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Posted: 13 years ago


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rubykatariya

superb update

love it
geet is so sweet
maan is so caring..



thank u so much dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

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i know dear u all are waiting...
agar net ne sath diya to aaj jarur update kar dungi mai...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Haaye!!!
Such a lovy-dovy part.
Pics dekh k fir se ye scene dekhne ka mann ho raha hai.
Really miss my maaneet/gurti ki unko yad krke aansoo aa jate hai.
Well abt dis part.its awesome!
Want to see few scenes whr thr is still some jhijhak btwn maaneet.let them tk some time to settle dis new relation in their lyf n behaviour



thank u so much dear...
really.. aww so sweet...
mujhe bhi.. sometimes i was on the verge of crying... pics dekhkar hi...
yeah... there will little bit jhijhak between them.. will try to give those scenes also...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24

Hyyeee.. so lovely update dear...

Love my chipku maaneet...



thanks a lot dear...
me too love our chipku maaneet...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


Originally posted by: crazydream

Beautiful update

Both Maan n Geet confessed their love for each other... Finally the most awaited part has come.

Maan has removed all the insecurities og Geet.

The poem was beautifully written.

Thanks for pm.
Continue soon



thanks a lot dear...haan finally both confessed their love...
at-last ek responsibility khuatam huyi...
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Posted: 13 years ago

First I am holding my ears for giving you the update very late.. really very very sorry...actually there is no fault of mine' the update was ready but my net ditched me and I couldn't be able to update it' but now I gave you a very long update with the words of 2,653' so now no kanjoosi in long comments'and i was in hurry so sabko reply nahi kar paayi... actually update karna jaruri tha...


part-48


He went near her and sat beside her o the bed'. He took her hand in his and kissed it'. She felt his presence and woke up'. And found him near her'. She smiled and tried to sat up but maan stopped her and helped her'.

Maan-geet'change your clothes' we have to go home' she smiled' and stood up with the help of maan and maan took her to the washroom' she went inside and maan stood outside'.. after some minutes get came out after changing her clothes in the same white suit looking a perfect angel'maan couldn't able to take off his eyes on hers keep staring at her continuously without blink..just gaping at her and she is all red with his intense gaze making her cheeks beet root red' she shyly looked down but maan still gaping at her'then she realized still his eyes on her, she playfully hit him on his arm ,just helping him for coming out in his dream land' he became embarrassed being caught like this' he shyly scratch his head and gave her his a sweet yet his little smile which makes her heart upside down'

She get to know how she is looking because like he was gaping at her obviously she is looking perfect like MAAN's choice' obviously maan ki choice aisi waisi to hogi nahi'. Hai na ;) she took her belongings and headed towards the door while maan still rooted on his place not realized that geet had gone' but then she looked back not feeling he is there and found he s still stood there.. she went near him and poked him on his shoulder with her index finger.. he startled and looked here & there who poked him' he turned and found geet who is stood behind him folding her arms on her chest.. she raised her brows for questioning him but maan has his different plans' he was looking at her angelic face and move towards her.. she took her steps backward and he is going ahead towards her..she is taking her steps back and he is moving ahead.. finally she tucked on the rim of the bed in the hospital's room and he came near her'

his name came out from her mouth just like a whisper which is soothing for him' like he has not listened his name before like this' he slowly forward his hand towards her face, she followed her gaze to his hand where his hand is moving and he tucked a single curly strand behind her ear which is teasing her smoothie cheeks' she smiled little knowing he can't bare anything else touch her beside him' her lips tremble little which makes him restless' he wants to chew her lips right now but couldn't as they have to leave from here.. it's already very late' now he came in his teasing mood and starts teasing her.. has a evil smirk on his face which geet is not able to see'

Maan-geet'aise yaha kyo ruki ho..? ghar nahi jana kya? He asked having his face's muscles firm not showing any of his emotions' geet looked at him in confusion.. she stood there because of him and now he is asking to her why she is here'

Geet-maan' ye aap' aap hi to mere kareeb'' maan raised his brows' and cut her in mid'

Maan-ha geet'mai tumhare kareeb kya geet? Bolo geet' he muffled his smile and has his stern face'

Geet-nahi..wo mai' she is confuse..

Maan-achha.. to tum mere kareeb aa rahi thi.. right? Tum yahi kehna chahti ho na?

Geet-nahi maan' aap ye kya keh rahe ho' mai kaha aapke kareeb aa rah thi' aap hi to mere kreeb aa rahe the to mai'.

Maan-to? To mai kya geet? Tumhe kuch kuch feel ho raha tha geet isliye tum ruk gayi? She at once looked at him' still not able to see the mischievous eyes '.

Geet-nahi maan'

Maan-matlab tumhe kuch feel nahi hua.. yahi kehna chahti ho na..theek hai' he show his fake anger to her'

Geet-nahi maan.. mera matlab hai ki mujhe, maan cut her off again in mid'he is having lots of fun in teasing her so much' poor soul not understanding his double meanings'

Maan-matlab tumhe feel hua?

