OS: One Step Forward, Two Steps Back

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow...first kiss in the rain...i luved it...

i always like... romance amidst of rain,cool breeze..etc..i loved the OS

in the last line typical ASR behaviour is reloaded...

and as always...he left her confussed in her thoughts...

poor khushi..when will she find answers 4 all her qstion...

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Posted: 13 years ago

if this is crappy then i don't know what good is! 😳

THIS IS EXCELLENT YOU RETARD! i want to see this in the show but of course, humare creatives nahi hai itne achche :'(

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Posted: 13 years ago

Woo !!!
That was an amazing piece of OS Reya !!
Seriously you writers should get out of the habbit of saying what Im writing is retard and stuff !!And seriously I want this happening in the show...
I loved it...Yaa ever since I started watching Khushi introspect so much, I guess Ive got the hang of it too and I find myself questioning a lot !!
But then the whole way you put it up !! Khushi and Arnav's first kiss in the rain!! Hayee that sent me into my dreamland...That was just so perfect, and more some reason I guess Arnav's gonna miss Khushi hugging him even in the show ...

I loved the way you describes when he goes back.I dont know why but that was just amazing...And Khushi always so confused and muddled with her thoughts... Loved the OS🤗

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Marci

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awww that was so cute n romantic!!!

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homebird

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome writing and what an effective stress buster!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

i would LOVE for this awesome OS to continue!!! please update if you can :) and good luck on your exams! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sigh. How would I have liked this to be titled - One step backward, two steps forward...

Anyway, great job! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

f**k, this was so good! i had butterflies and everything!

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-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awww omg THIS WAS SO EFFING CUTE SHREYA! <3

the title totally fits and the concept was beautiful. I love you for writing this! <3 I wish you alll the luck for your exams! KICK SOME BUTTT <3 haha btw I miss you! :( Jaldi jaldi finish your exams and then we can have longgg conversations via scraps! ;) hehehe love youuu! <3

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