FF: Fate-Mate Updated Part 19

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aakesha

@aakesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

wow !!!❤️

that was really nice...

but i wished him to say his real name to her...

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

loved i...so sweet...thnx 4da pm dear...

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Koeli

@Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Ofcourse answer...lol that was the answer to you last question.

Sweet heart i am now badly addicted to this...both of them are so dam cute and gloomy so sweet

I am just wandering what name will khushi give ASR...😍

Please continue soon...dying to know about there telephone conversation.

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desicurry

@desicurry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

wow
loved this update
really nice how comfortable both are which each other :)

please update soon:)

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: inspiringstars
Good one, only khushi can discuss so much about a name lol, even ASR is hell bent on not saying his name !!!

Continue soon, thanks for the pm

Inspiringstars: Even though I made some changes in their characters, Khushi is always better off talking...and our own ASR...he will say things only when he wants to...thanks for reading...and the comment! I appreciate it! 😊

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
love it
i love how you have more dialogues than description

makes it more interesting to read

Also khushi is bit more serious while asr is more laid back...kinda reversal of the role there hehe

please pm me when you update next

ilive2laugh: Thanks, yes, when i am reading stories, i do like the communication more than the description myself...so i figured other readers might enjoy it too...thanks for reading...and thanks for commenting...i appreciate it

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Poonam786
Fantastic update.. Awww man, he didn't tell her his name?! Oh well, I guess it was too soon anyway.. Love this ASR.. So sweet, slightly flirty.. Great story.. Thanks for the PM.. Will be waiting eagerly for the next part.. :)

Thanks poonam786, as i had mentioned earlier...great love stories don't always have to start with hatred...this will be different...thanks for reading and commenting...i appreciate it.

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy
Ofcourse answer...lol that was the answer to you last question.
Sweet heart i am now badly addicted to this...both of them are so dam cute and gloomy so sweet
I am just wandering what name will khushi give ASR...😍
Please continue soon...dying to know about there telephone conversation.

Thanks appy_indy for the long comment...It makes my day...will update ASAP...thanks for reading...😊