About Last Night THREAD 4**Part 38-48**

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Arathy-V

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Posted: 13 years ago

#801

awww short n sensous..n yeah the last line from arnav made it in2 an emotional one as well..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#802

very nice though very short this update is.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#803

Don't know why but I thought you were going to start on a new event with this chapter so I loved that it was a continuation of the last part! Loved the flirtatiousness of it.

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Neha

@melovemayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#804

I like it!!

No No!!!

I love it :)

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#805

loved it short sweet and very cute loved the update loved the play of word loved the last line when he thanked her for loving him very beautifully loved it

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Firebolt

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Posted: 13 years ago

#806

They fall in love more every day don't they? and who would have thought- Khushi a minx...Loved the update...

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LoLo

@LoLo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#807

Thanks for the quick update. These two are too hot. Someone needs to hose them down for sure!!!😉

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Smita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#808

Part 43

If Arnav was the anchor of the Raizada family, then Anjali had always been its heart.- Very true!

Me loved the wonderful budding friendship between Khushi the kid and Anjali!

I loved the scene between Yash and Anjali. They r getting more comfortable with each other. I like that!

It was this attractive scene that Arnav and Khushi found themselves intruding upon. The pleasure in seeing his sister laugh was so significant that Arnav failed to see that other something that Khushi immediately saw. And, as was often the case with Khushi, one slight inkling led to an infinite understanding, and within a few minutes, she had an exact picture of how this disastrous story would have its own very happy ending.- Wonderful explanation of the different perspectives of Arnav & Khushi and how they see the same scene differently,Khushi catching on the not so obvious part and hoping for a bright future! Very well written!👏

"Don't be angry, Chotte," she prefaced her statement, "but I want to see him."

"Absolutely not!"

"No!"

Khushi looked between the two men, not quite certain who had said what, but certain that they had both spoken at the same time.

Yash seemed to colour slightly, Khushi thought. He stood and explained, "I mean, as a physician, I would not wish to see you further agitated."- aha!So my doubt turns into a confirmation! Yash does have a soft corner or more than that for Anjali.The way he covered up for it was so cute!

Little Khushi, who had been forgotten in this heavy discussion, approached the bed and asked her friend, "do you need a cuddle?"

Anjali looked at her and drew her into her arms. "I need lots of cuddles."- Loved these two lines,the last one touched my heart.

Part 44

U've explained the awkwardness between Yash & Anjali exceptionally well. 👏They did what they could do best to avoid further embarrasment,but when the technician finally realized her mistake,and Anjali realized the stigma of being an unmarried/divorcee pregnant woman,it just made matters worse.

Di," Khushi scolded her sister-in-law when they were alone, "you will make yourself truly ill if you continue in this way."

Anjali looked at her helplessly. "I can't stop thinking of him," she cried.- Aww..!! Poor Anjali! I feel really sorry for her. But I must appreciate Khushi,for doing all it takes,even if it means scolding her,to get her out of her sorry state.

These thoughts created in him a deep longing to see and be with Khushi.- Aww! The first thing that comes to his mind when he is distressed is to be with his wife. I'm loving this Arnav!

Khushi rose and came to touch his hand, unclenching his fist with her fingers. He read her eyes. He was being unnecessarily harsh, they told him.- again I love how Arnav understands what Khushi wants through her small gestures.

After dinner, Yash and Little Khushi retired to the study to watch a cartoon. Their laughter brought others into the room to join them, including Anjali. Arnav, at ease that his sister was stable, turned his attention the woman who had his heart.- These lines speak so much about Arnav. The one who will first fulfill his responsibility,at the moment,that's Anjali.Then and only then will he think about himself and what he wishes.👏

The last scene was naughty and fun. I loved the whole scene! Arnav and Khushi are getting more and more comfortable with each other with each passing day. Now Khushi doesnt hesitate to flirt with him,which is something I like!

Will read the next part and reply later. Thanks for the pms!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#809

Res

*Edited

So you started from where you left off Chapter 44 but then left us hanging again?! Now you better start from where you left off here! ;) :D

It was a really nice update - teasing, naughty, alluring, seductive and suddenly serious and pure loving with Arnav's Thank You. :)

And I loved that line of how Arnav spared a moment to feel bad for all husbands who woke up to the same woman every day whereas his wife was feisty and unpredictable!

PS - I had updated my 'Res' for the last chapter yesterday only but dunno if you saw it - Page 102. :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago