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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

deethu!!!!!! whts dis wo sth ho kr b sth ni h...n 7 yrs ye kaisa weird promise kia h rey ne...bt i knw kch bola h to may b sach ho jaye...n tu itni b saddist ni h ki unko na milwaye...i knw you vry well

i love da update...its unique
n da way she dressess his wound aww...she care 4 him so much

n smiriti aunty ko kb smjh ayega ye
pta ni kya chahti h
nxt update jaldi se krio
love you


7 years bina soche samjhe kiye h... iska matlab sumthing big is waiting for them after 7 years...
di u r right she is not saddist not at all... unko apne readers ko tadpana bhot acha lagta hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LOV_ARSHA_KREYA

Awww its OwESUM deetha.. loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it ALOT... mujhe laga tha bridegroom rey hi hoga... Aww rey toh kria ko surprise dena chahta tha bt kria ne toh rey ki band baja di... Kriyansh cute fight loved it.. EK office may bt dur dur.. Finaly kriyansh going for dat amazing !! Please update ASAP egarly waiting !!


i loved it...
rey deserved it...
bechari kitna roi...
date!!!!!!!!! haye... yaani full on romance...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

awsomeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1
finally kriyaansh family are ready 4 dere mrg...n love rey's dialouge ki jise shaadi kr ri ho use dekhogi b ni

n aww bed rum scene...hehehe ek to bed room n upar se KR akele...n kriya hugging him...ab isme bechare rey ka kya dosh 🤣 🤣 😉

awww he is restless.
n sharon idea superb
KR date...waiting 4 dat

chal ab jana h xam dene


di at least kria ne dekha toh...
agar mai hoti to bina dekhe hi usse upar universe ji ke pass pohancha deti...
exactly di rey ka kya dosh ki kriya itni hawt lagti h toh.
kash d3 mai bhi shar aisi hoti
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

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Awsm finally kriyaansh are getting married!

hehe kriya in JKR avtaar and ready to kill rey 😆

Luved it to the core!

Thanx for pm and update soon


i love her JKR avatar...
thank god sach mai nahin maar avarna shaadi se pehle hi vidvaah ho jaati...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Deetha this was an amazing Update.

Loved it a lot.
Finally they are gonna get married wow.
Parents nai bacho ke liye dushmani chod di dats superb.
And Rey ko dekkar kria ka gussa dat was cute.
Finally Kriyaansh in same place but maintaining distance.

Precap was awesome.

Waiting for the update.


kash aisa sab jagah hota ...
hehe ... luckily di usne jaan se nae maara rey ko...
hawww dekho na di deetha di humaare saath saath kriyaansh ko bhi tadpa rae h...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

Yay . . . . Kriyaansh ki marriage fix
vaise bhi unko alag dekhna kise pasand hai . . . . They are meant to be together 🤗
achha hua jo unke parents ko samajh aa gaya & they got ready for their children's happiness . . . 👏
kriya was really going crazy . . . I was feeling really bad for her 😭 . . . . . But somewhere I knew dat only rey would be dat person 😃
awww . . . Date time . . . Jaldi arrange karo 😆


yogini darls hai na kuch log jo kriyaansh ko alag dekhna chahte hai...
first those stupid taarey fans and then some psychos in forums...
yup yaar even i felt bad...
date = romance = intensity...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: damonelena

Awww bahot cute tha!! :)


Thankgod the groom was Rey :)

And yeaaa! my fav part was the bedroom where she's hitting... don't know why but i could imagine Kria only in a white and black salwar :)

Awesome idea Sharon! :)

And updatee soon plzzz! :D



agar groom rey nae hota na toh fir pata nae readers deetha dika kya karte...
that was my fav too...
yup she is intelligent here...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dazzling_Smile

Awesome deetha di..

and itna chota sa??
phir bhi chlega
no actually dorega :D


no no no no...
yeh nae daudega...
tum jaise readers ki wajah se hi di kabhi kabhi chote update de kar bhaag jaati h...
point to be noted: agar kabhi bhi update chota mile toh usse satisfy mat hona...
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Posted: 13 years ago
destiny has its own way..:)


vishu update kar diya ab mat gussa karna...kk ...

so guys im here with an update...😃


so seedha padthe hai no bak bak...😊



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now 5 yrs have already passed after that day of their meet ...may be their last meet...

kriya:

she was totally changed now ...she is fit.. infact with sound body...good health...still she was living in the small world...no no for her it is the only world...its him...he ...his words...his smile...his care...the way she shivers when he comes near her...

she still remembers that day...

