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kajolkonna

@kajolkonna

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

u r a awesome writer.
When i thought of a police or cid at first jhions face came into my mind.
But here i can easily imagine arnav as an ACP!
Cont. Soon.

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

u know now i'm really scared of reading ur ff's...

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

nyc update...still not clear whts hpning...thxx fr ur update..

update next part soon...

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Wish u ddnt gv d background of the story..it wud hv been much more interesting to find n undrstnd evrythn at d ryt tym along wid d story..bt mayb u dd it keepin in mind d welfare of ur story..dnt think i ddnt like d cncept..infact i loved it..intersting,dffrnt..d 1st chapter itslf got me hooked n i wud b really lukin 4ward to ur updates..

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

it was awesome! Watchman? Seriously? 😆

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LAKSHMI

@barunslakku

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

waw...it was simply superb dear..loved it so much...very very nice...tooo goood...
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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

brilliant update..the body guard thingy cracked me up!!!...😆😆...i am still guffawing...anyways do updte soon...& as always thanks a ton 4 d pm...would luv to know what happens next...😊
😊

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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

awesome start
thanks for the pm

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jeebita

@jeebita

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Your work is always fabulous. I always wait for your updates. And btw a very good start, sounds very interesting. Loving it.
Please update the next part 'SOON'.
And thanks a zillion times for the PM.