FF-So you better be normalnow(PART11)(page 39)

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suri2610

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Just love your OS. Pls pls pls continue

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darkninja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

nishant tu toh gaya
45 mins and then ur fired 🤣

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gauri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

wer is next part posted???

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Swetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

iv read this part many times!!!😃

please please please update the next part!!

im dying to knw wat happens nexxt! 😭

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

[grrttt , nice read...😊

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multifaceted

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Read the last 3 chapters...great going...loved the last part...can't wait to see how everything unfolds...thank for the PM

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CrazY-4-BaRuN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

45 mins and then.. YOU ARE FIRED ! 😆😆

U dunno how much i was smiling like an idiot at this ! 😃

Pls PM me too wen u update ! You have a new fan ! 👏😉

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pakpearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

what the😲...no updates since may😡

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

That was truely different one from u.ofcourse there were sabi' touches here n there.just like
"aur yeh hame ajeeb keh rahe hain".'even the god has self respect','lakshmi giving him 'looks'(yeah,n i can truely imagine their facial expression).
But altogether its quite different from ur otherones.let me tell you somethng quite serious(kabi kabi main aise bhi ho jathi hoon).they way u'v written khushi's dialogues in this particular ff,oh i just loved it.the perfect breaking of arnav in"aa..rnav..ji",oh it feels like i'm wtchng the show.arre yaar,khushi cut her wrist,arnav confessed the whole truth,that guy got fired and u stopped the ss,os(jo bhi ho),kaahe...come on tells us.

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saucechips

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: Crazy_soul
That was truely different one from u.ofcourse there were sabi' touches here n there.just like
"aur yeh hame ajeeb keh rahe hain".'even the god has self respect','lakshmi giving him 'looks'(yeah,n i can truely imagine their facial expression).
But altogether its quite different from ur otherones.let me tell you somethng quite serious(kabi kabi main aise bhi ho jathi hoon).they way u'v written khushi's dialogues in this particular ff,oh i just loved it.the perfect breaking of arnav in"aa..rnav..ji",oh it feels like i'm wtchng the show.arre yaar,khushi cut her wrist,arnav confessed the whole truth,that guy got fired and u stopped the ss,os(jo bhi ho),kaahe...come on tells us.

and you stopped your comment at the wrong spot..it continues like this-

and then you got bashed for not continuing this, people asked you why the sautela treatment to your very first ff, etc.etc. lol. but seriously, have you read i promise? it was the continuation i had wanted for the story, funny and suitable..but i wrote it before and then lost interest in this one..but i am planning to continue it very very soon..very very..