"haina special bhi hai aur alag bhi..."

kya hogaya tha mujhe us din...mujhe kabhi aisa nahi laga jaisa us din laga ...

she jumped on her bed and fell...took a pillow and crushed it feeling him in her arms...

mai aaj itna blush kyun kar rahi hon???? kyun na karoon aaj hamari 6th anniversary...maine aaj unhe apni dil ki baat kahi...kitna khush hue the wo?????? kitne khush hue wo?// aur sabse achi baat hamari ye special moment hamari special place FE mei hua tha...wo kaise aajate the girls locker room mei...

she blushed and sat up stretchig her hands and blushing...she was smiling wide when someone hugged her and both fell on the bed with kriya on bed and the person on her ...the person gave a tight kiss to her on her cheek...she hugged the person and crushed ...

"di aap itna blush kyun kar rahi thi?? pata hai kitni cute lag rahi thi???" the person said...

"kuch nahi kavya...mai toh bas aise hi..." kriya tried to cover up still kavya upon her...

"jhoot mat boliye di...plzz batao na * puppy face.*"kavya said looking at her sissy who was ri8 now totally red...

"hmm...bas kuch nahi ...unke baare mei soch rahi thi...aaj hamara 6th anniversary hai propose karne ka..."kriya said😳

kavya sprang up and sat upon the bed...


kav: di plzz mujhe batao na jiju ko aapne kaha mila ...aapki pehli mulakaat????

kri: oye kitne baar bataun ki dehradun mei hui...

kav: di aapne sab bataya par aapne ye nahi bataya aap ki confession kaisi hui aapne apni feelings kaise realise kiya??😃


kri: maine kaha realise kiya ...unhone realise karvaya...pata hai tab mai itni jhalli thi...

kav: di batao na plzz...jiju romantic hai kya??? aapse kitna pyaar karte hai???

kri: pyaar???? wo mujhse sabse jyaada pyaar karte hai...aur romantic toh wo hai hi...☺️

kav: wah di aap toh socte hue itna sharma rahi hai toh jab jiju aapke saamne honge toh???? mujhe jal se jald jiju ko dekhna hai ...unki photo dikhao na di plzzz...

kri: nahi kuch aur din wait karo directly dekhlena...

kav: toh kam se kam ye toh batao ki jiju ne aapko apni feelings realise karvaya???

kri : woh...

she sat stright pulled kavya into a hug hugging from back and strtd telling)

kri: actually tab hamare college mei dance fest ki tym thi...aur tabhi kuch din pehle hamari clg mei ek hot si beautiful ballroom teacher aayi thi...aur unhone rey ko apna partner choose kiya...kyun na kare woh hai hi itni versatile dancer...unki steps perfect the so unhone rey ko choose kiya aur uski faida uthake mujhe jalate the...

jhalli hun mai tab samaj mei nahi aaya ...ab jab sochti hun na toh pata chal raha hai ...wo pehli din se mujhe pyaar karte hai...😳 aur mai jhalli hamesha unse jhagda ati thi...pata hai dance fest ki waqt unhone mujhe itna jealous kiya ki mai unhe chalange kiya ki mai unki sabse achi dance partner banungi...par tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki apne aap ko unki dance partner banate banate maine unhe apna life partner ki jagah dedi...

kav: awww!!!!!!!😳

kri: aur pata hai ...specially ek din tha jo mereliye sabse imporant hai ...jis din hum road pe akele chal rahe the aur mai jhalli phir se unki prank mei fas gayi aur unhe ye proove karne lagi ki mai sabse adventorous ladki hun aur pata hai maine kya kiya???

kav: kya?????

kri: raat ko 10:00 baje hum mumbai ki main road pe wo bhi juntion pe laite the...aur baate kar rahe the...

kav: # turned to kriya# kya?????/ di aap sachi mei paagal ho...aap itni jealous thi??? i mean itna pyaar???

kri: tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki wo pyaar hai...aur luckily next day impromptu mei hamara naam aaya tha couple dance keliye...aur us dance mei unhone mujhe ye bata diya ki wo mujhe kitna pyaar karte hai, har lift mei mujhe bohut ache se pakad te the...bohut protective hai ...aur aring toh hai hi...😳

kav: aww !!!!! di mujhe abhi jiju se milne ka man kar raha hai...

kri: tujhe kya mujhe bhi...

kav: par kya di sach mei ...

kri: zaroor...kyun ki rey meri trust kabhi nahi todte...aur wo zaroor aayenge...bas tab tak mujhe aur sundar ban na hai...pata hai mai bilkul aisi nahi thi par unkeliye tayyar hona chahti hun...

kav: di sach mei im waiting 4r that day...jab aapdonon milenge...aapko mai aur khush dekhna chahti hun...
# stood on the bed and opened her arms# itna khush...
..

