hey m a new reader..well to begin wid...u knw u r an awesome writer wen someone starts readin dis at 12.30 in the nite n continues readin it non stop, till its finished...well yeah, i did that last nite...i was up til almost 4 readin d whole ff..BOTH THE THREADS 😛 so to begin wid..u already knw how well u write...n i read quite a lot of ppl sayin dat u r the horror queen..well i agree...every lil thing scared me lyk anythin, givin me d creeps.,..e1 wen u said isme horror nahi hain, i was scared of the lil incidents...thinkin kahi se yeh IT wapis na a jaye ya koi gadnad na ho jaye...
all the horror scenes u hav written hav left me wid goosebumps(koi horror scenes nahi bhi honge frm the one's m gonna mention but main vaise bhi fattu hun😆 ) the first wer aashnaa ko dat person says i need dem, kriya's accident, sharon seein d evil smile wala kriya(dis was one of d best for me..i cld actually imagine sharon's state den), kriya banging into someone, dat old lady, krisha falling, terrace pe agn kriya slips as someone puts her leg...dat old lady tellin rey wer kriya is lying in col...the entire coffee cup wala incident...kriya forgettin stuff after comin out of the store room...IT Followin every1...sharon seein dat accident in mirror..swayam missin dat reflection smilin at him wen he talks to the mirror, or rather warns it...dat creepy chic standin next to sharon at the restaurant n the way she turns her head, n the entire saath din ka logic...rey in the store room(i was prayin mere rey ko kuch na ho😆 ), the way he see's kriya...ji thi hi nahi...kriya seein d lil kids who dissapper n agn come showin her 7, n swayam gettin all signs of saath...all of it was jus WOW... i am sure agar uss tym ko raat mein mere room mein ata i would hav started screamin at the top of my lungs...yeah, i was dat scared...
e1 wen kriya n sharon were in the dark room alone i was lyk nooo..someone help dem...i was relieved wen i read d later updates ki woh dusre team ka hi hain n it wasnt an encounter again...(hopefully)...
going by the last update, i was glad darne ka kuch nahi tha... 😆 but ofcourse i am waitin for all of them to encounter more such stuff...n d dance was awww...u described the steps really well...co-incidence toh dekho...dat weirdo told sharon to send ornella bak n she is actually goin apne aap..
till now i havent been dis scared..not e1 wen i hav watched a horror movie...i hav talked a lot...do cont soon...
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