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Xaffi

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Posted: 13 years ago

its my first os

hello guys... just came up with thi os

its with recent track...

khushi is in GH and making jalebi wen ASR intrupts her for water...

I HATE YOU

A: Khushi i need glass of water...

K: Turn behind and help yourself i am busy...

just then khushi heard buaji calling her for jalebis...

K: arnav ji please keep an eye on jalebi i am just coming...

A but khushi i dont...

just then khush rushes out of the kitchen and serves jalebis to everyone wen the bride's mother intrupts and thanks khushi

K: No you do not need to thanks me i am just like another daughter who is helping wirth her

sister"s wedding...

just then an old woman intrupts and says: An orphan do not have anything else to say she always say this thing to everyone...

wen khushi heard this she was really hurt and went inside the kitchen...

where arnav had already burned the jalebis and looked at khushi apologetecally...

while khushi is not paying attention and buried in her own thought she moves ASR and starts making jalebi and starts eating burned jalebi ASR trys to stop her but she didnt heard him...

precap:

they reach SV and ASR tells khushi the truth why he married her...

please tell me must i continue??

part 1; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os

part 2; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os

part 3; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os?pn=2

part 4; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os?pn=3

part 5; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os?pn=5

part 6; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os?pn=7

part 7; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os

part 8; https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os

part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os

part 10: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2953676/i-hate-you-os

Edited by Xaffi - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

please do continue... creativity should be encouraged...:)))) 👏

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Xaffi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Here is the second part of I Hate You...

part 2

As arnav was trying to stop khushi just the buaji and amma enter the kitchen to cnsole khushi as she really upset...

Buaji: khushi bitiya why are taking it so seriously just ignore what that lady said...

Amma: yes khushi you know that we all love u alot...

K: but why does she always remind that me that i am orphan...

she said it while sobbing

meanwhile ASR had heard everything and realized what was khushi condition...

after three all guest had left and khushi was ind the room taking off her jewllery and sobbing quietely

just then arnav enter the room and finds out that khushi was crying he goes futher to console khushi but khushi suddenly stands up and acts as if she was not crying...

K:arnav ji you... i am just coming in five minutes after changing my cloth then i will bring milk for you... she rushes out of the room

after five minutes khushi enter the room with glass of milk and handed over to arnav and went to haer side to sleep...

she went to sleep just then arnav comes and lye down by her side...

K: sometimes i think that all these star stories are false...now i dont eveen even believe in fairy tales...

arnav realise that she is talking about her marriage and this made arnav feel more uncomfortable...

khushi did not slept the whole night as she thinking about all the badstufff that had happened to her...

In the morning wen arnav came out of shower he realised that all his cloths were packed just then khushi enter the room smiling and said...

K: we are going bach to SV as i had promised you

A: but khusshi you dont need to do that...

K no buts get ready and come breakfast is ready..

everything is ready... they sat in the car and were half way wen khushi recieved her ammma call..

K: oho ...

A: what happened...

K: you do not remember anything i must make you eat almonds...

A: khushi what are u talking about say it directly...

K: you forgot your laptop at GH

A: what the...

and reversed the car...

K: if are going back why dont we lunch at GH please!!

arnav was happy to see khushi back and agreed to have lunch...

khusi callls her amma and tells her about lungch plan...

they had their lunch and were on their way to SV...

khushi was happy to see everyone again and was about to tell everyone about arnav's trip to GH when arnav stopped her from saying anything meanwhile shyam enters the sitting and seeeing khushi and arnav so happy gets jealous...

Shyam: khushi ji without you the house looked so empty now you are here again everything is normal he said it as if he was flirting with khushi

arnav who was watching this became angry and was about to leane when he heard khushi's reply

K: JIJAJU di was here to accompny you then why were so concerned about me...

anjali started laughing while mamiji just went away while arnav had a feeling that she aws innocent and went away...

Anjali: kushi ji why dont you go get fresh...

when khushi entered the room she realized that the whole room was messed up and arnav was trying to find something

K:arnav ji what happen why are you messing up the room

A: where is the file??

K: file what file arnav ji??

Arnav pushes khushi toward the wall and holds her arm tightly...

K: arnav leave its hurting arnav ji please...

A: and what about the oain you gave me?? hun?

Khushi shock to hear : what pain arnav please leave...

so guys forits enough for today

precape will be the same...

Edited by Zafshan - 13 years ago

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice Start :) 😳

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.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Really good ...but your second part needs to be.edited again..cuz I think.you edited on your mobile..and it comes up with the.codes of the.font ect...:) looking forward to the update

Edited by bobeeta - 13 years ago

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Xaffi

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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry guys for the post that was edit... ia m new commer so not so good with... ut thanks for so much comments and like will continue soon

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sandy_nivren

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome start continue soon

Can u Pm me wen u update?

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Nira khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was amazing!

Plz pm me wen u update!!

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

really nice n promising start.pls do continue

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Xaffi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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well guys here it goes...

part 3

khushi shocked to hear: arnav ji about what pain are u talking about? i would never hurt you knowingly or unknowingly because i lo...

A: shutup khushi!! just tell me where did u kept the file dammit!!

K: i really dont konw about the file!!! leave my hand its hurting me please...

tears started dripping from her eyes...

A: stop acting khushi i know what drama queen you are...

and he losened his grip

khushi was furious to hear that and pushed arnav backward

K: you think i am acting?? you would never understand this because you have never loved anyone...

A: shutup i know very well who you love...

K: enough i dont want to talk anymore...

A: no know you have to hear everything...

do you know the reason i brought you to my home? because i hate you i really want to make regret for what you did to my di...

K: WHAT!! what do you mean!! what did i did to di...

Arnav was about to walk away when khushi hold him by his hand...

K: NO today you have to tell me the reason...

Arnav became very furios and shouted: i know about you and your bloody lover SHYAM...

K: what...whatt do you mean by that??

A: i know that you love him and you want him to leave my di...

K: arnavji how could... i mean i never thought that you would do anything like that... how can i love the person who betrayed me and my family...and i only love you...trust me...

A: oh please khushi i have seen everything you dont need to lie...

Arnav walks out if the room...

khushi very shocked to hear that and strated crying... while arnav went out of the house and he too was feeling regret but the then he remebered about her hug with shyam and he became furios and came back to his room and switched on the laptop... while khushi was downstairs preparing for diner her eyes were filled with tears just then anjali entered the kitchen...

Anjali: khushi ji why are you crying??

k: nothing di...something went inside my eyes

she and anjali both started smilling everything was ready and everyone was on the table for dinner

Anjali: khushi come sit for dinner i have called chotey he is coming...

just the khushi remembered what he said to her...

K: no di i am not feeling hungry i am going to sleep because i am very tired...

When arnav came for dinner and dint find khushi he thought that maybe she is right he is wrong...

khushi now statrted ignoring arnav... and at night she used to sleep early on recliner while in the morning she used to get up early and leave the room before arnav used to get up while arnav thought that maybe he is correct and now khushi is spending more time with shyam...due which arnav was very diturbed and dint liked to talk to any one...

Anjali was very worried about arnav as she realized that he was very disturbed on the other hand mamiji started saying to anjali that khushi is one responsible for it as she trying to keep you away from arnav because she is jealous as you care more about arnav more than she do...

Thus anjali also started suspecting khushi

so its enough for now

Precap: there will be more misunderstanding... shyam will blackmail khushi... on the other hand anjali will be watching arnav and khushi when they will realise it and will start acting as they love each other

Edited by Zafshan - 13 years ago

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