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Posted: 13 years ago
wow such a amazing and long beautiful update u left me speechless it was marvelous
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Posted: 13 years ago
2 questions:

do manan have slight idea abt lattie apart from his encounter????

and taang-cutter kyun???????/
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

2 questions:

do manan have slight idea abt lattie apart from his encounter????

and taang-cutter kyun???????/


Sure!

Ans.1 - Nope...Manan has no clue. His encounter with Lattie in Kasauli is his first. He will now get more references of her when he returns to Mumbai, because now he knows her. So he will start noticing Latika's invisible presence among the gang's conversations or pictures or something...[haven't planned that too well yet].
Before this, Lattie had somehow never been discussed much around Swayam...taboo topic for him...made him sad... so Lattie was hardly brought up.
Plus, if you notice, Lattie was never directly a part of the 'gang'. She is mainly Swayam's friend...and that's how she knows the rest. So if Swayam is pained in discussing her, the others would obviously never bring her up much. 😊
Also, Lattie's equation with the group is slightly different here. When Kriya left, she was brought up way more because everyone knew her one-on-one...she mattered equally to the entire group. [and fans!] 😊
Whereas with Lattie...its mainly Swayam who is affected.
Others miss her, but aren't directly affected by her absence. So Manan has never really heard of her before.
And whatever little she might have been talked about, Manan might not have noticed , because he had never been the prying sort of a guy...he kept to himself.
Besides, Kriyaansh are so lost in themselves, toh Lattie ko kya itna discuss karenge 😆 heee


Ans.2 - "Taang-cutter" was just Smriti's way of teasing Rey... in parody of the kind of "relation" they had before...like Rani-Laxmibai/Shirtless wonder and all.
So Smriti just teases him with her I-am-the-dangerous-mom tone...and uses "taang-cutter" as a caricature to "baat-cutter" 😊
Edited by MukTi_is_Meera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all, I'm SOOO darn happy that SWAYAM's BACK!!!!!!!!!Missed him in the 1st 3 updates.But I'm really happy to see that he is holding onto life and has become successful, despite the massive heartbreak that he went through.And Vishakha,Bharat and Nil working for him was a nice touch, seeing that the gang is still together, albeit in pieces.Curious to know though as to where ViHa and Rinni are.
I felt even worse for Swammy after reading the break up from his POV.He was sooo excited to propose to Sharon, and she dashed all his dreams.I have no clue why Swayam has to face this every time.I hope that this time its Sharon who comes running after Swayam for his love and not the other way around.Sharon needs to sometimes take responsibilities for her own mistakes and stop blaming others.
Mattie are getting more adorable with every update.They met like two days ago, and yet they have such a deep understanding of each other.Poor Manan, I can completely understand why doesnt want Lattie to get close to him.How could anyone be SOOO heartless?I hate that Charlie.I almost cried along with Lattie when reading abt Manan & Charlie.I HATE her.She's such a money minded b...🤬.And she has the audacity to say that Manan brought it on himself!!!!!The scene where Lattie comforts Manan was really touching.I have one question though?Why want to kill him?Why not run away with the BF and the money.Why did she have to try and get him killed?
KriYansh were magical.I have no clue how you did it, but you have made their relationship so understanding and mature.As their age increased, their relationship and their characters grew too.Now this is called character development.(Cvs really need to take a page out of your book, seeing that they dont seem to understand 1% of what it means😡)Their bond with Manan is just...WOW!!!!I loved the ReyAn reunion and the way Kria was trying to defend him, like a mother or sister.You have created extremely dynamic relationships.
Hope Lattie comes back soon.I think Swayam needs to have a TALK with both Lattie and Sharon.Waiting for that dhamakedar update😊Loved this update👏Keep rocking!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome awesome and awesome...
this was really amazing update...
i loved it ...
loved it to the core...
i really loved rey's boxers part...
and KG hehehehehe sounds gud..
and manan... so sad about him...
and at last ye miss latika... huh... last second me chali gayi...
lovely update dear!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
good long update i am loving it...

swayam is MALLYA in making...hahaha

charli???/are you sure...any ways

thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DamonCrazy_D3


KriYansh were magical.I have no clue how you did it, but you have made their relationship so understanding and mature.As their age increased, their relationship and their characters grew too.Now this is called character development.(Cvs really need to take a page out of your book, seeing that they dont seem to understand 1% of what it means😡)Their bond with Manan is just...WOW!!!!I loved the ReyAn reunion and the way Kria was trying to defend him, like a mother or sister.You have created extremely dynamic relationships.