..kriya pulled her down she fell on kriya and both fell on the bed...

kri: love u meri pari...

kav: i love u more di...

both hugged tight...

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delhi - mumbai camera shift...
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he was jumping on the bed dancing lyk mad with the bedsheet...all were surruonding him...with weird looks...

after the bedsheet session he jumped down and did salsa with sharon...

sh: rey kya hogaya ...pagal hogaye kya???? #laughing #

he twirled her and left and fell back on bed...

r: haan poori tarah se...uski khayalon mei...AAJ MEI BOHUT KHUSH HUN!!!!!!!!! #he shouted#

sw: are bata bhi do ki aaj itna special kya hai??

vic: haayaar bata bhi de...ghar toh bulaya par jabse aaye the tabse aise pagalon ki tarah dance kar rahe ho...

rey went to neha...

rey: can i have a dance plzz# he offered his hand...neha slid casually # he danced with her ...twirling her around and taking simmi's hand...he danced with everyone finally pulled swayam and did salsa with him...

sw: rey ...rey chod...mai ladki nahi hun/...mujhse ladki jaise salsa mei kamar hilana nahi aata...abey kamar toot jayega...vicky!!!!!!!!help...

sh: vicky nahi i will help...rey mere saath dance karo ...

rey was abt to hold her for which she stopped...

sh: pehle reason batao ...😃

rey: sharon ...aaj poore six completed hume propose kiye hue...jab usne mujhe ye kaha ki mai uski ache dost se kuch jyaada hun...OUR SIXTH ANNIVERSERY!!!!!!!

sh: wow!!!! congrats...

and they danced...all were smiling wide...but two among them were sad...

vicky,swayam...

rey said that he would be back and went away...

ne: what happening babu ...tum itne upset...

vicky remained silent...

sw: neha wo jhooti duniya mei jee raha hai ...infact dono...jaise kriya gayi hai im sure wo bhi aise hi jee rahi hogi...


vic: par agar ye sach mei jhoot bangaya toh ...toh kya hoga in donon ka...


sw: aur kriya toh akeli hai koun samhalega use????

sh: kriya ki bohut yaad aarahi haina???? 😳

swayam nodded...

sh: dnt worry jaldi hi tum apne best frnd se miloge...mera dil kehta hai...trust me...

sw: agar tum kehrahi ho so i will surely believe...😃

ne: baabu neha too telling...rey ki dil kabhi nahi tootega...bharosa rakho babu...itne saal wo ek doosre keliye wait kar rahe hai ...so bhagwan aise tohdi jaane dete...

vic: i soo wish aisa hota kagu...

ne: aisa hi hoga babu ...bas ab sab rey ke saath uski special din enjoy karte hai...infact meri frnd ki special din...

vis: yaa dude i soo wish to see her man...she would be happy ...

rey: arey kya baatein horahi hai...

sw: kuch nahi teri baatcutter ke baare mei hi baat kar rahe hai...

re: really????? guys ye lo maine aaj subah 2:00 baje se 7: 00 tak baitke maine ye chocolate cake banaya...tell me how it is...ye kria ki fav hai...😳...

all: WAT???????😲

sh: reyaansh singhania jo khud keliye egg bhi bana nahi sakta wo aaj cake banaraha hai...😲

sw: bana raha hai nahi siren banaya hai...dekho😲

rey: meri baatcutter keliye kuch bhi ...chalo guys ab kha ke bato bhi...

ne: neha tensioning ...ki khake batane keliye neha rahegi ya nahi...

vicky: aur agar ye khanae ke baad mei cake se darne laga toh...NAHI!!!! wo mera fav hai...

all : haan dude hume risk nahi leni...

rey became sad...

sh: rey mai hun na i will ...mai khaungi meri best frnd ki first dis...

