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Posted: 13 years ago
2. romance with full nok jhok , teasing , in short full chatter box type😉 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

😆silent mei mazaa hai...par we love

bak bak geet...
chatter box geet.
.bubbly geet..naughty geet.
.fighting geet..
cursing geet..
this all will be in ur words when geet talks with maan...
so option no 2 obviously...😆😆



di in short u want me to be naughty as i m ?????????????😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok friends,
as u all want 2 option , so now i write according to ur wish , but first geet ko tease karna to banta hain on maan's behalf what say... 😆😆

thanks to all for ur suggestions...
love u all...

RUBY😆😆

p.s next update hmmm let me think... o yaa now... 🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago
great part..i loved their crazines for each other..plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
A big yes to Option two... Romance wid nok jhoks n masti...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 11


Hi friends here is next update... enjoy

After class all went to canteen for their lunch..


Maan - sam wo.. When u were talking with meera and geet ,

what happen why geet is looking so angry??????? Is meera

say anything to her????????

Sam - (teasingly) is Mr.MSK is afraid from his

JAAN?????????

Maan - (pled) plz sam tell me na???????

Sam - nothing maan meera ne aisa kuch nahi kaha which

hurt geet... (teasingly) hann usne bas ye kaha ki ur Mr.Hot

and every girl drool over u and they were dying for ur one

look..aur before sam say anything maan cut her and

Maan - what the hell , she will kill me...

All giggle seeing Mr.MSK afraid...

Pinki - maan be careful from geet...

Maan leave from their making excuse of office...

Dev - are maan suno tho but he already gone...

Maan (while driving to office he thought) - now what was

that meine meera ka kya bigada tha (with baby face) pehle hi

wo mujhse baat nahi karti ab to aur gussa ho jayegi , ab use

kaise manaoga... babaji help me na..(me maan sam ki puri

baat sunlete to tension nahi hota but u uff)

In office maan is gone mad on small small things... both

dad and papaji get worried with maan's behaviour and goes

to him...

Papaji - maan puttar aap tik hain na????????? Aap itna

gussa kyu hain?????????

Maan - kuch nahi papaji mein tik hu bas thoda headache

hain...

Dad- maan bte aap ghar jake rest kijiye.. office

hum dekh lenge tik hain...

Maan - but dad ek important meeting hain wo...

papaji cut him

Papaji - maan health come first aap ghar jaiye aur

reat kijiye

Maan nodded and leave for home ...

In mansion

All present in hall chatting and giggling or i say only

geet is talking other were laughing...

Geet - dadu aap batayiye na dadi ko aapne kaise pataya...

dadi blush...

Dadi - geet chup kar badmaash ...

Beeji - are geet ye savi kya bateygi mein batati hu...

before she finish maan come there

Maan (st with baby face) - miss chatter box sab se baat karti

hain sivaye mere abhi mujhse baat karne k time pe iski cd

mute mode pe chali jayegi.. ye sirf mujhse gussa karna janti

hain...

Maan come to beeji and sit beside her with his head on her

shoulder...

Dadi - maan are u ok bte u look tired???????? What

happen

All family members get worried seeing him like that... and

moms

Mummyji - maan bte aap tik hain na kya hua puttar??????

Mom - hann maan batana aane do sanjay ko mein khabar

leti hu unki... kitna kaam karwate hain mere bache se..

Maan - mom relax dad ne kuch nahi kiya wo bas mujhe

thoda sa headache hain...

Geet eyes get teary after seeing maan's condition

and she leave from their...

Maan (st)- geet mujhse itna gussa ho gayi ki baat

bhi nahi karna chati... babaji plz help me...

Dadu - are puttar kya hua ruk mein doc ko phone

karta hu...

Maan - no need dadu i m fine bas mujhe thoda sona hain...

and leave from there

Maan comes to geet's room and seeing geet crying

bitterly his heart break in millions of pieces.. geet is

in her bed and her head hid in pillow...

Maan come to her and put his hand on his shoulder

geet recognice his touch she turn and hug maan

tightly... maan get confuse with her actions he

thinks geet is angry with him then why she is hug

him...


