~~D3 FF-EK MAIN AUR EKK TU~~CHAP 12 PG 47*NEW - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Born2Dance

awesum update dear...


glad of swayam's decision...

thank u sooo much!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Guys my exams r starting this week...so this will be ma last update 4 two weeks...I'm sooo srry...Guys my exams r starting this week...so this will be ma last update 4 two weeks...I'm sooo srry...n guys plzzz after every cmmnt write ur name cox I donno most of u ppl!!! Srry...now widout any delay...Chapter 5!

Rey is @ his house!!
Rey:kal toh kriya se kisi bhi tarah se baat karni hogi varna who mujhe galat samajh baithegi!
But mujhe ek baat samaj main nahi aa rahi hai ki maine aaj tak kisi ladhki ko itni importance nahi di except Sharon..aur who toh meri best frmd hai...but kria who toh meri frnd nahi hai.. Best frnd toh bahoot dur ki baat hai who meri frnd bhi nahi hai...phir bhi main usse har chiz ki explanation dena chahta hoon..aisa kyun???kya main usse pya..(He stops)nahi aisa nahi ho sakta..Ahhh Rey chod yeh sab baate varna tera dimaag kharab ho jayega vaise bhi tu uss baatcutter se baat karne jaa raha hai toh tera dimaag think hona chahiye varna aur jhagda ho jayega!!!

Next scene!!
Swayam @ his house!!
Swayam:aaj main pehli baar sharon se aise baat ki...par kya yeh sab rite tha..I think ab bass ho gaya..maine bahoot saari sharon ki baat sunn li aur bahoot insult bhi apni kara li...ab bas ho gaya...I think ki ab se mujhe bhi sirf apne dosto ke bare main sochna chahiye jaise who karti hai...main nahi janta ki maine joh decide kiya who sahi hai ya galat but ab se main yehi karunga!!

Next morning::
Boys locker room.
Swayam was alone n thinking abt wht he decided yesterday n then Rey enters..(Note:rey n swayam r still not frnds)
Rey:hiii..
Swayam:hiii.
Rey:tumse kuch puch sakta hoon..I mean mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
Swayam:ek dazzler mujhse baat karna chah raha hai..wooow..bolo!!
Rey:swayam I noe ki tu sharon se pyaar karta hai aur tujhe bahoot bura bhi laga hoga ki tune sharon se uss tarah se baat ki thi kal..par(swayam cuts him)
Swayam:Rey main nahi jaanta ki joh maine kiya who sahi tha ya nahi but aaj se main bhi wohi karunga joh tumlog karte ho!!
Rey:humlog kya karte hai??
Swayam:aapne dosto ko support!!
(Swayam was leaving)
Rey:swayam ek min..dekh tu toh janta hai ki mujhe yeh divide nahi pasand hai.yeh sab sharon vicky aur nil karte hai..
Swayam : haan toh..
Rey:mujhe apna sentence to complete karne de na yaar!!
Swayam:kkk..srry!!
Rey:haan..toh main yeh keh raha tha ki kya hum..u noe..I mean kya hum dost ban sakte hai..I mean if u don't mind...kyunki ab mujhe jhagda nahi karna hai kisi ke saath bhi!!
Swayam:ya sure..mujhe bhi ab jhagda nahi karna kisi ke saath!!!
Rey:thanx!!


Now rey was walking in the corridoor!!

Rey was thinking how to talk to kria!! Then he sees fire exit but thinks how to get her here!!

