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Posted: 13 years ago
HAR PAL ANDHERA HAI>>>>

wow...a mystery person...m eager to see kaun hai ye jisne bechare humare swayam aur kuch had tak rey ki neend uda kar rakh di ai...mindblowing update but full of suspense...sharon ajtak jo kisi se itni jaldi khush nai hui...ek person k msg par hi million dollar smile...waiting to know...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...

especially the universeji talks... mast personification...

so finally they'll meet... totally loved it...

plz update asap..
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Posted: 13 years ago
DESTINY HAS ITS OWN WAY>>>

the start was humorous and intersting...and the delhi part -all of it...m speechless...the way rey made swayam feel the pain...the fact that he did not hate his baatcutter...made me cry...and kria's condition-i just couldnt imagine...rey had all his frnds wen kria left him but she did not have any1...she suffered the most...the reaction of swayam+kria on finding their best buddies-adorable...i loved the way she stood in the crowd to get 1 glance of him...it was a heart-wrenching update...loved it to the core...u nailed it di... :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
😃😊😊

😃

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Edited by Shweta-kriyansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing deetha
lovd the swaron and reyam convo in the room
rey's dance...hayeee any1 cn die at that moment
plz update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Deetha its Mind Blowing...
loved the way u described their feeling...
finally rey saw kriya...eagerly waiting for the next part plzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update:):):)

Luvd it:):)

Waiting eagerly for d next part:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Supeb supeb yaar.. Univers g nd star convo was realy funny.. Reyam convo touchy... Hey bhagawan yeh giri hui aur kitna giregi bt 1st tym uske girne se kuch acha hua rey ne kria ko dekh lia.. Rey's dance outstanding... Egarly waiting for kriyansh meet.. Update very soon please deetha<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting eagerly for d next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deetha

DESTINY HAS ITS OWN WAY..:)


universe ji: 1 saal hogaya..par ye ab tak mujhse naaraaz hai ...arey ise ye samaj kyun nahi aata ki ek saal se mei isiki pakau ke bina mare jaa raha hun...meri pyaari bachi achanak se itni chup...

one of th star: universe ji...ye toh aaphi ke galti hai...apne usse uska pyaar aur sab kuch kyun cheena...??

universe ji : arey mai kya karun...upar se oders mile toh mai kya kar sakta hun???par ab aur nahin mujhe kuch toh karna padega...


'~~~~~~~ down to earth~~~~~~~ (hehe funny na??:P)

kriya was being so quite and sad so smriti agreed to let her dance ...but kriya never danced as she felt incomplete without HIM and dance would always remind him...but she heard that in delhi there is a dance competition ...smriti wants kriya to dance in that coz she thought this might help kriya she insisted kriya to go...atlast kriya reached there...

aur haa sabko pata hi hai obviously lousians aayenge...(taani not swayams sis, she is just the sixth dancer and she is not a stalker) but they were there as the lead group...they just dance but not in the battle...other groups battle...actually what happens is lousians came as special group...they give couple performances ,solos group performances and also have the ri8 to help the judges to take the decisions..(hope u got)

rey was in a room...he was just leaning back on a chair when kriya's harsh words hit him and he jerked front...

aakhir mai use bhool kyun nahi paa raha hun??? plzz universe ji plzz...woh toh hamesha aapse hi baat karti hai na toh plzz use kahiye ki mai use bas ek baar dekhna chahta hun...baat karna chahta hun...uske baad uski marji...plzz universe ji plzz...

universe ji:( thinking) baat karti hai???? nahi beta nahi...baat karti thi...:( tum toh apni dukh mujhse share karte ho toh mai kya karoon??? phir bhi maine sab tayyari kar li bas upar wala mere saath de...

star: kya soch rahe ho ji...vo kuch pooch raha hai aapko...

universe ji: dekho mai already fasa hua hun...haalat ka faida utake mazak mat uda mera...jo mujhse ho sakta mene already kardi...

star: really?? aap kuch kar sakte ho( sarcastically)

uni ji: oye tu chup reh...nahi toh i will kick u out of my kingdom...

star: where would u kick me...idhar udhar ghoom ke yahi pe aaungi...u know upar wale ne mera perment place fix kardi yaha pe...

uni ji: god im soo helpless...aur kuch log iska faida utha rahe hai...( eyeing the star who was giggling...)

rey took a deep breath and stood up..he turned to leave when he found swaron at the entrance...he quickly smiled at them to cover up...in this 1 yr swaron had come really close to each other...they knew what the other felt only an proposal is remained but the gang made them official even before their proposing...

r: guys tum log yaha??? kya hua show start hogaya ...?? toh chalo chal te hai...

sh: ( slowly..) rey not again...kam se kam hamare saamne toh nahi...

