FF: Fate-Mate Updated Part 19

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

how can someone ask so many questions at a time?

that was so sweet of him to drink the tea to make her happy.

.poor khushi feels so guilty

please update soon

thanks 4 the PM

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

I love the way the dialogue is written , it feels like a fast conversation happrning between two people. I find it very enjoyable to read!

Kinda reminds of the book "The secret Garden" the boy that everyone was scared of and the girl he allowed himself to be with :)

Love this story Excellent Job! =D

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Koeli

@Koeli

Channel Moderator

+ 16

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Oh dear ...firstly congo for part 10.

Lovely it was 😍

I love ASr's monologue a lot...

Khushis is so mad...love her tooo

and love you for giving us such a beautiful FF...

I AM SO HOOKED TO IT.

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ipkknd_lover

@ipkknd_lover

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

that was the best update ...GOD khushi is so talkative ...always bugging asr ...but the guy's reaction to her non stop blabbering is always very cute ...especially loved the last part ...i wonder how is he going to find out that khushi knows that it was her fault that he got sick ...

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

wow sooo cute...loved it...thnx 4da pm dear...

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Awww.. Such a lovely update.. They are so cute together.. And he's changing for her, unconsciously.. And she's trying to control her exuberance for him.. It's so beautiful to see their interactions.. Love this story!

Thanks for the PM.. :)

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samia19

@samia19

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

really a long update, but just a lovely one

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

awww that was so sweet update and loved it alot yaaay!!!!!!!! i dont know why am i so happy after reading this update but i totaly loved it thanks 4 pm