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Posted: 13 years ago
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book a ticket on the traing for me then ekta!! i am soo up for this.. that guys needs some serious killing
gosh hope sanz talk some sense into his over blown head !!!! ughh !!
i cant belive that guy is !!!

ekta lets talk abt sth else varna we bth wil spontaneously combust !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey have u read this os by the way???
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2854544
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Author's note:- hey fellas here is the second part. its longer then the first one. hope u wont mind. sorry for updating it after half a week. tried updating earlier bt something or the other kept coming up.. thanks guys for supporting me. this means loads. hope u guys wont be dissapionted with this part:)
do comment or criticize:)
love
dolly
xoxo

BROKEN

CHAPTER 2

Sam pls stop for a second atleast. You are not making any sense. And there is too much static .. wait we are about to reach the motel in five minutes ..

Jo clicked of her set and turned to face her mother!

Sam thinks something happened to dean . he is freaking out.. tell me mum why the hell does

Dean get almost iced everytime??

Hmm never gave it much thought. Guess he has hidden talents for getting kicked in the ass.

That's the motel n sam is out ..mum try to calm him down

Will try!!

But Ellen looked at the young Winchester in front of her hopelessly. If dean was really in danger , no one in the world right now could make sam calm down .this was the Winchester way afterall. One going down the slope will unintentionally drag the other down too.

Jo hadn't even stoped the SUV properly when sam was already sitting inside the car

Whoa whoa tiger slow up. U will get urself hurt.

Jo I got the map ,dean mentioned devil's street . and its about few miles right of here and then he said a glass factory , but no factory mentioned on the street here.

Are u sure sam he said glass factory?? Telephone signals around here have been pretty crapped up since last night.

Yeah yeah I am..

(sam took a deep breath , his headache getting worse by every second.. he didn't have time for another of those dam visions not now )

Sam u alright kid??

Yeah.. yeah Ellen I am fine just , lets just reach this street n then we can search for glass factory or any other factory in its surrounding!!

Ok then . sit tight. Don't worry sam , dean will be fine he always makes it. U know this isn't the first time he got jumped? Right he'll sick them up boy

Yeah Ellen sure..

Sam rested his head back n massaged his temple.. his headache was notching up. Dean didn't knew about his visions . they had started up since Lucifer came to his dream and told him that sam was his vessel.. ever since then he had been having visions of Lucifer trying to convince him to say the "big yes" or just mock him for his vulnerability.

He hadn't told dean anything about this,n sam wasn't even sure what the reason was , but he knew dean would be really pissed when he came to know. May be that's why sam hadn't told dean, coz he feared dean's reaction on all this . and they were just starting to rebuild their relationship!! Sam didn't want to do anything to even remotely destroy that building up process.

"kid we are here at the street and its surrounded by oak trees and wilderness. There is no glass factory here son !!"

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Everything was blurred into shades of grey and white , the voices so many around him were muffled. He couldn't make any sense. And his eyes felt so heavy soo heavy .. he needed to sleep may be he was just sick and a gudnight's rest would do him good. His upper arms were aching badly too, it felt as if he had been strung up from ceiling for too long.. it felt as if he was still strung up!! But that wasn't the worst part … his next hurted something terrible.. it felt as if someone of something was taking big chunks out of it right now..but dean couldn't feel the teeth , or anything else .. may be these were just some phantom pains.. triggered by his fever. He must be seriously sick.. may be all he needs is to sleep to rest, sam will take care of him . he needn't worry.

But there was something that hasseled him , some crushed memories . something was wrong . but dean was so tired.. so very tired.. may be nothing was wrong .. may be all he needed was to sleep !

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But dean said devil's road. May be I heard wrong god where the hell is he? Ellen he must be here somewhere he said devil's street I am pretty sure.

Sam was freaking out . he had to find dean he had to save dean and yet here he was, prawling up and down an abandoned empty road with nothing in sight for miles .. his head felt as if it would explode from all the tension.

Dean where are you?? Hold on brother , I will get to u somehow , just hold on !!

Jo ringed the telephone agency for the umpteenth time, finally the cell responded with a caller tone.