sw: haan rey plzz be ur real self...i think u trust us...

rey smiled at his defeat...AGAIN as always...

r: yaar tum log ye kya keh rahe ho i trust u lyk hell and u know dat ri8???(both nodded) bas uska yaad aagaya...

he said looking away...

sh: rey 1 saal hogaya forget her yaar plzz i cnt see u struck in ur lyf lyk dis...

rey seemed un interested...sharon pleaded swayam to compel him...and as we know majnu sharon ka baat na maane...nah not possible ..

sw: rey sharon is ri8 ...u should frgt her...( he said hesitatingly and 50% knowing his reaction)

rey shot a glance at him and with a stern face he asked swayam...

r: swayam samjho..just imagine ki sharon ne abhi isi waqt tumhe ditch kiya... toh kya use bhool jaoge...in 2 yrs?? no no let me extend in 4 yrs?? rey asked

swayam felt as if some one slapped him...he stood numb...sharon was a bit taken back by the qsn...

r: chup kyun ho?? batao ...tell me swayam...speak up...no nahi na...toh how did u imagine ki mai ek saal mei bhool jaunga...maine kriya ko koi ice creame nahi di bhool jaane keliye uske baare mei...i gave out my heart dammit!!!!!!!! wo mujhe pyaar kare ya na kare woh usi ke paas rahega..its impossible to take it back...

rey yelled out letting his pain come in tears...swayam stood there seeing down...

rey again asked...

r: acha sharon ko chodo...and even leave abt ur love life...kriya ko hi lete hai...she is ur best buddy ri8??? kya tum use bhool paye ho??? tell me...i want u to speak up swayam...

he almost shouted...

swayam slowly said "no"looking down and water filling his eyes...

r: toh...u know swayam...usne mujhe bhale hi ditch kiya ho she is very special to us swayam.. i thought u would understand...i dnt expect dis 4rm u coz u know..and u only can understand ...kyun ki humare life ki sabe valuable do places same ladkiyo ne liya hai...ri8???

swayam nooded and said..."sorry bro actually"

r"hmm... leave it...

they hugged and soon pulled sharon into the hug...

after smtym they pulled back...

sw: acha ye sab senti hona sab chodo we have to move ..show iz gonna strt...

sh: yeah rey and we want u to start the show with ur rocking performance...

r; guys sorry mai perform nahi karna chahta...

swaron: but y??

r: guys actually theek ek saal pehle we cnfessed even thought uska cnfession jhoota ho..i wanna live this day..plzz...i hope u can...

swaron: we can...

r: toh sab ko..

..: even we can...
the trio looked back to find the gang...rey gave a smile and left...everyone decided to leave him alone...

kriya reached delhi...she had heard 4r her frnd that lousians is the special group...she decided she wont perform but just hab=ve a glance a them ..especially him so that she can spend her rest of life thinking abt him...soon after getting down the plane... she checked into her room changed into salwar just to cover her identity and rushed to the place...she barely got ready...her hair was little messy...no earrings...nothing...she just ran to have a look at him 4r the croud of the girls drooling over him...

kriya walked fast when she hit smne and fell donw...it was none other than taani...the gang just then arrived...kriya's back was towards them...

nil: yaar ye taani ab khud ke saath kisi aur ko bhi gira diya...

vic: god man!!!!11 shez weird...

sw: shut up guys chalo help karte hai..

bharat: abey koi zaroorat nahi wo khud girti hai aur khud uth thi hai...

sw: haan par the other one atlest we should help her kahi use uthathe waqt taani phir se gir gayi toh...

all: yeah...and giggled...

swayam went 4r kriya's help...

kriya tried to get up when she saw her end of top struck with her chain...so she again bent down her head ...hair covered her face...she was trying to take it when swayam spoke 4rm behind..

sw: excuse me soory...but do u need some help.??

kriya was overjoyed to hear his voice she just wanna pour her heart out to her best friend...but she was sure he will not sit quite and tell everything to rey...so she just pulled the dress away never bothering whether it torn and was standing up...

kriya had become vry weak and thin ..she had changed a lot in this one yr...i felt as if she had not eaten 4r mnths...swayam helped her in getting up holding her shourders...she said a thanks and dashed out never letting anyone of the gang to see her...swayam was shocked..

ye aawaaz...uski??? agar uski nahi hui toh??? nahi nahi im sure uski hai...after all meri best frnd hai...uski baatein ab tak mei bhool nahi paaya toh aawaaz kaise bhool paunga??? kriya!!!!!! woh kriya this...god im soo happy...(he smiled..but frowned)par usne mujhe dekha tak nahi...y???

a tear escaped his eyes,...sharon noticed this...she placed a hand on his shoulder and asked..