Geet-ab aap mujhe kuch bolne denge to mai bolungi na..chhaddo mujhe aapse baat hi nahi karni' she came in her angry mode and starts walking out of the room'. And starts her cribbing to her babaji' maan shook his head and walked behind her'

Maan-arey geet' ruko'kaha ja rahi ho'

Geet-mujhe aapse baat nahi karni'. And kept walking out of the hospital and maan is behind her'

Maan-geet , I was just kidding' please ruk jao.. dekho you are not well' but she is walking still' maan ran in his full speed and came in front of her and lift her in his arms' her eyes popped open and looked here & there what if people saw them' she wriggle in his grip but that too tight for her.. her fragile wrists are not able to free herself in his grip' geet'you can't get success in free yourself from my grip so stop wriggling and don't look here and there..stop searching anyone else'I am here for you' just concentrate on me'maan said to her and wink at her that makes her blush' last line echoing in her ears just concentrate on me'

He went towards his car while lifting her in his arms and she is just blushing hearing his last line again and again just concentrate on me' he opened his car lock from the remote key of the car and opened the door and made her sit down on the seat beside on the driver seat and himself took the driver seat beside her.. look at her for a moment and start the car' still she has a blush on her face but now she is looking outside the window and maan also feeling relief now seeing his jaan again in herself' these week was very emotional for her and now she is smiling now it makes his heart happier than before' she suffered a lot in the last week and he too suffered' but now no more.. he is driving at his normal speed so that he can spend some more time with her before dropping her at her home' just then she reminded that he teased her in the hospital and she was teased by him.. she made a grumpy face and turned towards him and looked at him with her grumpy face and twisted her upper lip and nose too.. he looked at her and he can sense that she remember something that made her angry again.. he starts praying to her babaji please bacha lena'!! Then her mood swing and her eyes moist remembering something more' he saw little tears in her eyes that he couldn't bare in her eyes and that too because of him' he stop the car after driving little far away from the hospital somewhere in the mid but in a quiet place' he cupped her face in his palms then Maan wrapped his arms around geet and she cuddled closer to him, taking all the warmth she could get from his manly body. It was so relaxing, having him holding her. He just pressed her car seat down & made her lie down horizontally. He laid beside her sideways and put his arm under her neck and stared intently at her. She started talking how she was harsh with him in his office and said so rude words to him.. she is still not believing that she said all this to him and he was listening all this' she accused him so much but he didn't uttered any word '.. he hugged her with a squeeze and she said I'm so sorry. Maan looked at her with sadness and wiped tears gently from the hollow of her eye'

Maan lowered his head and kissed her so tenderly on her cheek that she thought she imagined it. Yeah they have kissed in hospital but now they are in car in mid of the road and now she is really emotional' Geet felt awkward kissing by him in the car, what if someone saw them in this position' then he dug his face in her hair as he hugged her. Maan lifted his head and look at her with admiration again and she smiled at him as best she could with moist eyes. Then he lowered his head to her lips and pecked them so lightly and tenderly, and looked back at her with a smile. Geet was shocked ,he is kissing her mid of the road'. But then a blush spread on her face' They looked at each other for a longer moment and he came closer and kissed her again but he lingered on her lips. Geet looked at him again and smiled dazedly and he lowered his head again to kiss her and this time she opened her mouth for him. He moved his mouth over hers and it felt thrilling yet subduing as she felt his full moist lips on hers. The skin of his lips were soft like satin and they were irresistible. she wasn't sure she was doing correct kissing him here or not but she calmed herself and enjoyed the kiss. Both of them could not have enough of it. Soon one kiss melted into another and then another and so on until it became one long kiss that showed no sign of ending. And they had no problems kissing each other until they both were senseless. Her arms wound around his neck pulling him closer that if he could be any closer.
Maan ' missed u jaan'
Geet nodded with tears in her eyes.
Maan kissed her tears away & pulled her strands behind her ears, he diverted her mind ' pyari lagrahi ho..she thought ab inhe yaad aayi ki kisi ko compliment bhi dena chahiye but she lowered her gaze digesting what he said to her just now' she is looking beautiful' it is 2nd time maan complimented her' first time he compliments her on the karwa-chauth' but that time she didn't realize his feelings nor her.. now she get to know what he meant when he complimented her'she shied again thinking about the karwa chauth and their time they had spent together of the night of karwa chauth..wo maan ke hatho geet vrat Khulna, maan ka geet ko gift dena and sath me dinner karna' she couldn't believe that it all happened with her unknowingly'. But she is very happy now'.
Maan ' waise ye suit kisliye pehna? Mere liye? she shied & buried her head in his chest

Geet- ye suit aapke liye nahi pehna tha' she looked at his face for looking his expressions'.

Maan-achha'. Fir kisliye pehna tha? He wrapped his arms around her slender waist'she played with his fingers and replied to him'.

