ARHI FF : Maid in Love!Completed EPILOGUE (Pg 127)

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

LOVED IT! thank god you didn't drag the MU and im glad Arnav's got a plan. poor khushi... but hey her pain was relieved with her personal medicine LOL 😉. fab update!

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#512

that was beautiful and hot...

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sRistee

@crazy44

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#513

that was brilliante and very emotional! poor girl must have been shattereD!
and i am glad arnav was with her when she needed him the most!!
the 2nd part was Hot and very beauTiful!
the plot is getting even more interesting now !!
great update dEar.. well written!
thankx 4 the pm :)

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

thx fr pm, thx a lot fr not making us to wait too long, hope u know people will be stalking

liked the way he supported her,made her trust him,stood by her like a pillar,where in she can lean happily, what ever the trouble may be

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.Kryptonite.

@.Kryptonite.

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Hey!

Caught up with this fiction last week, it has my full attention now! :P

I've only read till Chapter 3 so, my comment will include my thoughts only till that part!

To start up with, all your characters have their own ground, they are very neatly sketched!

Arnav! Oh my, a mighty ASR! loved his character involved with actual Business stuff rather than the crappy odd numbered phone call he usually makes in the show! Me likey!

And Yuvi! i have question, who did you have in mind while writing his character??just curious!

The twins are cute, Khushi will have one hell of a time 😆 Adore V & V already! Hope to read more Arnav scenes with them!

Anjali is too much torn apart! will we get an insight into her past as in her husband!?

Khushi! I loved her Background, her conduct and her thoughts! i can relate to her, all i need right now is to start a phase of being independent now!😳

Khushi has Dipi in Delhi, so she has some one to hold onto! Loved the airport bonding scene!

And lastly, ive read till the fall from Balcony.. haha that was easy to imagine! damsel to cause distress!

i couldn't resist to wait and comment till chapter 14!

Your writing is easy to follow and damn interesting!⭐️

Thanx for the PM!

Continue super soon!

🤗🤗

Paru

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: Nici0306
Awesome story and the plot. I m love with this arnav and khushi.. Looking at how things are I m assuming few more parts and the story will end right? That would be so sad.. I have been enjoying this story very much

Yep a few more chapters...then may an epilogue..not sure yet...im gonna miss the story too :)

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: sarra0
Fab update. I cudnt stop chuckling at - "I always felt creeped out when he was near me. Like a snake he always slithered everywhere, even where he was not needed."

I'm glad she was willing to listen about her uncle even if she didn't initially believe which was understandable, yay we will get to c ASR in action, iv been waiting 4that.

Lol yea...i wanted to personify Shyam as a snake somewhere in the story...some things should not be changed :P

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Arati

@RTlicious

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: .Kryptonite.
Hey!
Caught up with this fiction last week, it has my full attention now! :P
I've only read till Chapter 3 so, my comment will include my thoughts only till that part!

To start up with, all your characters have their own ground, they are very neatly sketched!
Arnav! Oh my, a mighty ASR! loved his character involved with actual Business stuff rather than the crappy odd numbered phone call he usually makes in the show! Me likey!

And Yuvi! i have question, who did you have in mind while writing his character??just curious!
The twins are cute, Khushi will have one hell of a time 😆 Adore V & V already! Hope to read more Arnav scenes with them!

Anjali is too much torn apart! will we get an insight into her past as in her husband!?

Khushi! I loved her Background, her conduct and her thoughts! i can relate to her, all i need right now is to start a phase of being independent now!😳
Khushi has Dipi in Delhi, so she has some one to hold onto! Loved the airport bonding scene!

And lastly, ive read till the fall from Balcony.. haha that was easy to imagine! damsel to cause distress!

i couldn't resist to wait and comment till chapter 14!
Your writing is easy to follow and damn interesting!⭐️
Thanx for the PM!
Continue super soon!

🤗🤗
Paru

thanks dear :)

Truly speaking i actually thought of someone like 'Viraat' from Ek hazzaron mein as Yuvi...thought he would make a great yuvi since he's more of a happy go lucky character...:)

You'll get to know all abt Anjali in the nxt chapters...keep reading and thanks for your wonderful comments :)