rey grinned lyk a kid...

sh: toh jaldi khilao bhi...

sw: sharon plzz i dnt want to loose u...

sharon glared at him...

he shut up...rey fed her a small piece...

while he was feeding she had her eyes closed...she was calm with out anyreactions for 2 mins...

sw: maine tumse kaha tha...meri siren ko mujhse cheenliya rey tune...😭

sh: ummm!!!!!! yummy!!!!!!!

opened her eyes...

sh: rey its very yummy...mujhe ek aur piece chahiye...

rey grinned wide ...both fed each other...

vicky came to eat...

rey: hat ...mai kisiko nahi doonga..itna bhi trust nahi karte ho mujhe????

sh: rey chodo na yeh bhi kya yaad rakhenge...remember today is to be celebrated...

rey: hmm...lo sab lo...

all ate and were shocked that rey had made that yummy cake...

soon all went to cafe to enjoy...rey was dancing all over...all the customers looked at him with weird faces...

the manager came and told him to sit,...

manager: sir plzz ...plzzz bait jayiye...

rey: arey manager tension mat lijiye...
# he stod on table#

gang: arey kya kar raha hai...

rey took the vase kept on the table...

rey: attention everybody...aaj mai bohut kush hun...aaj se mere aur meri pyaar ko e dosre se confess kiye hue 6 yrs hogaya ...so aaj meri tarah se sabki party...jo khana hai khao ...jitna khana khana hai khalo...bill mera...meri treat...


a random boy: boss agar itni khush kabri hai toh apne pyaar ko bhi dikhado ...dekhlenge ki kounsi cute jodi hai aapki...

rey: sorry wo abhi yaha nahi hai...

boy: toh kaha hai?? sabki treat derahe ho use nahi>????

rey: pata nahi wo kaha hai...😃.

girl: wat????

rey: haa actually 5 yrs back hum alag hogaye ye decide karke ki hum 7 yrs ke andar phir milenge ...destiny hame milayegi...jo pakka hoga...coz we r destiny...we r meant to be destined...

girl: wow!!!!!!!! toh wo ladki bohut lucky hai...

rey: wo nahi mai lucky hun that she loves me...

boy: bhai naam toh jaan sakte haina uska???

rey: haa ofcourse...kria ...kria ghai!!!!! meri life...meri pyaar ..mera sabkuch...

boy 2: itna importance derahe ho toh ofcourse woh special hogi...

i wish ...nahi nahi i pray ...tum donon jaldi miljaye...

rey: ofcourse milenge...I LOVE U KRIA!!!!! # he shouted#

sw: yeh poori tarah se paagal hogaya hai...# laughing#

all: # laughing# haan...pull him down...

sh: rey neeche utro...

rey jumped down...hugged sharon from back...

rey: pata nahi sharon mai aaj bohut khush hun...wo bhi itni hi khush hogi ri8????? mujhe abhi use dekhne ka man kar raha hai...universeji aur kitne din wait karna padega mujhe?????? BAATCUTTER!!!!!!!😍


sharon smiled...all were enjoting to the best...he was very happy today and same was with her...

hehe ab ye baat sata rahi hai na ki kriya ki behan kaisi???toh padlo...

shashank ghai is father of kria...smriti and him broke up as they were not able adjust to each other ...so they went apart...but smriti failed to give him her 1 yr old kriya as she needs mother care and more over she can never think of being away from her baby...then shashank made his future in dance and when finally settled he adopted a baby...girl as he missed his daughter ..so he brought up her as kriya...its kavya...everyone calls her pari as she is very sweet and everyone loves her a lot...when kavya was 7 she came to know she was adopted ...but shashank never let the feeling of orphan grow in her...later after kriya left mumbai 2 yrs later one day she went on a trip with her mom to delhi there they met with shashank and after a long tym of rootna and manana ,...finally they were back to a family and as kriya was single till now she cared more 4r priya ...she is very precious to kriya...😳


back to real story:


days passed...infact months passed...4 months passed ...kriya was with priya in her room explaining her doubts...she was back 4rm her work...smriti came to her...

sm: beta mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi...

kri: haan batayiye mom...kavya...ye galat hai...

sm: kriya improtant hai zara meri baaton pe dhyaan do

kriya sat straight...

kri: kya hai mom...aap bohut serious lag rahi ho???

