maintained d calmness n gave a small nod.Vishakha was going to Kriya but Neha held her by d wrist.

Neha:No going Vishakha u r.*2 Kriya*Kyun chali gayi hume bina bathaye kriya ab phir se kyun aayi??Kiska sil thodne ke liye.

It started from Neha n every1 were raising their voices against her.It was 1 for 12.Taani was also deir.They dint give her a chance to tell them anything.She looked for a support n found him glancing at her.They shared a look for a min.

Rey was d first one to make a move towards her.The whole gang expected a sudden blow from him.They stood their waiting for his move.He walked upto her, stood beside her keeping his arm on her shoulder to say wat he meant.His small touch was enough for her to receive all d care n affection she missed all dese days.She looked at him astonished n d whole gang too.


"My Love", he told in a very calm n a cheered tone.


SILENCE!!!!!SHOCKED!!! were d only response frm every1 around.Her hands were trembling, mayb she dint expect this never even in her dreams.Rey accepting his love infront of evry1 including sharon too.He held her hand in his expressing everything wud be normal.

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The most awaited confession scene wil b in d last update.
Hope you liked it.
Good or bad but pls post ur reviews.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u so much for updating this🤗
It was a beautiful update.

Loved it.

Rey nd Smritti convo was Lovely.

Loved each and every bit of the update.
It was very emotional.

Rey last quest to smritti was suprising and shocking too.
And the gangs reaction.I jus love Vish over here.


Rey words made the most beautiful way to comfort her.

Awesome blossom.
Thanks for pm.

Update soon..

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OH GOD!!!
meow di this was really awesome update..
but how can smriti say that??
God i hate her for this!!
and then all standing against kriya
huh... are they really called friends???
and then rey awww
that was so cutteee and adorable when he said My Love ..
awww
Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago

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