ArHi FF: Mystical Melancholy chap-15 p.35 [10/10]

I know im insane.

It was storming in my city last night. While watching the streak after streak of lighting, the idea for this supposed FF flashed in my mind. Dunno whether I'll justify this story and make it upto your expectations. This is my first time writing something and so I WOULD LIKE TO GIVE IT MY BEST...TRY !!!

All kinda criticisms i.e., constructive, destructive, positive, negative and all other "tives" you guys can think of are accepted. Im all ears to receive them in the hope they will help me improvise myself. I've given an excerpt below... read it and tell me if i should continue or not...

WARNING

All mystical tales need not be fairytales with a happily ever after. I've pre-warned you guys. So don't bash me in the future if the story is not happy go lucky please...

P.S. : hope the title suggests everything that im gonna percieve in this story...

EXCERPT

He stood still as his world came crashing down upon him as the woman who took his heart as her possession, stood before him having betrayed everyone he cared for.

The skies burned down to the color of ashes as the silent storm brewing in his heart shut off all the love he had ever felt since this in devil in the guise of an innocent angel fell into his arms. His love finally lost to the betrayal he felt, bringing with it the storm which set its course to destroy everything in its path. All was lost. The most powerful wizard of all times finally lost to the masked love of this woman...

Or so he thought...

on after note - I PM MY BUDDIES...

so if u think this is good enough to read and wanna follow with the updates... do buddy me

~~~ sam

CHARACTER SKETCH

WIZARDING WORLD

Great Athithviga (dead) - King of MATANGI, father of Meera, Mandira, Garima and Krithika

Lord Badhra - king of AWHERO

Mandira (dead) - first wife of Badhra

Krithika - queen of AWHERO, Badhra's second wife, Mandira's sister

Maya - daughter of Badhra and Mandira, crown princess of AWHERO

Khushi - daughter of Badhra and Krithika, possesses powers unknown to anyone

Lord Amish - king of WAIRUA

Meera (dead) - queen and wife of Amish, sister of Mandira and Krithika

Lord Arnav - eldest son of Amish and Meera, crown prince of WAIRUA, most powerful wizard ever existed.

Earl Adithya - second son of Amish and Meera

Earl Akash - third son of Amish and Meera

Anjali - last and only daughter of Amish and Meera

Lord Shashi - current king of MATANGI

Garima - current queen of MATANGI, wife of Shashi, sister of Meera, Mandira and Krithika

Payal - daughter of Shashi and Garima

VAMPIRE WORLD

King Siddharth - king of TAPU, Khushi's best friend and loves her like a sister

Earl Shyamnath - younger brother of Siddhartha

There are four mystical kingdoms mentioned in this FF.

MATANGI - kingdom of winds

AWHERO - kingdom of hope

WAIRUA - kingdom of spirit

TAPU - kingdom of the forbidden

P.S.

All the kingdom names are in Maori language.

PLS TELL ME WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR CLOSE THE TOPIC...

Ok now this sounds super intresting i mean a never read before types, completely hooked to it, btw whats Maori is it an Indian Language n i quite love super natural things, i mean the supernatural world excites me a lot n vampires they r so daravna types n siddhartha is Khushis best friend omg omg, luving that n how did Khushi destroy arnavs world

Originally posted by: niknavyu

Ok now this sounds super intresting i mean a never read before types, completely hooked to it, btw whats Maori is it an Indian Language n i quite love super natural things, i mean the supernatural world excites me a lot n vampires they r so daravna types n siddhartha is Khushis best friend omg omg, luving that n how did Khushi destroy arnavs world

Btw are u a south indian

Hi Sam!

sounds super intresting please do continue and plz plz plz pm me😊👏

Sammy!! my Monkey girl!!! 🤗
I loved it!!

Amazing concept!!

I hope to read an update on this sooner!! :-D

Thanks for the pm... :-D :-D <3

*edited*

Nee Tamil a chellam?? :) :)

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud

glad u liked it nikki... and yes im from chennai, tn... south india

maori's are tribal people from new zealand... i love their culture which is rich in mythology and crafts...

thats why included it here...

u'll see... how arnav thinks khushi destroyed his world...

i'll reveal it as the story progresses...

right now sit tight n enjoy it...

~~~ sam

thught so