sm: haa infact ye matter hi waisa hai...actually maine tumhareliye ladka choose kiya hai...

kri& kav: WAT?????😲

kav: par mom didi toh...

sm: tum chup raho...choti ho choti ki tarah raho...ye abhi teri umar ki baatein nahi...

kri: mom ...aap pari ko kyun daant rahe ho...wo bachi hai use pat nahi ki kab kaha baat karni hai...

kriya hugged kavya sidewards and said her not to talk...kavya nodded...

kri: par mom aap jaante ho na ...mai rey ki wait kar rahi hun...already 5 saal khatam hogaye bas do saal aur plzzz...

sm: kriya ...bas karo...tum ye paagal duniya mei rehsakti ho par mai nahi...aur waise bhi agar ye do saal mei wo ladka wapas bhi aaya toh mai accept nahi karoongi...wo ladka mujhe kabhi sahi nahi lagta hai...

kri: par mom...

sm: kriya mai yaha tumse poochne nahi batane aayi...kal wo log tumhe dekhne aarahe hai...subah 9 baje yaad rakna...

smriti left...

kavya still huggig kriya...

kav: di kya hoga ab.?

kri: kya hoga ???? wahi jo mai chahti hun...bhagadoongi mai us ladke ko...

kav: kaise??????

kri": tumne ab tak tumhari di ki "k "effect nahi dekhi na...toh kal dekhlena...bohut maza aayega...

kav: wow!!!! toh im waiting...

kri: *lost* mai bhi wait kar rahi hun rey...jaldi aao...

kav: mai bhi...mujhe bhi jiju ko dekhna hai...

kri: *smile* jaldi dekhlogi...

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next day...

kriya wore a simple anarkali dress and did a small make up which her mother told to do...but she was looking beautiful...finally smriti entered...

sm: kitni pyaari lag rahi hai meri beti...

she kissed on forehead...kriya smiled automatically coz it was the love of mother...then smriti said...

sm: ladke wale aagaye...dekhna chahti ho ladke ko??

kri: nahi...

sm: arey aise kaise mujhe ye toh pata chale ladka kaisa hai...

kri: bohut ganda hai...

sm: dekh ke toh bata...

smriti pulled kriya to balcony from where they can see the entrance...

sm: wo raha ladka...mera choice...

she said with pride...

kriya looked once and swiftly turned to smriti...

kri: bohut gan...d...a...

her mouth fell open ...she stared at her mom in shock...

sm: sach hai ya nahi ye jaan na hai toh waha dekho yaha nahi...

smriti turned her face...

there he was...

"mera choice"smriti told from back...but eyes were glued to him...after 5 whole yrs she was seeing him in reality...she couldnt stop her from smiling...there he was struggling with her .his mother who was trying to take him in...

there back of them stood the whole gang...silently looking at them...
his dad came to him and told to cum with him...he nodded lyk an obedient child...his father walked front...he slowly walked back and there out of their gate swayam came with a bike...rey was abt to rum when someone tapped reys back ...he turned shocked it was his mother...

"mom plzzz mujhe ye shaadi nahi karni...infact ladki bhi nahi dekhni, mai kriya se hi shaadi karoonga"he pleaded...

kriya blushed at this...still he too was living lyk her...

"rey FYI mujhe ye jo kria hai wo pata nahi ...aur haa ye sab formality hai shaadi already fix hochuki hai so chup chap chalo and swayam tumhe bike chalana aati hai aur tum rey ki bohut ache frnd ho...pata hai sabko...par ye jo tricks hai wo mere paas nahi...tum bhi chalo..."she ordered...

swayam scrathed his head and the whole gang followed dissapointed...rey was removing his jacket saying mai nahi aane wala hun but his mom raised her hand...he closed his eyes tight feared of the slap...she pulledd the jacket back to place and pulled him with her ...he was continuously pleading just lyk a 5 yrs boy who dnt want to go to school...

finally on reaching the entrance rey stood straight but looked as he was on a verge to cry...she was smiling wide...as soon as they went in she got back to senses...she turned towards smriti...

kri: mom ...

sm: pata hai ...yahi na ki maine kaise accept kar liya?????? actually mujhe hamesha ye ladka casinova lagta tha...par kuch mahinon pehle jab mei bank ki kaam se mumbai gayi tak ise ek cafe mei tumlogon ki kuch 6th anniversary kehke paaglon ki tarah chillate hue dekha...tabhi mujhe laga ki wo 5 saal se ek hi ladki ke peeche hai aur wo meri beti hai...isse jyaada mujhe kya chahiye...aur waise bhi itne saalon se jo smile thi tumhare chehre pe wo sirf usike wajah se haina...isiliye maine aur tumhare papa unke ghar gaye...teen mahene pehle gaye the par tab tum logon ki kundli mei tha ki teen mahinon tak aapka milna nahi hai aur milna nahi chahiye so hum chup rehgaye...sab fixed hai...shaadi ek mahine ke baad...

kriya blushed ...she hugged smriti...

kri: thanks mom rey ko accept karne keliye...