sh: swayam kya hua???

he hugged her and burst out...

sw: sharon wo..wo kriya thi...she didnt even think of seeing me...kya wo mujhe dekhna bhi nahi chahti??? 😭

sh: swayam i dnt think ki..

sw; no sharon i know..wo kriya hi thi...

neha: neha not believing...kyun bhagwan y u not making us see kriya once...😭

rey came to swayam...he just looked at rey and strtd crying seeing him..

sw: rey i cntrld myself 4rm 1 yr not more...ab aur nahi yaar aaj pata hai kriya yaha aayi thi aur ...

rey: i know...

all looked at him shocked..even swayam...

rey: wo actually jab mei jaaraha tha toh i saw taani dashing smone ...help karne jaa raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekha...u knw swayam she has changed...woh bohut kamzoor ban gayi...she is very weak...aur jab tumne usse baat ki she strtd crying and dashed out...i think usne hamse...infact mujhse jhoot bola...i can read the pain in her eyes...


a tear dropped down...swayam wiped his tears...

sw: toh chalo ...chalo na use dhoond the hai...

r: nahi swayam if im ri8...agar mei uski really ache se jaanta hun toh im sure woh jhoota dikhava karegi...

sh: toh kya kare???


all were shocked at this..

sh: guys i know she iz my rival...infact my best rival...im just trying to get her back..itni bhi buri nahi hun kk...

all smiled...

r: i know ...use meri har baat bohut deeply effect karti hai...if she really lied to me dat day...so i want to go in that way...

swaron : but promise u wont hurt urself...

rey smiled"promise...guys closing act mei karna chahta hun,,solo..."

all: 4r sure...

...


all were waiting eagerly...the results were out even the battle ended...but all r waiting 4r THE REYAANSH SINGHANIA's performance as anounced by the anchor...

kriya took her place in btw the girls such that in that big crowd no one could see her...unaware of the fact rey's eyes always sticked on her and gang searching 4r her...

(guys just listen this song...)

ehsaan itna sa karde

i will give sm lyrics...( hip hop style)



Essaan Itna Sa Kar De
Mujhe Phir Tanha Sa Kar De

he danced his heart out ..she could feel his pain

Tere Bina Jeena Sakunga
Mil Ke Yeh Tujhese
Kehna Sakunga

he directly pointed his index finger at her and sang and dance...she was shocked that he found her...

Essaan Itna Sa Kar De
Mujhe Phir Tanha Sa Kar De
Tere Bina Jeena Sakunga
Mil Ke Yeh Tujhese
Kehna Sakunga

he did sm bboying steps and hip hop mixed( imagine kunwar hip hop...uff...i just die 4r it)


Tera Mera Yeh Nata Kyon Tuta

he stood with legs aparta and bent to ri8 slightly and looking straight into her eyes he asked her moving his head..

Tera Mera Yeh Pyaar Kyon Rootha

he fell on his knees singing...

Adhi Baatein Adhuri Raatein

he brushed his hair spread his hands closing his eyes...

Reh Gai Tere Bina

he pointed her opening his eyes at tere bina...



Tanhahiyan Seh Na Sakunga

he souted and bet his hand on the floor hard

Tere Bina Jee Na Sakunga

he just looked at her helplessly when a tear rolled down his cheek

this was enough to make her cry...but she never wanted to show her pain so she slowly slipped 4rm there and ran till she ended up in an deserted canteen...she went to the counter table and sat down leaning on it and cried hard never letting her sound out...

but rey was turning back when she left...sh danced the rest song turning back and if turned front looking down as he doesnt want everyone to see his tears...

Essaan Itna Sa Kar De
Mujhe Phir Tanha Sa Kar De
Tere Bina Jeena Sakunga
Mil Ke Yeh Tujhese
Kehna Sakunga

Tu Nahi Raha Teri Yaad Reh Gai
Palko Pe Teri Aas Reh Gai
Koi To Hoga Bahana Bata
Tujhko Bula Dene Ka


Tanhahiyan Seh Na Sakunga
Tere Bina Jee Na Sakunga

Essaan Itna Sa Kar De
Mujhe Phir Tanha Sa Kar De
Tere Bina Jeena Sakunga
Mil Ke Yeh Tujhese
Kehna Sakunga...



finally he ended and looked up but didnt find her..soon he got down after a small thanks and speech with the anchor and joined the group and went in search of her...








sorry guys my didi arghh!!!!!! she is roaming near me ..ye last line adha ghanta se likh rahi hun...actually isse double update dene wali thi par shaayad aapke naseeb mei nahi tak likha hai...


iska nxt part kaha he? ya nt updated yet..
Edited by namratajadhav - 13 years ago

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