Geet loosen hug and come out from bed goes to

cupboard for first aid and take balm from it and

come back to maan she sit beside him and put his

head on her lap and start massaging his head

slowly... maan looking her awe... tears are

continuously flow from her eyes... maan lost himself

in her eyes... he slowly put his palm on her face and

rub tears from her eyes... geet blow down and peck

on head his and close his eyes from her palm..

maan drift in sleep.. his head on her lap his face is

hid in her tummy... geet massaging his head and she

also drift into sleep...


In evening when maan wake up geet is sleeping

cuddled up in him he slowly get up and make geet

sleep properly on bed peck on her hair and leave

from there...

Maan in his room pacing here and there... with

mumering

Maan - mein bhi na bilkul pagal hu bina wajah

pareshan ho gaya aur geet ko bhi pareshan kar diya

kitna ro rahi thi wo.. bas aadhi baat suni aur samjh

liya wo gussa hain... puri baat to suni hi nahi mein

ki kya hua tha hann pehle wo jarur agry thi par baad

mein uski aanko mein pyar bhi to tha.. koina kal

sam se puri baat puch lunga aakhir hua kyat ha...

Geet get up with jerk missing maan and get

worried, she pick mr.love in her hand and start

talking...

Geet - dekha mr.love maan aapna bilkul khayal nahi

rakte , itna kaam karne ko kisne kaha hain unse...

tumhe pata hain aaj unhe headache bhi hogaya...

mujhe unhe aisa dekh kar bilkul aacha nahi laga ...

Mr.love - hey babaji maan ko headache huh ain but

ab geet pakka mujhe headache dekar chodegi.. this

two r CRAZY IN LOVE par mujhpe to thoda reham

karo babaji...

geet is nowere to stop and poor mr.love he has to

listen her warna no food😆...

at dinner time in dining table..


all were eating maan and geet two were lost in their

silent talking...

geet (through her eyes)- aapka headache kaisa hain

ab?????

maan blink his eyes as he is ok now...

geet - plz aap stress mat lijiye...

maan smile seeing lots of concerned and love for

him... they both get started with darji's voice..

darji - maan puttar ab aapka headache kaisa hain???????

Maan - mein tik hu darji...

Dadi - hann waise bhi geet ko dekh kar to maan sab kuch

bhool jate hain headache kaise yaad rahega inko..

Dad - so maan ye geet k pass aane ka bahana tha bauji

aapko pata hain isne aaj pura office sar par utha liya tha...

Papaji - are puttar ji aisa tha to bol dete bichare

office staff ko kyu itna dara diya aapne..

When darji tease maan geet look's him hell shocked after

dadi's statement geet and maan both blushing like new

wedded couple...

Mummyji - soniya dekho to jara in dono ko kaise Sharma

rahe hain...

Maan and geet both make baby face to look all and all giggle

seeing their baby face...

Beeji - maan bte jab bachpan mein geet ki maang

mein sindoor bahara tha tab to itna nahi Sharma

rahe the fir ab kyu sharama rahe hain geet stand up

and run from their saying..

Geet -mera khana hogaya mein jati hu..


Maan also run with her saying


Maan - wo mujhe college k notes banana hain mein bhi

chalta hu...


All laugh seeing their condition... at night rano went

maan's room with his incomplete dinner and make

him eat that and soniya went to geet's room...


Next - night maaneet together😉😉(realwala no dream)😆




But 1 condition i want atleast 10 page

comment then i only update next part...😆

and my sadu boss is also on holiday so how

fast u complete pages i will u update that soon🤣

Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab update...
All teasing maaneet was adorable...
When will they talk?
Edited by awesomepooja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
UPDATE AWESEM UPDATE LAST SCENE TEASING



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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update. Thank god, u decided option 2.😆 Yay, mw waiting for their love story to proceed😉. And this part was too cute. Maan havng headache thnkng, Misty is hurt. Geet massaging his head😳, Oye Hoye. Waiting for the night 2gthr.😉. Thnx for pm. Lov ya
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part...
Geet toh rone lagi..bilkul paagal hain..

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