Hey Shaz!!! Thaaanks ya...I am so in love with your looong comments...keep waiting for them everytime I update 😊

Ok, first off, ViHa and RiMar...yes, they'll be introduced soon too. Actually D3 me ITNE characters hai na...someone or the other is bound to get missed out no matter how hard I try...and uske upar I am so "intelligent" [sarcastically speaking 😆] that I have added 2 new people 😆😆
But I cant help it...right now I am in love with all 14... they are all my babies 😳 heee
[So I can at some level empathize with Palki here when she says she loves all 12 of her characters on D3 equally, irrespective of their screen-times] 😊😳

Next, Swammy's portion. He's trying to collect the broken pieces and move on somehow. And yes, this time Sharon will have to win him back. I am trying to think of an apt thread of events for this... see, my Swammy has already suffered enough...and at least in my FF, there will be some "Laila"giri at least, instead of Majnugiri all the time in the actual show. Swayam deserves it, does he not? 😊
But I'll keep it as real as I can...relationships me I dont like whimsical dialogues, actions or monologues 😊
But Swayam will be on the "enjoying" end this time for a change.

Coming to Mattie...You know what Shaz...thaaanks a tonn once again...I mean Mattie ke saath I am extra attached [because they are entirely MY experiments]...and which is the reason why I am also extra cautious of how they unfold with each update...I want to keep them also as real as possible...
So the fact that you, and others are liking them, warming up to them...gosh it means the world to me!!! Thanks thanks thanks!

Ok, with Charlie...I was in a dilemma if I should make her character sketch dark grey, or completely black. So I chose the latter for now...because I have never really created an out-and-out "black" character before...so writing those total 70mm masala dialogues and was so much fun! She's your conventional, super-irritating b🤬...and its fun to have someone purely to just bash and lash! 😆
When I was writing the Manan and Charlie's tryst...and that fight sequence [damn its tough to keep a fight sequence real with only words and no music, but I tried 😳]... what can I say...I was moved inside as well. Esp. the Manan-Rey showdown/meltdown had me moist-eyed too.
And Charlie trying to kill him was not exactly intentional. Good that u brought that up. I'll cover it in my coming updates. I had it in mind to make a mention, but missed it between the other stuff I had to cover.
So yes, I'll make up over this explanation as well.

Kriyaansh...well what can I say...I was not really much of a KR pankha before in the show...I liked them, but always found Swaron more interesting [also looove ReYam]...but writing about them has made me fall in love with them now! Kriyaansh have so much potential yaar...what chemistry! So much could have been done with them...so much exploration... but they were just incorporated in this extended lal-la land in D3...only lot of LLHH...no real conversations as such...or anything substantial for that matter. It would have been so much more fun!
So here, I tried to keep them as this one couple, who have been together since college...and have been growing ever since. Their understanding and bonding is at a totally different level...and they play the base line for the other couples as well.
Even the KriyAn relation just had to be as special...to see Kriya react to another male as a brother or best friend...because I wanted to see that side of her.
And thank you sooo much for what u have mentioned above in RED...wow...*flying now* see you after I land from my Cloud 9 🥳😆

Was just planning the Swammy-Lattie reunion roughly in my head...gosh...that will be another Dhamaka for sure...and then Swayam-Sharon...
Ab dekhte hain what God dishes out first in my mind...will write accordingly ⭐️

Thaaanks...and love u!!! 🤗
And once again...Your comments are extremely encouraging and helpful!

Edited by MukTi_is_Meera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey .. just read all the parts of your FF .. this is awesome .. loved it to core ..
Pls PM me ...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MukTi_Is_Meera


Besides, Kriyaansh are so lost in themselves, toh Lattie ko kya itna discuss karenge 😆 heee



agreed...

ek-donon mein kho jaate hain bAS...



accha ek shikayat hai u never reply to my original comments directly..
have to put up alag se question...

pasand nhi hun kya :(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24


NO WAYYY!!! Awww sorry jaan, must have overlooked for some reason... maine kabhi notice nahi kiya tha that I had not been answering your original posts before.. awww... totally love ur comments pagal, and adore u more for taking time out to write to me l!!! 🤗
Accha next time se pakka dhyan rakhungi ok?
Edited by MukTi_is_Meera - 13 years ago

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