..: kya???😲

they looked at the door there stood kavya...

kav: matlab aaj jo aane wale hai woh jiju hai????/😲

kri: aane wale nahi aagaye...dekhna hai toh neeche jao...aur haa galti se bhi batana mat ...mai surprise karna chahti hun...


kav: kk ...mai abhi jaa rahi hun...yay!!

she ran down...

sm: # caressing her hair.# haste hue achi lagti hai...😊

kri: thanks mom...

they hugged...

here kavya ran down and stood before shashank...

shas: kya hua pari?


kav: papa wo...she said him ears to not tell to rey that it was kriya...he nodded...

kav: jiju koun hai????/

rey looked at her instantly nervous...kriya was peeping from upstairs...

shas: wo jo peeche sofe pe baita hai wahi hai ...

quickly rey stood up and strtd talkin to vic

r: tu kuch kehraha tha...

vic: mai kya kehraha tha???* confused*

r: arey ...

but he stopped


NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!

kavya screamed all looked as what happened to her...

shas: pari kya hua?

kav: papa jiju dikhne mai ache hai par mujhe body shody wale jiju chahiye aise haddi wale nahi...

*pointing swayam who was sitting beside rey*

swayam sprang up...kriya was trying hard not to rofl...

sw: * tensed* nahi nahi nahi...mai...mai tumhara jiju nahi...#pulled rey# yeh ..yeh tumhara jiju hai ...mai already fixed hun...dekho woh jo pink dress mei waha khadi hai uskeliye...ye tera jiju hai mai nahi...

kriya laughed loud...

all looked up but kriya already hid...she went in locked the room and fell on floor laughing...

kav: wow!!!!!! papa jiju kitne handsome hai...wow kya muscles hai...di ki aur jiju ki jodi bohut achi hogi...

rey: * under his breath* jiju my foot...

( ps: reys parents know that it was kria they were thinking of surprising them)

reys mom: ji ladki ko bulayenge???

kav: ji mai abhi di ko leke aati hun...

she ran up and there came kria but but but she changed into a lehanga choli and she put on her ghoonghat...

she came down took the blessings of reys parents and she wantedly went to touch reys feet when he flung up folding his legs upon the sofa and was shocked ...kria bit back a smile...

she stood and went and stood beside her father...

rey: ji yeh apna mooh kyun chupake rakhe hai???😕

shas: beta hamari khandan mei aisa hi hota hai...

kriya bit back a chuckle...

rey: toh chehra kab dekh sakte hai????

shaadi ke baad came a instant reply from kavya...

kriya bit her lower lip not to laugh...

the whole gang stood with haged mouths...kriya and kavya silently hi-5ed

reys mom: ji mujhe lagta hai ki bachon ko akele mei baat karna chahiye...

rey thought W*F... akele baat???wait rey .ab seedha us ladki ko kehdo ki tum kriya se pyaar karte ho aur kisike shadi nahi karoge...

soon he followed her...she took him to the drawing room and closed the door and was abt to turn when he spoke...

rey: dekho...i dnt mean to hurt u but mai kisi aur se pyaar karta hun so mai tumse shaadi nahi karoonga...

kriya laughed siletly and acted.lyk crying loud...

kr: matlab aap kisi aur se pyaar karte ho ?????😭

rey froze ...it was she ...she ...kria ...meri kria ...kya sach mei...

