~~BROKEN~~ a supernatural SS,Chapter 2 ,Page 10 :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey fellas.. dunno if any of u still remember me???
here having exams.. so obviously wasnt feeling like studying so i started writing up this story ..
its based on the serial supernatural..
those who dont know about it.. its basically a show about two brothers sam and dean , who hunt monsters .. and its after s4.. when sam accidently starts apocalypse , the end of the world..
hope u guys enjoy it..
and yeah i am gonna update this one regularly.. and about my other stories?? i am gonna start writing them again after i finish with this sem
thanks guys :)


INDEX

Chapter 1...Page 1
Chapter 2...Page 10

BROKEN

CHAPTER 1

Hey ! samm can u hear me.. there is this shack up ahead the road.. it looks pretty abandoned . I think that's where are djinn must have taken the respite. Sammy??

Dean.. what shack . sorry dude there is too much static . tell me again where u are??

Devil's street . strange name I tell u..i am on a dirt path behind that closed glass factory

But the call got disconnected

Damm it !!

Dean reversed upto the glass factory and then parked his impala beneath a loosly hanging tarp from one of its many ceilings that had caved in .

He had already searched the building all over. No sign of the supernatural entity they were hunting. But that hadn't been unexpected . he knew that djinns normally preferred secluded , silent places.. they trapped their victims in dreams, made the vics think that they have gotten their heart desires fulfilled when in reality all they had got is a slashed neck with blood slowly oozing out of their body down the djinns mouth.

The glass factory ,though abandoned was on the main road .. too loud too damm not secluded for this supernatural being's liking . but still dean had searched every nook and cranny of it. With monsters u can never say when they would slip away from their normal properties of being crazy and become extra crazy.. like that shape shifter that thought he was a Dracula'and a mummy' and a werewolf and that this dam life was nothing but an elegant movie.. jeesh !!

A smile still escaped dean's mouth whenevr he thought abt that hunt .. one of the best they had before Lucifer popped out of hell.. coz sam gave him the opening. Dean tried not thinking about it . sam was trying pretty hard lately to make up for his mistakes. And though dean was still pretty angry abt all of it , he knew sam was taking it pretty hard.. he should , he deserved all the guilt in the world but some part of dean , that old protective big brother part wanted to make his Sammy feel alright ..moreover , no one pointed it to out to him now but dean had been the one that really started all this . he broke the first seal. And an insignificant part of him said..

sam never blamed u for that dean.. and now look at you, returning the favour so well.

Dean sighed .. god he was getting all chick flicky. That was sam's thing not his

Focus on the task ahead dude.. think of ur world may go to hell swinging problems later

This place had an eerie feel to it. This shack was so removed from the main street , out back in the wilderness, that it was near dam impossible for anyone to even spot it' but then anyone didn't have the sharp eyes of dean Winchester. There were these Large old oak trees guarding it on both sides, making it look darker then it should at crack of the dawn..

Very silently dean approached one of the creaky rusty doors and pushed it.. it made sound as if a saw was running all over the place.

Awesome so much for the element of surprise !!

Dean put one foot inside and scanned the whole room in one clean sweep , his revolver ready in hand.. it wont kill this creature but slow him down enough so that dean could use his silver coated blessed knife .he listened for any strange voices, there were none. Which exactly wasn't a good scenario. normally this abandoned shack should have been full of rodents running here n there , bats hanging upside down from the walls , bird's nests in the vents.. may be not all these things together but atleast some of them , but since they weren't ,it meant something else is using this place as home sweet home.. and dean was pretty sure what this something was.. he moved forward .. perfectly atuned to the sounds or well lack of any sounds around here.. djinns hid themselves pretty well. If they already had prey , they never came in front of humans that accidently walked into their lair.. those humans were obviously very lucky .. and dean knew there had been several missing cases these past few weeks in the surrounding towns.. this djinn was stocked up until the new year atleast.

Just then dean's cell screeched with its mettalica ring tone.. in absolute silence the sound of the rock band made dean jump a foot or two in the air.

Oh god.. this cell will be my death someday.. who would have thought a cell phone ring would be the end of the mighty stubborn elder Winchester !! if the angels and demons only knew!!

