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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Just read all the parts the story is so gripping
What really happened with Geet
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maan's family did something with Geet...for what...to help Sameera in getting Maan...😲

Sameera knew about all this...

Maan got the clue that Geet was really his wife and something drastic happened and his family has some role in it...his family and I don't believe Daadi also in all this...

this story is becoming intense with every update...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
This story seems like thriller.Where every thing is ulta pulta n Maan has no way to place things in right position .Sam ko talli karke half information to le li..agar wo behosh ho rahi thi to paani main ek dubki lagwa deta jo reh gaya hai wo bhi bakk deti...But what she said? Even Maan did wrong to a girl who was her wife.We hav ti wait n waiting eagerly dear.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
this story is making me crazy girl...i absolutely love it...adore it...

pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
sorry for not been able to read this story, just read all the parts now...oh what did maan do to geet and her family😭😭😭

pls update soon pls and sorry for commenting late
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: zaara2212

sorry for not been able to read this story, just read all the parts now...oh what did maan do to geet and her family😭😭😭

pls update soon pls and sorry for commenting late


oh no worry..but missed u and ur coomment..welcome back dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
updating..



i am so so so so so happpyyy😃...i have got so many likes and comment
i feel like partying...so what u all want in ur treat,..just now giving u update..tell me...what u want??😳

thank you so so much for ur lovely comment and likes...
thanks to jass..as always and
for their mind blowing comment...and other to..i hope u like my work??😲


love isha
Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
waiting😊
Edited by dolly10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-6

now what??...the main question which came to my mind...i got nothing from this...only it is getting more and more complicated..she says geet was my wife..means dadi maa was saying truth...no no it is not that simple what it seems to be...why all a putting a fake picture of my life in front of me...she also said me and my family done worst with her...what have we done??...oh god please keep her safe...i still dont know she is alive or not..but my heart says she is...i know this time my heart is rite...

i know from where this game started i will come to know about it from there only HP...if they come to know that i am going there to get info then they will not allow me because they would have known that i came to know about geet...i have to think of another plan...let see what is going outside..i went out side..i heard mum say "maa apne maan ko vahan gaane kyun diya??"..so they are talking about me...i heard dadi maa say "beta hume laga ki geet ki koi nishaani nahi bachi vahan..aur unke kamre ki key tho mera pass he rahati hain.."...i was getting very curious..i heard maa say "maa apko tho pata hain pichli baar kya huin tha...ap ye galti kaise kar sakti hain...agar raj (maan's dad) ko pata chala tho kya hoga??"...i heard dadi maa say "nahi beta raj ko eska baare mein nahi pata chalna chaiya...varna"..i moved down ...and said "varna kya dadi maa??"..i saw maa and dadi's shocked face...i heard dadi maa "varana tufaan agaya ga maan...aur eis baar sab tufaan mein sab bas gaye ga..beta hum apse request karte bhul gaiya ye sab...purani batao ko mat la eya...essa kuch acha nahi hoga"...i said "akhir asa kya huin tha dadi maa??...ki mujhe apne past ke baare mein search karna ka haq nahi hain..kyun mera past mujhse chupaya ja raha hain...kyun"....i heard dadi maa "kyun ki essa apko aur esi parivaar ko sirf takleef he mila gi maan"..i said "nahi dadi maa..esi baar asa nahi hoga...ap logo ne mera accident ke sach mujhe nahi bataya...??"..i saw dadi maa flustrated ...and i heard her "kyunki apke kabhi aciident huin he nahi maan"...i was shocked..i thought...if i hadnt have any accident..then mujhe phele ke kuch yaad kyun nahi...i saw shocked face of dadi maa ..i said "kyun rukk gayi dadi maa...aur bataiya...kya kya jhut bola hain ap sabne mujhse...kya game khel rahe hain mera saath ap...ap tho mujhe meri existence par doubt hain...i hate u all...ap log meri zindagi ko game samjhta hain kya..tho mein apko ya baat bata duin...MY LIFE IS NOT A GAME..GET THAT CLEAR"...i ran to my room...

my life is now fully messed up...when i think this mystery of my life is sloving...i get back to the same place from where i started..again i fell i am totally unknown of this world...these all seem to be stranger...what should i do...where sholud i start from..suddenly i felt a pain in my head...i hate it...i moved to desk...took a pain killer...i sat on my bed...i cant understand who are my own..and who pretend to me mine??...i am again alone...i hate this life...i closed my eyes...i felt the same warmth i know..she again came to my rescue... "ap mera maan nahi ho...agar ap mera maan hota tho yuin apni life to curse nahi karte...ap uske saath khelta..jaise vo apke saath khel rahi hain"..i said "par geet jab mein ek step truth aur tumhare taraf leta huin..i came back to same step from where i started...i felt so alone..i felt like failure..in my own life"...i heard her voice "maan apki humshe yahi problem thi..ap humsha bura side he dekhta ho..acha side dekho"...i realy cant understand her ..i said "means"...i heard her "why u see the bad side of what u known...see the brighter side..and vaise bhi u were never alone i was there for u always"..i smiled..and again she vanished...i remember what she said...what she wanted to convey me..i remember her word "why u see the bad side of what u known...see the brighter side.."...i remember what i came to know today that i never had an accident...she said why i am crying over the fact that i was told a lie...why i didnt look the brighter side..means that i never had an accident...than i should find out..what actually happend with me...you were so right geet..now i will reach my past and you geet...just wait and watch...

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really very big mystery...

whyall are saying lies to him...

what happen to him that he forgets his past...

what is the reason for his condition if he didn't had as accident...

where is Geet...

very mysterious FF...👍🏼

awesome update...

thanx for pm...

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