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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update poppy loved it bt bahot jald vapis tune suspense create kar dala ab jaldi update kar ok... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
heiii dat was sooo osummm...looovvveeeddd iittt !!!!! :D:D:D:D:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
plsss upppdattteee sooon
n do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poppyyy!!! Please yaar increase your speed! Bohot ho chuka! Update karde chup chap tu!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sry sry sry i knw ye sry bohot kum hai but plz guys sacchi me stuck with things here i ll surely make it fast thoda aur time lagega for d update i m not regular these days na i ll be active very soon n ya with updates promise really sorry...
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hey people haa haa finally sorry bohot late kar dia stuck up with some thing ab bakwaas nahi karungi chalo padho...


Recap: Kriyaansh practice and Swaron in clg a small talk with Natasha Sharon ko kisine dhamki dia tha and Sharon after coming home asks Swayam about how he knows Natasha


Sw : vo.. actually Natasha humare opposite team ki member hai yaad hai uss din jab hum sab canteen mai the tum kisi ladki ke saath baat karte chali gai thi tab unke team members aye the kuch aise hi selection ke baare mai kuch baat hua tha.

Sh : Bus itna hi hua??

Sw : Haa and waise tum Natasha ko dekh ke itni tensed kyu ho gayi thi??

Sh : *thinking* nahi ise batana teek nahi hoga har baar Kriya ke baare mai hi last time bhi batake maine bohot badi galti kia tha iss baar sab soch samajh ke bataungi

Sw : Sharon kya hua aaj kaha kho gayi ho??

Sh : Huh kuch nahi chalo andar chalte hai sab dhoond rahe honge *saying this she starts moving*

Sw : par Sharon... *Sharon n Swayam both stop seeing Ornella*

Or : Um did i disturb u both??

Sw : No not at all.

Swayam and Ornella were talking Sharon grabbed her chance and rushed inside before they could stop her.

Or : Is anything wrong??

Sw : *slowly* Don't know..

Or : What??

Sw : No nothing. Swayam wanted to divert the topic.

Sw : Ornella RDX sir wants to meet Rey n Kriya for discussing about that election thing so me n Sharon will be for tomorrow's practice

Or : I am cool with itdid u inform them??

Sw : Not yet let's go in.

They go in and join Kriyaansh who were cleaning the table Swayam was looking around to find Sharon he could not find her so concluded that she might be in her room.

Sw : Rey vo RDX sir ne tumhe aur Kriya ko kal clg bulaya hai for discussing something about elections.

Kriyaansh in union : Hmm.. ok we will... (aur kya inka LLHH start hone hi vala tha but Ornella started coughing aur LLHH break ho gaya)

Kr : Ok yaha ka kaam hogaya hai to mai jaa rahi hu.

Or : *in teasing tone* Ok byeee...

Guys yaha ab do locations honge so pehle Krisha ka bata deti hu then i ll join it to Reyam nd Ornella ok

Scene Krisha's room Kriya enters and finds Sharon sitting on the bed legs folded lost in her thoughts

Kr : Sharon kya hua?? *No response*

Kriya went near her and placed her hand on her shoulder

Sh : Haa...

Kr : Kya hua Sharon kaha kho gayi ho??

Sh : Kuch nahi vo mujhe neend aa raha hai so rahi hu.

Sharon said this took the blanket covered herself and slept Kriya was surprised what happened to her she thought something might have happened in the clg she came out to ask Swayam.

Scene shifting to hall Reyam n Ornella were sitting Reyam on sofa n Ornella facing them (guys Kriya ab bahar aa gayi hai so yaha se vo sab sunegi)

Sw : Rey aaj ka practice kaisa tha??

Kriya recalls all the things which happened Rey too remembers all the things and with a lite blush.

Rey : Hmm accha tha infact bohot accha tha.

Or : Um can i know the reason plz.

Rey : vo... vo Ornella ur training is fab and the warm up nd all everything was superb nd how was my dance??

Sw : Dance?? Ornella u said this is just a practice session??

Or : Guys to be frank u all are flexible nd u have music sense and u can dance to any beat its just that u need a person to bring this out from u guys u all are born to dance and what ever happened today with Kriya i m...

Sw : Rey Kriya ko kya hua??

Rey : vo... Swayam dance...

Sw : Ohh she is fine na??

Or : Ya perfectly but she is a phenomenal dancer from childhood i can never forget her dance.

Reyam : Yup, she's fab.

Or : But she should get to know that she is a superb dancer and that too soon before ur selections don't know what to do... after that accident.

Sw : Ornella plz don't remind me all those i m sure we will get our dancing Kriya back.

Kriya was hearing all this hiding near her room she could not believe what ever she heard she is a good dancer but how she only knows that she met an accident in her childhood thinking about all that she went back to her room and slept lost in her thoughts.

Scene shifting back to hall near Reyam and Ornella

Or : Hey leave about it lets go to rehearsal hall and have some fun.

Reyam : Fun??

Or : yup come on.