Geet-wo to college me fashion show tha na isliye'. She rested her face on his chest wrapping her arms around his waist'.

Maan-achha to you were enjoying the fashion show without me'!! He made a sad face'. she pulled her face little and looked in his eyes while hugging him..

Geet-aisa nahi hai.. I was missing you so much'. And again she became sad'.

maan-Itna miss kar rahi thi tu ek phone nahi kar sakti thi'.
Geet ' aap bhi to kar sakte the she knew it's her fault for not talking to him but madam apni galti thodi manengi...
Maan rolls his eyes ' kaunse number pe karta, jab dekkho phone tod deti ho.. she makes a baby face.
Geet ' I don't know all that, u didn't call me, u didn't miss me; u just troubled me all this while pata hain maine kitna miss kiya aap ko'
He just takes her lips again into his & slides his arms around her & passionately kisses her. She
kissed him back with same flavor breaking all her barriers of shyness accepting their feelings.
He opened his eyes & looked at her she was lost in his arms & their kiss. her cheeks went in deep red color and she is looking more beautiful in redness '
She slowly opened her eyes to meet his gaze. She shied & her breath almost froze. Maans
hand were all over her loving her, holding her closer, he had been longing for this moment since
the time he fell for her. Those lips have been tempting him, lingering in his thoughts, driving him insane every now' always he was craving for this moment and finally it had came in his life when he is holding his life in his arms saving her from the world'. he just couldn't have enough of them. They just got carried away in that moment for such
a long time they really didn't know how long they have been lost in each other' just melting in each other arms treasuring each other with their intense wet kisses which maan is giving on her face and lips' she just carried away with his passion'after a while when he saw she is panting he stopped himself and straighten himself.. and he pulled the seat at the position.. she also straighten herself.. her lips are little bit sore with his continuous sucking' she lowered her gaze again not able to meet his gaze' maan forward his hand to the dashboard and kept two packets in his hand.. she looked at the packets suspiciously' but has excitement too' last time he gave her a mobile phone which she broke that..she felt bad'


Geet ' kya hain isme?

Maan-this is for you and handed a packet to her and this is for me.. left a packet in his hand'
Maan ' open it
Geet excitedly opened the pack; it had a blackberry phone & with her own old number.
Geet ' phir se mera number kaise? Last time bhi I forgot to ask you'.
He rolled his eyes'. Geet I am thinking that I should buy some blackberries phones with the same number'she hit him on his shoulder'ouch geet'

Geet-mai itne phone nahi todti'

Maan-really..!! she divert the topic Then she asked uss packet me kya hai?

Maan-this is mine'

Geet-mere liye kyo nahi?

Maan-now you are mine so gift is also mine'. She touched with the choice of his words..now she is his' belongs to maan' only maan..!! he said little but he said very much in his short sentence' he opened the packet and slide a ring in her finger which gave surprise to her'


her eyes twinkling and a wide smile spread on her lips' he is very happy seeing her happy'she looked at the ring..it is very beautiful' a gold ring which have a single diamond in mid which is shinning like a star and her finger giving it more glow' actually the ring was nothing.. it went priceless when geet wore it..

Maan-do you remember once we said to each other that we are GF and BF?

Geet-haan maan' I do' but that time we were fake girlfriend and boyfriend'. Hai na?

Maan-hmm'. But now we are no more girlfriend and boyfriend' Now you are my official love' my jaan.. girlfriend is a very small word and it doesn't suit you' she looked at him surprisingly' what he is saying'?geet I don't want to insult you calling you as a girlfriend'. he held her hand and kissed on the hand' she hugged him immediately carried away in the over flow of the emotions'

Precap

Teasing session and maaneet get to know the truth'

Finally I am done with this part.. pretty long part na..!! now I want long-2 comments' and now I am happy that I gave it according to the precap' so tell me hows this? Am I going to right track or not? Please give me your suggestions,, it means a lot to me' now this FF went on a romantic mode.. now no more MU's.. just romance is in the air for the 3 love couples'. .

friends... here is my friend's ff... she is new writer here.. please read her ff and do comments.. it's really a very good story on maaneet... maaneet's nok-jhok and cute-2 scenes are there... please support her with your love and comments...

Sargoshiyan-Whisper of Love


Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow wow neha after a long time dear...
really missed u loads..
asa gayab mat ho yaar...
well coming to the update..
awesome dear... loved it...
ohh maan lost in geet and teasing her.. loved that scene..
maan scooped geet in his arms. wahooo
geet again became sad remembering all those incidents... and the kiss...
first kiss middle of the road... *whistle*
and their hug... maan teasing geet about mobile and again kiss...
and maan gift ring...
wow now geet is maan;s and maan is geet's ... his life his jaan.,,,,
superb dear.
continue soon...

love u..hugs to u...
iss baar dont gayab... 😡
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update..
yeh geet hope tat she does not brek this phone also...
thx for pm

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