Burning in your Love (Parts 14 to 19) - Page 17

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 13 years ago

Section 1 was brilliant.. Intense.. Loved it.. He's making up to her for every little thing so beautifully.. Sigh..

Thanks for the PM.. Will be waiting for section 2 and 3... :)

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rashgirl000

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow🤗. super, mind blowing, amazing, awesome. the best. i'm totally floored after reading the update❤️. oh god. what an update. cant wait for 15-2 and 15-3. pls update soon😊

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-daffodils-

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Posted: 13 years ago

edits later...

i had reserved this post for section 1...i dont know how many times i had gone thru it...i loved his plan to take her to his office...and dance with her wit tri meri in bg...how beautifully u had portraid the meaning of each lyrics...how beautifully he is sensing...each and evry nanoseconds with her...really i have no words...

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it. beautiully written smitar. love u lots. waiting for the next update. pls post soon

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow loved the update

the song was icing on the cake

part 2 n 3 at night wow cant wait

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leanne_1983

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Posted: 13 years ago

WOW,.,It was awesome. So beautiful and sensual. Very nicely written.

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--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

Beautiful Smitha!

Really very seductive and sizzling.. The dance was so romantic. It took my heart!

Thanks for the PM dear!

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anam munir

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow smitta wot an update!!!!

i'm just short ov words to describe it!!!! do continue ASAP!!!

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mon4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

👏

Love you for this weekend dose.

muah...muah...muah..👏

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newmoon2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful update!
thanks for the pm

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