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Posted: 13 years ago
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sad ending though but i loved it :);)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no yaar plzz u cnt stop at dis point wen it turned so interesting..plz write soon n pm me fr sure..
juzz fell in love wid it..u hav written it so nicely thnkz fr dat... those harsh words of swyam cnt even think of dem..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have written one thing common in all OS based on this promo and i would write it here too continue your OS and make it into some SS. BTW awesome writing. Really brought the pain of both. BTW who was the agony aunt ?
Edited by marauder - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey awesome ss
Please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsum & nothing less than that...Swayam was presentd fairly enuf afterall uska dil toota hai haq banta hai...pls continue & pls pm if u can
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Posted: 13 years ago
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in continuation...

"I don't think I understand your question, I am obviously more hurt at what he thinks I am how could he question my character how could he question my feelings." "So that means that you did have feelings for him." "No" replied Sharon "No I didn't I mean look I am a girl and would obviously be hurt if someone thought that I was that sought of a girl. Especially him how could he even think like that what happened to meri nazar se dekho to tum is duniya ki sab se acchi insaan ho. Oh sorry I shouldn't forget that was just pretence." "Do you really think he is that kind of a guy who would judge a person on how good looking the person is?" {nahi body ki beauty nahi heart...heart ki beauty dekhna chahiye } Sharon kept quiet he was drunk then there is no way he could have said that just to impress her. "And" the woman continued "if he doesn't really matter you don't even want him in your life so how does it make a difference what he thinks about you as long as that thought keeps him away from you, you should be happy. And now probably he will be." {tumhari shadow ko bhi nahi chahti main apni life main}

"This is about my character okay he made it sound like I was a." She couldn't bring herself to say it she took a deep breath and began again "he, how could he even think on those lines he made me believe that I was a better person he inspired me to be better he helped me get my confidence back to dance again he said that I was the reason he danced didn't want me to quit he didn't sympathise with me after elims but helped me get even, but probably that was all fake."


Edited by medha_m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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"You say that you are more hurt about what he thinks you are but then why do you keep talking about what he was and how he used to behave with you and how you believe that it was all fake."Sharon was stunned for the second time that night she didn't know what to say she tried changing the topic "no actually I am worried about that he might share his disgusting thoughts about me with the college and"

"Yeah I was wondering about that he must have known about the party incident since that very day so why didn't he confront you in front of the whole college why didn't he answer you back then why did he wait for everyone to go." {kehne ko toh main bhi bohut kuch keh sakta hun Sharon but main kuch keh ke sabke saamne tumhari insult nahi karna chahta can't let this happen to you}

"Well but probably you are right how could he question your intentions when his weren't pure enough he had been trying to manipulate you he must have been very happy while doing it right getting sadistic pleasure while humiliating you in front of no one." Sharon looked at her questioningly "I mean in the classroom when he was giving you your character analysis his eyes must have been filled with hatred or maybe with pleasure at your state." That's when it hit her 'his eyes' she had been staring into his eyes all the while they were not filled with hate or pleasure or were not even mocking her like his tone and expressions but were filled with pain only pain. She went back to the New Year's night the night after Shivam's party his hand was bandaged he looked away when their eyes met he acted aloof all night he walked away when Shivam wished her. He had decided to quit college the next day. But what touched her the most was he still cared after knowing what had happened at the party he had cared about her wound had moved her leg to stretch it and she remembered how hesitant he was how he had looked at her as if asking for permission he stood there when she confessed she was scared and had carried her down to the spot. He put his differences and his pain aside only for her sake how could she even think even imagine he was using her she had made a terrible mistake.

"No he is not that kind of a guy who would derive sadistic pleasure out of anyone's misery." She shouted too loudly
Edited by medha_m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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and finally the last part ...

"are you defending him?" Sharon kept quiet "but why he doesn't mean anything to you moreover he was using you."

She couldn't keep quiet any longer she burst out saying "no he didn't his eyes clearly expressed his misery on hurting me his pain was evident today, at the new year's party and also at the abandoned corridor. He could never do that if he had been using me he wouldn't have cared at all about me he wouldn't have known me so well what have I done he must be miserable right now might have even ripped apart the whole Sharon's corner the whole classroom thing he was just giving me a taste of my own medicine only defending himself protecting himself from any further pain I am an idiot what else could he do since showing his love doesn't really work on a stupid nutcase that I am. He genuinely tried to stay away he didn't try to open the book but I might have just burned it to ashes with what I have done today." The woman couldn't help but smile "so you do care about his feelings and most importantly you can read him you are able to see deep into his heart actually understand him despite his excuses and pretences." Sharon agreed "I do understand him all that he tries to say without actually speaking the words this is love it has to be love what else can it be I am in love with him and he has finally started to hate me." The woman gestured to the server for the cheque and replied to her "I don't really think he has it in him to hate you or he would have been at the place a long time back but yeah he might have lost his faith in this relationship completely he might have stopped trusting you. You will have to do something about it wouldn't you and by the way the payment is on me." "I can pay for myself." "I am sure you can but please let me and don't you start again on how sorry you are for bothering me it's my job." "What? Helping people or giving them advice so are you a psychologist." The woman laughed "NO, not really let's just say providing people with what they need and you definitely need that guy in your life." " yeah I do but what should I do know" "well what else woo him okay that sounds a little old school but make him believe in you again make him smile take a step towards him and don't get discouraged if he ignores you at first I am sure he will come around. He did it for you before it's your turn now all the best." Smiling the woman got up and started walking towards the door Sharon didn't move still deep in thought she turned around when the woman called out her name.

"hey Sharon, Swayam is a gem of a person don't lose him ever come what may." Sharon smiled and waved she watched as the woman walked outside then she realised it she had never told the woman his name how did she know that his name was Swayam "mam, your change" Sharon took the bill it was signed by the woman in her name 'sharanjeet rai prakash' she immediately stood up in shock and looked outside the window searching for her but the woman had disappeared in the crowd.

Edited by medha_m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..just wow.. very nicely written 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudku

Wow..just wow.. very nicely written 👏


thank you 😊

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