ArHi OS ~ Jalebi ~ThankYou for BestOSofWeek Pg18 - Page 3

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42

res!!! :D :D

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Gah!! Now I'm doomed!! I will never find a husband who can measure up to the images of me and you have on our minds!!

AND MY MOM WANTS ME TO GET MARRIED WITHIN THIS YEAR!!! 😲

NAHIII. . . . . . . . . 😲

Okay, enough drama!! 😆

I loved how Arnav got concerned for Payal, and his concern increased when he came to know it was about Khushi!!

And the next part where he asked for jalebis was 😭
Poor thing!! Can't even eat a sweet without fainting!!

And then Khushi preparing jalebis using artificial sweeteners??!!

Kaash aise hi woh apna dimaag show main bhi istemaal karti!! 😛 😆

(Yes, I asked your help in typing Hindi comment for your own OS!! I'm adorable, no??😳 😃)

Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

RES !!
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My platter of Rae's OSs/SSs is overflowing with so much sweetness I will seriously get diabetes !!
Man this was such a heart-warming OS I sooo wannna hug you and so here you go the only gift I can give you🤗
You write amazing stuff and Im sure you knw that !!And I just loved the way you potrayed Arnav's helplessness you showed hear .Just because of the small mere fact that his wife always wanted to feed her hubby jalebi apne haath se he does all this and doesnt even say anything ??
Welll one thing I was expecting a different end, probably Khushi getting to know and her telling him that she has already fed him jalebi once when he fainted if he remembered !!
But its kay !! I loved this totally happy from the heart Khushi way tooo much !!And the way she starts getting frantic when he asks for her to feed him jalebi getting all concerned for his health , that was this one moment when I lost my heart again to those two and ofcourse to the amazing writer like you !!
Im just so glad I could read and comment this before you sent me a PM so its one credit point to me😆...Just joking ...
I loved this OS a looottt Thanks for writing it Rae

Originally posted by: RatiKoni

It was so cute and romantic 😍

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

"Khush" 😍

These two are so cute!! I love this sort of fluff!! :D It makes my insides gooey with happiness! :P

Oh and loved reading Payal's POV. :)

Its a little out of context but I was reminded of that day when Khushi unknowingly makes a jalebi shaped to spell Arnav on the show and gulped it down so quickly she almost burnt her tongue! I want her to share that with him some day. :D

Great stuff Rae! :)

Originally posted by: zohakhan59

awww such a sweet nick name arnav has given to khushi which is *khush * 😍
os was so cute nd romantic,arnav is so sweet 😍

Originally posted by: swati-89

That was so beautifully sweet...so simple and yet so sweet. Loved it. Such a simple wish but so alluring. Thanks to Payal (at least u made her do something otherwise our show's payal is there as a punching bag for her MIL and now Bubbly) Loved it!

p.s. loved the nickname...i couldnt stop my mind from imagining Barun say 'Khush' in his deep voice ...aaahhh girl what a dreamy sound it will be!!!!!😳😉

Originally posted by: -bansi-

This was cute and sweet...just like the jalebis...!!

Tho nothing like this is on the show...i loved this piece of work...made me happy...😊

Loved it..!

Originally posted by: Poonam786

What an adorable OS.. I loved the bit where she blows a kiss into the batter.. So cute.. Loved it! :)