ArHi OS ~ Jalebi ~ThankYou for BestOSofWeek Pg18

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awww that was so sweet just like khushi's jalebi.

Khush is such a cute nick name & I love the way you use it in all you OS's.

It was beautifully written & for the first time I liked Payal too.

Keep writing.

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CravingKhana

@CravingKhana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

oh that was so so so sweet...sweeter than jilebi...

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

What an adorable OS.. I loved the bit where she blows a kiss into the batter.. So cute.. Loved it! :)

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Sexy Sobti

@--BSI-FaNaTic--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Edit later

Rae this was just beautiful... I loved it...

Edited by BarunForever - 13 years ago

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awww..U know!! I love the Arnav you create in dat masterbrain of yours!!

hes so tender n cute!! n always make me go 'Awww'!!

Thanks a lot to Payalia!! she did some useful thing!!

n Thanks for the PM bud :)

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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

That's it...I'm JEALOUS!

Take out that Arnav from the story and send him to me, NOW!

** makes faces and throws tantrums **

Gosh, did you put the OS into Khushi's Jalebi syrup after writing? This is so overly sweet, I'm coming to sue you if I get diabetes ( I can't live without sweets...🤪)

That's a brilliant concept. To be honest, even I wondered how Khushi's wish to feed her hubby Jalebis would come true, given that he's got diabetes. But I was satisfied when she fed him Jalebi in the show, while he fainted. But I guess, I shouldn't have been. I want something like that in the show...Amazing writing!

Now, bring force and send petition to CVs to make Arnav call Khushi as Khush, Barun says Khushi gorgeously, I bet Khush would sound even better...😍