About Last Night THREAD 4**Part 38-48**

First Previous

Page

122

Next Last

Frequent Posters

nam_adi

@nam_adi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#1201

Awesomest FF :)) Love your style... You so deserve the new thread!!! Thanks a ton for the PMs.

Quote

Sushi_freebird

@Sushi_freebird

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1202

hey wat a wonderful writer r u...👏👏 am spell bound...i read all ur chapters in one go 2day since i was new to the forum...loved each and every bit of emotions u portrayed...plz do pm if u can...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

amritab

@amritab

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#1203

Are you a fan of Jane's? I see some resemblance in your work and hers and it's great! It's been an absolutely wonderful read so far - just discovered the thread and have read all of the chapters in the span of a few hours! Looking forward to seeing where you take the story next - and more than a little hopeful that Anjali and Yash end up together.

Quote

mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1204

Please update the link on your first page...I was lost for sometime trying to find it 😃

Quote

rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1205

Sorry... I couldn't comment earlier. The last few parts were amazing. They were very well written. I love how little Khushi got attached to Anjali. It was a lovely update.

Quote

Rose Khan

@roserocks

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1206

i read all 45 parts in 3 dats, this is real good, keep it up and u have to make khushi preganant soon

Quote

anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1207

awesome ff !!!!!! so many emotions are portrayed so well and every character in this fiction are described thoroughly!! beautifully written!!!!! could you please send me a pm for further updates please !!!!!!!!!!!

Quote

Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#1208

Part 48

The first few lines show what a thorough gentleman is Dr. Yash.And though he doesnt approve of Arnav's gruff nature,he knows very well how deeply he loves Khushi and Anjali. And he is happy that his friend has got sucha life partner! Wow! I'm truely impressed with the way u have developed this character 'Yash'!👏

Little Khushi was instructed by her father to thank everyone properly and kiss everyone goodbye; which she did beautifully—until she realized that everyone meant also parting from her new friend, Anjali.- Awww! Poor baby! She is as much attached to Anjali as Anjali is attached to her.

Its so nice to see Anjali's motherly love for Little Khushi.I loved the way she calmed her down,explained to her y it was imperative for her to go to Lucknow and soothed her by saying that she would join her soon! And then distracted her by talking about the bday cake.

Khushi stole a glance at Yash and saw that his eyes were resting on the woman, in whose arms his daughter snuggled.- Awww!! Little Khushi is not the only one who's gonna miss Anjali in Lucknow!

She touched Arnav's thigh to silently bring his attention to what she witnessed, but almost immediately realized that it was best to remain silent on the matter. - I loved this line,shows Khushi's understanding of when to talk to Arnav about what.

Fortunately Arnav did not read anything into her gesture; he covered her hand with his and played with her fingers between shifting gears. - M glad Arnav didnt read into the matter.

Quote

Roshkolovemusic

@Roshkolovemusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#1209

Read all the updates. Wow! Simply awesome. Loved the Way you wrote the story. Amazing talent.keep up the good work. Pls continue dear😃

Quote

@guggu

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#1210

Great story! I am addicted to this FF!!

You are an awesome story-teller. the magic you weave with your words is spellbinding! Please continue soon and pm me please?

Swati :)