LOVE IZ LIKE HEAVEN BUT IT HURTS LIKE HELL - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awesome update...waiting eagerly for the next part nd pls. do pm me when u update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Nice update.
Thanks for pm.
it was cute.
update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
thanks guys i really loved your appreciationa nd abhi next part ka clue nahi dene wali hoon bas precap scary hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update...luved it...awww kriya kissed him on cheecks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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owesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it very very much~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
please cont..soon and pm me...xxxlove
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
awesome and amazing update👏⭐️...she kissed him tat soo nice😍
now update the next part soon ...with some more masala ...waiting for it badly😳
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jst read all d parts n dis is amazng...plz pm me nxt tym u update...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome plz pm me next time u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys pata hai bohat late update kar rahi hoon kya karron time nahi milta kabhi betehti hoon mom aa jati hain


chapter 4

the next morning kria woke up and so does sharon ...kria glared a look at the side table where red roses were placed and then looked upon sharon .kriya didnt even noticed them last night

k:good morning sharon

s:goo moring(while yowning)

k:woh roseskis ne diye


s: kon se roses

k: that (pointing towards them )

s: kisi ne nahi

k: sharon you know u cant lie to me tell me truthly

s:ok baba last night me and swayam went to a place and we had a great time and now we are officially gf and bf


k:WHATTT??????????


s: why are you so shocked didnt u and that angry young man spend a good time

k:nooo he is just a nice person

s:awww itni tareef😳

k:just shut up

saying this kria went to the washroom to freshen up whereas the phone rang and sharon picked it up

s:hello

guy:helloo mam

s:yes who r u?

guy: i am the landlords assistent and i wanted to inform you that you have to empty this flat by tommorow morning

s:what the hell?why?

g:becauz its the landlords request someone has bought this house and he is paying more than you
:

s:but sir plzz understand how we will get a place so sonn

g:sorry and plzz arrange today bye

s:bye (tremblingly as she was about to cry)

sharon sat on the couch beside and started crying

as soon kria came out she saw sharon and asked her why she was crying?sharon narrates her the whole story ...kriya was also very worried

kria consoled sharon and said her to got to freshen up

and kria went to kitchen to prepare breakfast

k: sharon come breakfasts ready

s:ya coming

they had breakfats after that sharons mobile beeped and it was swayam he said her to come out

s:kria i will come in a minute bye

k:ok so i am going to visit someone talk the house keys

s:ok


as soon as sharon left kria went to reys house and ringed the bell

r:rey opened the door and kria was shocked to see him without his shirt she closed her eyes

k:sharam nahi aati kya?

r:mujhe laga swayma hai while puttiing his shirt and pouting

k:ohhh so can i come in

r:sure

they sat on the couch and rey went in his room to brought something
it was a gift all packed in a beautiful red wrapper and handed it to kria

k:ye kya hai

r:its for u

k;why


r:becauz tumheen pata hai kal meine 3 months ke baad kuch fun loving time guzara hai tumhari wajah se

k:aww thankyou agar mere sath raho ge to zaroor meri tarah ho jao ge


r;hmmm


r:you look confused what happened

k:nothing ...as her eyes started to moistening

r;kria are u alright?

k:ya

r:tell me come on

k:ok she narates him all the landlords story while crying

r:oh damn (he comforts her to his level best)

k:ya where would we stay ?we dont have anyone in this world

r:thats not a problem you can stay with us

k:what this cant happen?

r:ya its happening

k:i will ask sharon

r:its ok

k:but what about swayam
r:dont u know they r gf and bf

k:ya ya they will agree 4 sure

r:ok go and get your luggage

k:but u have only two rooms

r:thats not a problem me and swyam in one rooom
and u and sharon in other

k:thats so sweet of you while hugging him friendly

r:its ok what r frndz for?

k:ya right while breaking the hug..you r not so much angry young man

r:ya thanks

k:ok i will leave know

r;ok but if u need help ask me

k:ok

kria goes to her home and to her sruprise when she opens the door swaron were hugging


k:ahem ahem

swaron: aparting frm each other

sw:i see you soon bye

s:bye

krisha:start packing we r going to reyams house!!!!!!!!!

k:ooh who told u

s:swayam but u were gone to visit a frnd right than who told u

k:no one

s:dont lie rey right?

k:yaa

s:ohhooo mujhe laga rey tumheen acha nahi lagta

k:aisi baat nahi hai while blushing a little

s:ohoo madam ki blushing to dheko

k:shut up start packing

s:ya it will be fun

k:what fun?remember as soon as we get a new house we will leave their house

s:okkk😆





so guys pata nahi kaisa hai plzz do comment every comment is repectable.👏






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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
haaha i know its sad but dont know what t write thats why next part will be a romantic one promise

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