LOVE IZ LIKE HEAVEN BUT IT HURTS LIKE HELL - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Awesome :)

Both of them in the same house :)
Update soon :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
hmm i made swaron a couple becauz otherwise in the future it will be hard for me to concentrate on kriyanshand thank you all for your comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
chapter 5: (A)

guys i know i am updating a bit late and plzz dont complain about length i dont get enough time becauz of studies ok ok bakwaas band directed to the ff:


the next morning krisha woke up and kria saw the clock it was already 9 she hurried to to the washroom and freshen up but sharon was still sleeping kria pushed her

k:sharon utto 9 baj gaye hain

s:choro naa swayam kya kar rahe ho (note sharon is in her dream land)

k:sharon janni lets have a kiss(trying to be swayam and leening towards her)

but soon sharon noticed her nails which were on her shoulder and woke up and said

s:tum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

k:nahin tu kya swayam ho ga

s: kya hai sone do naa

k: maharani apne dreamland se bahar aoa yaad hai naa shifting karni hai (note krisha and reyam have agreed on the flat disscussion)


s:ok ok just chill pata hai tum itni betab kyun ho rahi ho

k:kyun?

s:rey se jo milna hai


k:sharon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s:uff yahan tu sach bolo tu karwa (sour) lagta hai


k:sharon i am telling you the last time enough he is just my friend

s:(mumbling) jaldi kuch aur ho jaye ga


k:tum ne kuch kaha?>

s:nahin tu kuch nahi

they both were going to start the packing but the door bell rand and sharon went to open the door whereas kria was standing on a stool gathering somethings for the upper cup board

sharon opened the door and two handsome young mens were standing there (guess karo arre yaar aur kon ho skata hai reyam ke alawa)

s:hi swayam hi rey

reyam:hi

s:tum log yahan

rey:socha tum logoon ki packing mein help kar deen

s:thanks alot

s:come in

the three of them came in and started putting things in the cartoons

swaron were busy with their LLLHHH mode and gathering books whereas rey was standing just near the cupboard where kria was standing on the stool


r:hey kria kya kar rahi ho

k:kuch nahi

as soon as she said that she lost her balance and fell down not actually down hamara hero khara tha naa he caught her waist as tight as he can but kria's hand hitted the corner of the cup board and started bleeding she cried in pain


swaron came running rey made her sit onthe coauch

sh:kya hua kria

k:ouch mein gir gayi

r:kitni baar batana pare ga ke dekh kar kaam kiya karo while sitting her side and opening the first aid box

sh:wispered something in swayams ear

sw:ya you r right

r:what right see how much its bleeding


k:while crying nooo mujhe nahi bandage karana

sh:is ki shuru se problem hai ke kabhi chot lag jaye tu poree ghar ko sarr par uttha leti hai

sw:lets call the docter

r:ya

k:nooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont need a docter i am alright


s:ok i will do ur bandage

as soon as sharon came near her kria pushed her with full force of her one hand and sharon fell backwards on swayam

k:nno i said i dont want to bandage while crying


r:shhh just shut up u r such a baat cutter (while placing his finger on her lips)

r:look in my eyes

kria started looking in his eyes she was fully gone to the dreamy mode

r:kria ye batoa tumhara fav colour kya hai?

k:green




guys this part will be continued soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
amazing cute update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Awesome...aww kriya in rey's arms n he bandaging her hand...update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Wow lovely and amazing part.
Thanks for the pm.
rey was so caring.
update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Aww..kriyansh wer so cute...
Luvd d updt...
Thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Nice part..


Sharon in her dreamland with swayam la la la..


Kriya's actions were too gud wen sharon was dreaming abt swayam.


Sharon realised dat it was kriya thank god we dint get to see female version of dostana!!😆😆


Krisha shifting to Reyam's house idea was too gud n d boys demselves came for helping d gals.


Swaron gone in LLHH mode..


N Kriyaansh they were too adorable.


Loved it wen he said baatcutter n wen he was diverting her mind to keep d bandage.


Overall, it was a very gud updt but a short one.


Big one next tym pls..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
amazing update
kriya on rey arm amazing per yaar ade mein kyun band kiya this is not fair
waiting for nxt eagerly
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Hey read all d parts nw dey r amazing... Update soon n pm me plz

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