Hell hi, umm this is jo Williams my husband caleb Williams hasn't returned from his trekking trip with his friends. Its been so long. I am worried. He has a cellphone account with u guys. can u pls start up the GPS on his system .

thank u .

Ya the social is 2474

Thank u

Sam rushed to jo's side and fished out his laptop from the backseat of the SUV ,he just hoped to hell that the net connection worked he needed to find where dean was and this was his only reasonable hope.

Sam almost shouted in ecstasy as he spotted a red dot on the map of Iowa. But almost immediately his happy bubble bursted open.. dean's gps system showed locations that was about 50 miles from this spot. How was that even possible??? Dean couldn't have driven that far . this wasn't possible. Sam had started shivering by now ,and he wasn't sure why , may be it was coz of the cold and rain , may be it was coz of the numbing fear settling inside him, telling him that he wont be able to find his brother , not in time.

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Dean's breathing was becoming more and more shallower every passing second, he himself was hardly aware of his surrounding , what with coming in and out of consciousness everysecond. Some part of his brain was forcing dean to run , to be afraid , to be aware of what was happening to him , but that was a small part , the rest was just plain lethargic.

And then things changed , the lethargy ended , and focus , lazer sharp focus returned to dean;s earlier numb frame, he no longer felt strung up to a ceiling. Infact he never had felt so good in his life. Dean was at a children's park, the place looked beautiful , what with swings and daisies and what not.. but the place was empty.. that was sad . a place so beautiful devoid of its true richness , the kids.

Hey ! dean. Remember this place son?

Dean froze.

Dad??

He turned to see hulking frame of his father. He looked young , very young and so happy . this was not possible. This was not possible.

This is where I took you boys out after mary's death..this was our first outing in months .

This was our personnel new beginning .

Dean didn't reply, he just kept on looking at his father, who looked so peaceful. This was not real. What was happening?? And then the memories came back cascading . dean stumbled.

John rushed forward to hold his son

Dean . u alright son?

Get away from me

U are not real this is not real , I am in frigging djinn woven alternate reality night mare .

Dean what the hell are u talking about?? Kid this is not some.. u have been hunting djinns?

That strange why did they kill u by stabbing u?? u are dead dean ! this is heaven .and believe me its not a bad place at all. Mary is here too and all others . everyone is here.

Dean stumbled backwards.

Wait what I am dead??

Pretty much!

That's not possible , I was in this shack and I got jumped by those wuzzy monsters from behind. They hit me on my head with something , I blacked out , then … well after then it's a frigging pudding mess in my head but I am pretty sure I am strung up somewhere in that shack. This is not real .

Dean . ok calm down boy! This is heaven n u r dead! U need proof?? Look around u n look closely , u might miss them if u r not attentive enough !!

Dean didn't want to listen to this man who resembled his father so much but curiosity won and he turned around and observed his surroundings. At first he could see nothing, just the green trees the mud holes , children's toys all around him and the swings , but then he could hear them to , laughter of those children , playing around ,frolicking around .dean squinted his eyes. Were there actually weird wispy smoked shapes all around him or had he hurt his head real hard?? Probably latter . but the smoky shapes became more prominent , though still moving in and out of focus.

There were people all around him, of all ages, kids , toddlers old teens , everyone and they were hugging , talking and basically looking extremely happy. It felt like family …

Family reunions.. these r the dead deann Finally coming beack to their loved ones. It's a place of happiness here dean ! don't u want to see ur mother?come with me

Dean followed his father as if in trance. Not even once did he notice the aching pains building in his upper arms again. This was a family reunion , this was a happy ending. He would get to see his mother , spend time with her and his dad. This was his dream..

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Sam almost threw his laptop down in frustration. Why did things kept on becoming difficult and difficult??ellan was saying sth but sam wasn't interested . the GPS system wasn't working , he'd have to think about another way to reach dean . someway .. may be cas?? But sam has tried to cal cas a hundred times already by now. No answer . apparently the angel must be easy. Sam sighed in frustration. His headache getting worse

SAM WINCHESTER ARE U EVEN LISTENING TO ME??