Now the collage has finished..
Rey was in the fire exit..
Rey saw kria cmn..
He waited 4 her to cum then pulled her in..
Kria:(screaming)yeh kya ho raha hai??
Rey kept his hand on his mouth!!(Background ooohhooo is playing)
Rey was staring @ her eyes n in his mind he was like she has lovely eyes man!!
Reys hands were still on kria's mouth n she was making noises so that Rey moves his hand!!
Rey cums back to his senses n moves his hand from his mouth...
Rey:srry..
Kria:yeh aap kar kya rahe the ha..aap apne aap ko samajte kya ho..jo mann main aaya wahi kiya..
Rey:kria meri baat toh.(Kria cuts him)
Kria:mujhe aapki baat nahi sunni hai..
Rey:mujhe bolne ka mauka dongi.
Kria:mujhe na aapki baat sunni hai aur naa hi aapko bolne ka mauka dena hai!!
Rey got dam angry..
Kria:main ja rahi hoon..
She turned to leave but rey held her hand n pinned her to the wall.
Kria:mera haath chodo aur mujhe jaane do..
Rey:pehle meri baat suno...
Kria:kaha na nahi sunna hai!!!
Rey:tum ho kya yaar..I mean jabhi mujhe tumse baat karni hai tum mujhe karne deti nahi hoo..phir jab hamari team ke beech main jhagda hota hai tum mujhe blame karti ho..main kitni koshish kar raha hoon ki main tumse jhagda na karu par tum hamesha jhagadne lagti ho..main yeh chahta hoon ki hum dost bankar rahe par tumhe toh mujhse jhagda hi karna hai!!
Aur tumne agar bolna shuru kar diya toh kisi aur ko mauka toh deti hi nahi ho!! Aur mujhe yeh bhi nahi pata ki main tumhe explanations kyun de raha hoon..aur yeh baat mujhe irritate kar raha hai...I donno dam it!! Tumhe pata hai main aisa kyun kar raha hoon???

Kria was dumbstruck
Kria:mujhe kaise pata hoga ki aap yeh kyun kar rahe ho!!!!
(He was sooo angry that he bangs his hand on the wall n leaves)

Kria to herself:yeh rey ko ho kya gaya hai?? Aur who itne kyun affect ho raha hai meri baat se aur mujhe explanation kyun de raha hai...!! Mujhe lagta hai pagal ho gaya hai aur mujhe bhi pagal kar denga!!

To be continued...

Promo:Rey is sitting on the staircase wid swayam n sumthing else!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
great update...kriyaansh is always a treat to read!
luved the way this ff is proceeding...thnxx for the pm😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Reyam became friends that was really good
I hope kriyansh bhi jaldi frnds ban jaye
Waiting for next part
All the best for ur exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
aahhh...nyc update...rey's confusion and swayam's decision was awesome...


finally reyam friends...now we wud get some cute mature funny scenes...

loved how they became frnds...


arghh...,kria usko baat to kanre diya karo...gud that rey took out all his frustration...poor kria...her reaction at the end was hilarious...lovd it...wud be waiting for another part...


till then all the best for ur exams...rock it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

great update...kriyaansh is always a treat to read!

luved the way this ff is proceeding...thnxx for the pm😊

thank u sooo much...i was sooo scared that this part was not gud!!! but after reading ur cmmnts i am really happy!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
Reyam became friends that was really good
I hope kriyansh bhi jaldi frnds ban jaye
Waiting for next part
All the best for ur exams

thank u sooo much...hv patience kriyaansh bhi bahoot jaldi dost ban jayege!!!!!!!! n thanx alot 4 cmmnting...it means alot!!!!!!!!! thank u sooo much!!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

aahhh...nyc update...rey's confusion and swayam's decision was awesome...



finally reyam friends...now we wud get some cute mature funny scenes...

loved how they became frnds...


arghh...,kria usko baat to kanre diya karo...gud that rey took out all his frustration...poor kria...her reaction at the end was hilarious...lovd it...wud be waiting for another part...


till then all the best for ur exams...rock it...

i noe...rey bichara hamesha confused rehta hai...jab rey 😊😃 ne usse naam diya hai baatcutter toh obvio woh uska pura phayda uthayegi...im really glad u luv ma ff...n i really hope that i can rock ma exams..thank u sooo much!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
thanks for the pm
all the best for your exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updt tehmina

Wow!! Reyam frnzzz

bechara rey kitna kanfused h...

Waiting for the nxt one

All the best for ur xams..! 😊

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