he ran before her and caught the ghoonghat ...still she was acting her eyes closed tight as soon as he caught the ghoonghat...and looking down...he slowly lifted the ghoonghat ...she opened one eye and saw him...he went numb...he didnt breath for sometym ...she slowly opened her eyes and gave him a smile...he felt weak in knees soon he caught her by shoulders...she breathed in and stiffened and froze...they looked into each others eyes...finally after a long tym they came back to senses...they were feeling awkward...suddenly he cupped her face and was abt to kiss but stopped and flinched back...she breathed hard...after sometym both tried to hug at a tym but again withdrawed,,,,,,,,...they stood there in complete awkwardness...suddenly kriya saw a cockroch coming towards thus jumped to rey stoodon his foot and hugged him ( lyk at the food counter)

kria: aah!!!!!!!

soon he encircled his hands and pulled her more close...both felt their blood rushing with high speeds and jolts of electricity passing through them...finally he spoke...

r: kria kya hua???

kr: woh cockroach...

rey: thank cockroach...she pulled back slightly to face him...

reading her face he said...

r: usi ki wajah se toh tum ab meri bahon mei ho..

she blushed and looked down ...rey felt his body heating up...he slowly blowed on her face...she shivered badly and closed her eyes breathing hard...

he moved forward and asked...

r: c.can i kiss u...

kriya just nodded yes still eyes closed ...he slowly went towards her lips but he placed a kiss o her fore head...

she opened her eyes in surprise...he smiled and said...

r: abhi kiss karunga toh shayad control nahi kar paunga...

she blushed more...

kr: ab hume chalna chahiye...

she moved towards the door but soon he pushed her back to door and kissed her passionately while his hands moved on her hips and on her bare waist making her more dizzy...he kissed her wildly lyk his life depended on it and soon they were on the nearby couch pressing her in btw the couch and him...he kissed her neck ,...all over her face and finally pulled back to see her flushed face...

infact his face was also flushed...she looked at him...

r: mai toh control karna hi chahraha tha par tumhari blush ne ...he shrugged ...

she blushed more...he groaned and agian pulled her into a breathtaking kiss...he was abt to loose senses when she pushed him ...he fell down and quickly sat and looked at her...she sat ri8 and was blushing to core...she once looked at him and ran into washroom..he brushed his hairs...

oh my god..its for real...sach mei...kriya ...kria meri honawali wife...thank u universe ji thanku ...thank u thank u thank u ...

he sat there brushing his hairs and breathing hard...

inside she went stood before the mirror and looked at her flushed face...she blushed to core...she slowly rubbed her lower lip and looked down blushing and breathing hard...she wanted to feel him more...she wanted him to kiss her more...even if he went out of senses she wanted it...literally she wanted to make out...but she doesnt want any problems now...she had to be careful till their marriage...finally after years her mother strtd trusting him...so doesnt want anything wrong happen now...she made herself straight ad went out...he looked at her with those piercing eyes...she stood before him,...he too stood up...

kri: promise me ab mai jo bhi karun aap kuch nahi karoge???

he without a second thought placed his hand in hers ...and in next sec he was taken back...she was kissing him softly...he just reciprocated keeping his hands on his side as promised...finally after a long one she slowly pulled back and kissed his forehead...

kri: ab hame jaana chahiye...warna maa...* she said hesitating*

then he realised...

mom!!!!!!!!! he said and feared...

she smiled ..."maa ne hi aapko choose kiya mereliye..."

he looked at her unbelievingly...she gave her cute smile and nodded then it clicked him...he pulled her by waist...

r: isiliye push kiya na ki kuch ghadbad na ho ab...

she looked at him with a smile and nodded...

r: i promise...mai kabhi unka trust tootne nahi doonga...

k: mujhe pata hai/...

she looked down blushed ...


he pulled her more close kissed on her cheek and both hugged tight...



* phew* its a very long one ri8...

so plzz lamba cmnts...

and plzz lyk and cmnt...😃

love u all...😳







Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippee!
me dancing around!
finally mom maan gae!
mai toh aise khush h rae hun ki maano meri mom mujhe tab dilane ke liye maan gae!😛
🤣i was laughing so loudly after reading rey's antics that mere papa bhot khush hogaye that voh mujhe paagal khaane mai daal kar peacefully rahenge!😆
then the sister bond was so sweet!
AND THEN SMRITI KA SURPRISE!
kria ke sir par toh atom bomb fod diya tha usne yeh kehke that she has to marry that guy!
agar aisa hota na toh pata nae smriti ka kya hota!
🤣i loved it when pari ne swayam ko groom samjha!
bechara pura white hogaya tha! bilkul colourless!
and then bedroom romance !
hai!
Edited by aditi061 - 13 years ago

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