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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Rae Baby!!

Sanjeevani man!! Awesome!

This is so intriguing.. She's a doc, she used to be loved, but now is hated. Hmm.. interesting..

And this is a story of four lives, right? So is the person talking to Arnav not Khushi? Is it Lavanya??

Is that why Khushi.. is shattered, broken??

Who is the fourth person?

I'm hooked onto this one, Rae!! Continue real soon! Will be waiting! :P :D

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

k it was very mysterious...full of suspense...oh my the girl is sooo depressed bout hrself..cant wait for the next part n thnx 4da pm dear...

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Yayy glad that sanjeevani is a backdrop, I really miss that serial😊, but both the prologue and chapter 1 left me confused coz I am sure the lady you have described doesnt match Khushi,yet she is soon to be engaged to Arnav!! Woww it is really interesting and I should pay heed to your note and be patient to find out the rest of the mystery and how sanjeevani and ArHi can possibly be related😊
Loved it,left me wanting to know more👍🏼

Edited by kritz11 - 13 years ago

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Aashifa

@curledup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Hello!

Okay I shall start with my response to the prologue. First off you are an amazing writer did you know that? and second off woah m taking a step back because this was amazing. I love that all of them are so different but so the same. They all seem to show the same pain in aa different scenario. LOVING IT!

Now chapter 1 I love the suspense and mystery the whole way through. The one part I think I absolutely fell for is they way you constructed it all. The splitting in the papragraphs just at the right moment was and is perfect and the bit I love is ' Because they were exquisite'. That was so amazingly written And now the confusuion and suspense is this khushi or ridhima? and why does everyone hate her? no no its ridhima right? no wait its khuhsi? okay I am befuddle but I bet half my chocolate cereal that its ridhima.

Do update soon and do not keep me in suspense. Once again you are an amazibg writer. Also I have sent this comment through my phone sorry but I ws dying to comment and I didnt want to just res and leave it :P

-Aashifa

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#115

That was a really intriguing prologue .👏 Whoever that was I felt like reaching out to poor little tortured soul and give her a hug .👍🏼 Cant wait to read more .

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: ndevi
Tat was a nice prologue cant wait 4 the 1st chapter ur stories r always differ & super. Hope 2 receive PM soon.

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: barunslakku
hey plz pm me too..loved it

Thank You! :)

Please read the note at the top of the PM list on Page 1.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: Krani
Chapter 1 was really interesting! So now I am a bit confused. Was the girl Ridhima or Khushi?
Don't worry about sending me a PM, I'll keep a lookout for this story! :)

But I absolutely loved your attention to detail! It was a treat to read such a great chapter! Looking forward to more :)

Thank You, Krani! :)

I am glad you enjoyed it and am humbled you like my writing style but I cannot answer any questions...my lips, my friend, are sealed. ;) :D

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Smita

@..Smita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#119

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First up,thanks for the pm! And sorry for the late reply.

Again,the like button aint working for me,sorry.

I liked the first chapter. Highly interesting and intriguing. And I always love it when u intersperse lyrics of a song/a poem with the text of ur chapter. Makes it all the more wonderful!

Recieved ur pm for chapter 2. Shall read it tomorrow and comment.

Edited by Smita.M - 13 years ago