Stardust #2: OS - Paradise pg 31 (21/01) - Page 14

Excellent part!!! So well written, I can't wait for you to continue!

amazing update

something worth a thought. and something i was just thinking about actually.. while watching the movie 'taken' for the second time..

It's sad to think all of this is happening every second of every day and nobody is doing anything about it,am well aware of the human tracfficking that is going in these country !!!!!!!!!!!! But i really enjoy reading ur ff i wonder what will happen to "aliyah" and as 4 ridhima i hope she did not just got herself in big trouble .

amazing topic Sanaa! felt so bad 4 Aaliyah! i hope she gets justice! cant believe how can people get so cruel! they r such n emotionless b*******! hope Ridz doesnt get in any trouble! cont soon thnx 4 pm

Hey Sanaa...

You might not know me, i rarely comment, and heart felt apologies for that..
But it's due to some personal issues of lack of time...
Plus cell se comment karne mein ghanta lag jata hai, the speed of net i tell you...

Anyways, i am commenting now...
I always love whatever u write..
Your style is really captivating...
The depth with which u write, really enchants me...
You use such good words, and depict the emotions so well...

Behind the Doors
Wow! The title never made me think the story would be so serious...
But the prologue nearly shook me, and your note in the start as well...
You've chosen a really sensitive issue...
I loved the lines where Riddhima thinks if she should risk helping the girl or no, and where she ponders abt the problem of trafficking...

Such issues really force you to think how really lucky you are...
And despite how much you want to help the people who're suffering, you really have no way...

I wish people would realize what wrong they're doing, i really pray...

Looking forward for next chapters...
Thanks for the pms..

pooja

I really am not getting much time since studies are keeping me real busy. But this is amazing... From the concept to your writing <3

Originally posted by: -vrshn-

i am waiting for you to complete this storyy...

Please edit your reserve guys!! I want to read What happens next!
She is not going to update till you edit! Please do edit super duper soon! 😆