However she finally drags them both to rehearsal hall and gives some tips about tango, salsa and some other dance forms and showed some postures and explained the Technic for lifts Reyam were learning, dancing and having fun their practice continued till 8 pm. They came back and found that Krisha were still sleeping so they decided to prepare dinner for all of them. As swayam knew that Sharon was tensed about something he was feeling much restless to talk to her Ornella could observe all this but she too was helpless as she didn't know what he was thinking about finally when they completed all their work they started arranging the dining table where as Ornella went to wake up Krisha.

Krisha's room :

Or : Kriya, Sharon wake up dinner is ready.

Kr : Ornella i am a bit sleepy can i skip my dinner for today please.

Or : No u cant sleep empty stomach with get up.

Ornella goes near Sharon and shakes her Sharon jerked up with fear her face could tell that she had some terrible dream Sharon started breathing hard Ornella handed her some water.

Or : Sharon r u ok??

Sh : Ya.. ya i am.

kr : come lets go for dinner.

Sh : I am not hungry now but i will eat before i sleep please Ornella... please Kriya...

They left her and joind Reyam all of them completed their dinner and slept off. At around 11pm Sharon could sleep no more as she was asleep since evening she got up and without making any sound, came out of the room and directly went up to terrace, climbed up the tank and sat at its edge and recollected all that happened in the clg about Natasha and the one who attacked her.

Sh : *self talks* vo job hi tha use pata hai ki Ornella hume train karne ayi hai nd agar use pata hai then it mean ki vo hume observe kar raha hai but kon ho sakta hai and uska Kriya ke saath kya dushmani hai kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai sirf Kriya hi kyu??

*Thinking* Kriya ko pehle se hi kitne problems hai vo apna childhood bhool gayi uss accident ke baad and ab dance karne se problem hota hai and jo mirror me mujhe dikha the accident thing aur ab vo dhamki pata nahi ye sab kyu ho raha hai aur Kriya se hi inki dushmani kyu hai and mai ye swayam se nahi bata sakti Rey se to bilkul bhi nahi bata sakti hu iss baar mai khood hadle karungi but mai kya karu haa pehle let me know ki ye Natasha aise kyu behave kar rahi hai ki vo mujhe nahi jaantii think ye jaan ne se sab apne aap pata chal jaega.

Voice : Sharon!!!!

Sh : Swayam tum yaha??

Sw : I think mujhe poochna chahie iss time pe yaha akele koi problem??

Sh : Hmm nothing tum iss time pe awake??

Sw : Tum batao tumhe kya hua tab se tensed lag rahi ho and dinner bhi nahi kia ab iss time pe terrace pe??

Sh : Idhar aao aur baito.

Swayam goes and sits beside her'

Sw : ab batao.

Sh : Swayam vo Natasha maine use pehle kahi dekha tha I don't remember and I think she knows me but aaj aise behave kar rahi thi ki she doesn't know mw islie soch rahi thi ki maine Natasha ko pehle hi dekha tha ya nahi.

Sw : Hmm son't know ho bhi sakta hai nahi bhi ho sakta hai and iss baat ko leke tum tensed thi waah unbelievable.

Sh : Islie kuch bol nahi rahi thi mai I know tum aise hi react karoge.

Sw : *raising his eyebrow* Tum mujhse share karne kelie soch rahi thi??

Sh : Hmm'

Sw : Thnkq Sharon but Rey ko bhi to bata sakti thi na u would feel better.

Sharon was stunned by his question and started thinking humesha mai Swayam se hi kyu share karne ka sochti hu and jab bhi mujhe kisi se baat karna hai to swayam hi kyu aata hai??

Sw : Sharon kya hua??

Sh : Kuch nahi vo Rey se subah se baat nahi kia hai na islie.

Guys yah ape bas khatam aage ka imagine karlo kuch bhi coz ab Kriyaansh ke paas bhi to jaana hai.

Kriya too was not able to sleep she woke and saw that Sharon was not in the room before she could react on that the convo between Reyam and Ornella was flashing in her mind it kept repeating in her mind Or : Kriya is a phenomenal dancer. Thinking about it she came out of her room and went to rehearsal hall unknowingly she kept walking she opened the door went and stood in the middle looking at her reflection on the mirror she tried hard to recollect her childhood memories but she could not it happened with her at home too but her mom used to say that some kids forget their childhood (guys ye sach hai I too don't remember anything till 10 years mujhe bachpan ke dost tak yaad nahi hai but I think mujhe koi accident nahi hua)she blindly believed it as her mom said that to her and now when she knew the actual reason she is still not able to recollect all that

Kriya : *self talk* kyu??? Kyu mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai kyu jab bhi mai dance karne kelie khadi hoti hu but kar nahi paati hu agar aise hi hoga then selections me sab mere vajah se haar jaenge mai kya karu.

She breaks down on her knees Kyu Universji aisa kyu ho raha hai kuch karo taaki mai bhi dance kar pau sab kitna expect kar rahe hai mai acchi dancer mai to music sunke apne haath pau bhi nahi hila paa rahi hu mai kya karu?? She got up and straightened herself mujhe dance karna hai khud kelie na sahi apne friends kelie jo ye believe karte hai ki mai accha dance karti hu she went and switched on the player song "ore piya" she stood in the middle closed her eyes tried to feel the music and let her body to move as it want but it again happened she could not move it was like something was resisting her she tried lifting her hand but could not she collapsed on her knees and started crying hard she felt someone touch her she wiped her tears and turned to see it was Rey.