Sam jumped a foot in the air

Yeah I am Ellen , why are u shouting??

Because apparently u r not paying attention , that GPS dot is acting strange its running all over the state. What are u talking about??

Look at it sam , its circling the entire state. Till its far boundaries and then it keeps coming back to this road. It stops right here near are dammed SUV and then starts patrolling again. the djinns. U said this was a next that there r more then one. Sam they r changing our perception . things are not looking to us the way they should !!!may be that glass building is here but we wont be able to find it if the djinn;s don't want us too.

Sam stared at Ellen in shock . she was right ofcourse . why hadn't he thought of this before. The djinns power was affecting them . but then that meant they were at right place. That dean was here somewhere to. There still might be a chance that he would be able to save his brother before its too late .but they needed help with this. They needed to penetrate djinn's hallucinations . they needed cas. Sam dialled casteil's number again..no answer,.

What are we gonna do sam? Dean must be right here , in front of us and we cant see him , should I call bobby ask for help ?? may be he knows something??

Nono!! Jo listen , I am hidden from casteil coz of those enochian symbols he branded my rib cage with. U guys aren't may be .. may be if u called upto him , prayed or sth , may be that will get his attention .

Sam I am not sure that's gonna work. Hell cas doesn't even know me n jo.

Its our last hope Ellen just try.

Okay sam. Lets hope for dean's sake that this works.

Ellen and jo locked their hands and closed their eyes the same second and then they begin calling on to casteil. They prayed and begged , told that dean needed his help that sam wanted him again n again . mean while sam looked around frantically to spot the trench coat clad angel. No luck..

After fifteen minutes of futile efforts , Ellen and jo stopped praying and looked at sam dejectedly . sam couldn't even meet their eyes. Cas wasn't coming or may be their prayers wernt reaching him.dean . he may be too late to save his brother this time!

The headache reached its top notch then , sam shrieked and crumpled on the road. The pain had been never so piercing , never so unbearable . but right now it was . all that sam could manage to do was hold his head and scream his lungs out.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome writing once again. But where is Cas? won't he come to help. Bloody Djins😡 Please update soon cant wait poor my Deanie😭 and Sammy
Edited by snitchseeker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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woww amazing upd dear seriously enjoyed while reading the way u penned down it was amazing 👏can't wait for next part and thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Res:-)

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Awesome writing once again. But where is Cas? won't he come to help. Bloody Djins😡 Please update soon cant wait poor my Deanie😭 and Sammy


will do :) n hopefully ur questions will be answered in next update 😛 i am glad u r enjoying the story..

love
dolly
xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashizin

woww amazing upd dear seriously enjoyed while reading the way u penned down it was amazing 👏can't wait for next part and thanks for pm


awww di u have always been soo supportive ...:) n this means sooo much thanks a bunch di !!

xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dolly...just came acroos with ur FF, its awesome...love readng fix...do pm me as u update...ohe poor dean y he always has to face all the music, this time he's dead...i thnk he must be dreaming n smmy ohw sweet he just wanted to find his brother n take him out of danger...so well written...ohw the djinns hurting my dea, send either cas or sammy to help him out...n sammy oh he's getting visions hope he'll be ok n save dean...
Cont soon n pm me
take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

Hey dolly...just came acroos with ur FF, its awesome...love readng fix...do pm me as u update...ohe poor dean y he always has to face all the music, this time he's dead...i thnk he must be dreaming n smmy ohw sweet he just wanted to find his brother n take him out of danger...so well written...ohw the djinns hurting my dea, send either cas or sammy to help him out...n sammy oh he's getting visions hope he'll be ok n save dean...
Cont soon n pm me
take care


awww sugh thanks so much hun :) real glad u liked it !!! :) yeah sure will pm u !!
n just wait n watch what happens to dean n sam.. i hope u enjoy the story more as it unfolds :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it di...!👏
supernatural is lyk my fav. show😃
n i looove Dean!❤️ ur works r always sooo awesum!!!!!⭐️ how can nyone write sooo fabulously?!😍keep up d gr8 work!!👍🏼

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