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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

aww...

wow shreya...

awesome concept..
first kiss in the rain was very beautiful..:]

many thanks for the pm..

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

that was a real sweet OS

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

WHAT? This is what call crappy 😳

This is AMAZING. The words flow so well and the ending is so beautiful <3 Anything you write is beautiful!

(: I LOVE it. Thanks for the PM Shreya!

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Wow awesome loved it
awww loved their kiss in rain
thanks for pm

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-zozo-

@-zozo-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

dude you have to continue!

brilliant OS!

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

This was beautiful! Loved it!

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Arshi1195

@Arshi1195

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Brilliant! thanks for the PM

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

shreya it was gr8 and lovely i felt so warm in the rain of ur words really beautiful

it felt so happy to read it dear

it explained the emotions of khushi so well

i really enjoyed their kiss and imagined it so well

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Awesome OS. Loved Khushi's monologue was cute. And she missing her days with Payal was sweet sibling love. Arnav missing Khushi pushing him from bed was cute. And the rain kiss was superb. It was superb to have their first kiss in the rain. And then Arnav leaving without any explanation is definitely him. Thanks for the PM>

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