Rey : Kriya kya hua??

Kr : kuch nahi tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??

Rey : Vo mai'

Kr : Rey aap jao yaha se.

Rey : Kriya chalo tum bhi chalo raat kaafi ho chukka hai.

Kr : Rey mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karna hai aap jao yaha se.

Rey : Kriya mai ne tumhari baate sun lia hai mujhe pata hai ki tumne suna tha jo mai swayam aur Ornella baat kar rahe the but Kriya'

Kr : Rey please aap sab ko pata tha fir bhi itne saalo se chupa rahe the hum bus naam ke friends hai na..

Rey : Kriya please meri baat suno doctors ne hume kaha tha ki ye sab tumhe khud se yaad ana chahie islie hum chup the warna'.

Kr : Rey mujhe aur kuch nahi sun na hai aaj vo sab aapke saamne hua fir bhi aapko nahi laga ki mujhe batana chahie mai aur kya bolu mera bhai mere friends yaha tak ki meri mom ne bhi mujhse chupaya islie mujhe bachpan se accidents se dar tha mujhe kisi se baat nahi karna hai please.

Rey : Kriya I understand tumhara gussa hona teek hai but humare side se bhi socho hum sab ko tum bohot pasand ho islie humne aise kia hai.

Kr : Rey please mujhe thodi time tak akele chod do mujhe abhi kisi se baat nahi karna hai.

Rey : Kriya mai samjh sakta hu but..

Kr : Please Rey.

Rey could not speak anything he was silent he felt his heart aching he was feeling as if he lost something precious tears started forming in his eyes he turned to the other side while Kriya too turned to the other side.

Precap : Kriyaansh romantic dance

Guys I am really sorry abhi mai likhne ke mood me bilkul nahi hu maine socha tha aage bhi continue karu but I am really sorry after so many days mai sirf itna hi likh payi

Note : To one of my besty in IF mai tumhara naam mention nahi karungi dnt wry but I m really sorry I know maine galti ki hai danto mujhe but please speak to me u too know mujhe tum kitni pasand ho bhale hi hum utna baat nahi kar pate hai but truly I m really sorry please forgive me and I promise it will never ever repeat again dekho mera bhi haal Rey ke jaise hi hai please forgive me maine galti zaroor ki hai uskelie jitna chahe utna danto mujhe tum meri bohot acchi friend ho islie mujhse naraaz ho nd jab tak tum nahi maanogi mai ye note likhti hih rahungi I m really sorry

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

:Res:

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My Poppy is back wid a bang!!

First one to comment...yupiee!!!!

Natasha is so interesting..

Amazing Update Poppy..

Sharon lost in some other world..

Swayam worried about her..

Silent in Ornella's presence..

Kriyaansh working together!!

Ornella n boys practising..

They were speaking about Kria and Kriya heard them..

Hope she doesnt stress herself much..

They cooked dinner for the girls n woke them up.

Sharon sitting alone and lost in her thoughts and Swayam found her.

Kriya sleepless...feeling bad for her.

Good that Rey came at the right moment.

Kriya was hurt that Rey didnt tell her until then.

He tried saying her but she didnt listen.

Both were silent.

Awesome Precap..

Me waiting..

And Poppy's close friend forgive her and talk to her na pls..

Love u tons Poppy<333

May u give lots of updates...

and I will get the chance to comment 1st!!

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey bhagwaan kitni fast ho tum meow maine PM bhejna bhi shuru nahi kia ab tak
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey poppy
welcum back 🤗 🤗
missed u lyk hell
glad ur back nd thank u fr updating
noe cumin to the updte
its awesum as always
luvd each and evry part of it
sharon lost in her own world thinking she shuld tell swayum or no??? i guess she shuld tell na nd woh har baat swayum se hi kyun share karti hai rey se kyun nai kch toh hai boss 😉
Natasha quite mysterious hmmm...
swayum worried for sharon
kriya heard bout her childhood accident,, poor she hope woh zyada stress na le 😒
her mom tld her that she forget her childhood to hide her accident actually meko bhi mera bachpan yaad nai hai 😆 srsly i dnt remember exactly until the age of 9.
kriya gussa with evrybdy its right on her side nd wat evrybdy did is asol right on their side
sharon nd kriya nt able to sleep
luvd sharon's convo on terrace 😊
kriya trying to dance bt can't she nt prepared yet hope she recovers soon
rey consoling her
awwieee
intersting precap - kriyansh romantic dance yuppiee
updte soon '

and poppy's friend who ever is gussa on her plzz usse maaf kardo, she's relle very nyc nd sweet plz plz dnt be angry on her maaf kardo


Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part 😃...
Sahi baat hai Sharon Rey ke bajae Swayam se hi kyun baat karti hai 😉...
Haye Kria crying 😭...
Loved it ❤️...
Waiting for Kriyansh's Romantic Dance 😳...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
Edited by Roxxy47 - 13 years ago

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