His heart still hammering loudly around his chest dean answered the phone

God what??

I have been trying reach u for several minutes dean . this is important .. its not a djinn!

What .. hey your voice is still pretty raspy.. talk louder.. whats important

Dean its not a djinn.. it's a nest atleast 4-5 crammed up in that hole if u have found the lair..

Sam. I cant hear u buddy . too much static..

YA COZ THE DJINN'D ENERGY IS MESSING UP THE SIGNALS!!

Tell me where u r dean please

Where I am??? An old shack behind that glass factory on devils's road

Devil's road..

Devil's road ..told u the name was strange.

Hey don't go inside .. u might as well use some back up.. jo n Ellen are here. They said they'll help .. I am coming just wait for me..

'''''''

Dean???

''''..

Dean .. hey answer me man.. there is no static now.. dean??

But all that sam did hear was a heavy thump that sounded as if someone was falling on the floor.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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now kamini !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am so proud of myself !!!!!!😆 i know u so so so well !!!!!!!!! i had this gut feeling and you wrote a story !!!!!!!😆 please update it regularly !!!!!! n abut dean ahm ahm ahm. He seriously has issues with fate n fans !!!!!!! both dont let him live !!!!!! especially you 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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my dolly... my apple pie... 🤗 baby i missshed u 🤔


and btw res... 🤣 * EDITED*

dollz i missed ur creations...😭 and this is just perfect... hayeee m in love with Winchesters... specially Sammy
do write again 👏👏
lub ju loads😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ZOMG! dolly loveed your new FF.
Supernatural happens to be one of my most favorite shows EVER . I loved reading it. So dean is in a lair full of djinns? is it one of those alternate reality story like in the show with djinn epi "what is and never should be"
love the first chapter. but study for your exams too lol, all the best for your exams
love
teju
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wowww dollyyy 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 after so long time woww loved ur new story and concept seriously loved it u r one of my fav writer and its always pleasure to read ur write ups can't wait for next upd and thanks for pm 🤗
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Originally posted by: -AngelSimi-

now kamini !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am so proud of myself !!!!!!😆 i know u so so so well !!!!!!!!! i had this gut feeling and you wrote a story !!!!!!!😆 please update it regularly !!!!!! n abut dean ahm ahm ahm. He seriously has issues with fate n fans !!!!!!! both dont let him live !!!!!! especially you 😆


kamini it happened coz of u dumbo!!!😆 u made me read half a half century ff's abt dean last night .. n god seriously what else u should have expected???
seriously i tell u all his fans out there simply suck on killing him again n again n again 😆 including me!!
aku reserved .. she wont ever unreserve i tell you.. have full faith on her on that front !!
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Originally posted by: RobseSSedSonu

my dolly... my apple pie... 🤗 baby i missshed u 🤔



and btw res... 🤣


awww sonu meri jalebi bai !!!
sabse pehle to a tighttt hug man !!!🤗
missed u soo soo soo sooo much

n han read it soon :)
n comment

dolly
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -nautankidollz-


kamini it happened coz of u dumbo!!!😆 u made me read half a half century ff's abt dean last night .. n god seriously what else u should have expected???
seriously i tell u all his fans out there simply suck on killing him again n again n again 😆 including me!!
aku reserved .. she wont ever unreserve i tell you.. have full faith on her on that front !!


Hahaha😆 you were having a headache didn't u?😡
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Originally posted by: 2kul4u

ZOMG! dolly loveed your new FF.

Supernatural happens to be one of my most favorite shows EVER . I loved reading it. So dean is in a lair full of djinns? is it one of those alternate reality story like in the show with djinn epi "what is and never should be"
love the first chapter. but study for your exams too lol, all the best for your exams
love
teju


mine too man
.. seriously this show is just epic .. what else can i say !!!!
thanks for reading :) and yes the djinns are same like the ones in that epi when dean thinks his mother is alive .. but this is another hunt set in s5 somewhere :) n belive me its gonna be much different then what happened in that episode!!

thanks again teju ... this means alot:)

love
dolly'
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Originally posted by: -Akriti-


Hahaha😆 you were having a headache didn't u?😡


n u dont care ... so why even ask???😡

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