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d3_rox

@d3_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: d3_rox
Preru Jaan it was amazing man...I was dying to read ur ff...plzzz stop writing this ff...I really love this ff...plzzz do not stop wrting...!! n ur ff was amazing...there will be more than 50 likes so chill!!:):)<3<3

Srry instead of do not stop writing I wrote stop writing...srry...but plzzz do not stop writing...waiting 4 the next part!😛

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

tu naaa... churi-chaaku kisi cheez ki zarurat nahi hai tujhe.. harr baar maar dalti hai.. aisa heavenly likhti hai naa.. ki mai bas aise dhen hokar marr jaati hu...

mai kya bolu iss update ke baare mei mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha!!

meri aankhon ke saamne sab kuch play ho raha tha.. poora scene.. rey ke thoughts.. uske confusions.. uska conclusion pe aana.. conclusion pe aakar action lene ki taraf badhna... fir ek pal ko bheegi billi banna.. aur fir firse khud mei himmat jutaaana..

Kria ka pain.. ufff... harr baar khushi milte milte dukh mil jaana.. but iss baar.. iss baar she finally got what she wanted.. Her Rey...

Last ki kiss was too easy to play in the mind... the longing.. after such a long tym.. dono ka finally ek dusre ko mil jaana.. finally dey are where they belong.. in each others arms.. *sigh* prenu, it was seriously beautiful... I could just kiss ur hands rite now!! amazingly written..

Tere updates mei chaahe kitni bhi der lage... but hamesha worth the wait hote hai meri jaan.. haaayeee... aisi gandi gandi dhamkiyaan mat diya kar shuruaat mei.. i dont want u to discontinue.. tu kahe toh 15-20 logo ko dhamki dekar aau.. like karne ki?? hehehehe.. par teko kya bolu.. same prob sabko hai.. aadhe PM joh bhejo koi response nahi hota.. but hum toh hai naa to always support and swoon over ur work!!! so please continue writing... as i know what ur FF has in store for us next.. i just cant wait for an update!! aur bhagwaan ke liye meri SS thread baksh de...

Love U Prenu!!!!!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

forgot to mention... love the song Raabta.. but had never heard the female version... it really did add more magic to the update!! 😳

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lovekriyaansh

@lovekriyaansh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: aria009hera
tu naaa... churi-chaaku kisi cheez ki zarurat nahi hai tujhe.. harr baar maar dalti hai.. aisa heavenly likhti hai naa.. ki mai bas aise dhen hokar marr jaati hu...

mai kya bolu iss update ke baare mei mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha!!

meri aankhon ke saamne sab kuch play ho raha tha.. poora scene.. rey ke thoughts.. uske confusions.. uska conclusion pe aana.. conclusion pe aakar action lene ki taraf badhna... fir ek pal ko bheegi billi banna.. aur fir firse khud mei himmat jutaaana..

Kria ka pain.. ufff... harr baar khushi milte milte dukh mil jaana.. but iss baar.. iss baar she finally got what she wanted.. Her Rey...

Last ki kiss was too easy to play in the mind... the longing.. after such a long tym.. dono ka finally ek dusre ko mil jaana.. finally dey are where they belong.. in each others arms.. *sigh* prenu, it was seriously beautiful... I could just kiss ur hands rite now!! amazingly written..

Tere updates mei chaahe kitni bhi der lage... but hamesha worth the wait hote hai meri jaan.. haaayeee... aisi gandi gandi dhamkiyaan mat diya kar shuruaat mei.. i dont want u to discontinue.. tu kahe toh 15-20 logo ko dhamki dekar aau.. like karne ki?? hehehehe.. par teko kya bolu.. same prob sabko hai.. aadhe PM joh bhejo koi response nahi hota.. but hum toh hai naa to always support and swoon over ur work!!! so please continue writing... as i know what ur FF has in store for us next.. i just cant wait for an update!! aur bhagwaan ke liye meri SS thread baksh de...

Love U Prenu!!!!!

tight vaali jhappi Anki... tere lambe comment ka tho wait karti hoon main humesha... aur yeh jo colourful comment hain na m loving this ya... nd I love you more...

kal tho mast vaat laga diya tha maine iss update ka raat mein... Kitni badhi gadhi hoon maine... Par jo bhi ho.. i m glad ki it came out well...

nd i know you guys r there for me... but if it is for only u guys..then y do i post it here.. We have our exclusive place na... was little annoyed with it... i wont discontinue.. i write because i want to.. i love sharing my kriyaansh stories with you... par agar yeh update me likes 55 k eneechey huye tho i will stop putting it here...

HITLER MOMY tu apna rudravtar dharan mat kar.. bachche aise hi line pe aajayenge... nd teri thread ko saja rahi thi..achcha nahi laga tuze?? *puppy face*

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lovekriyaansh

@lovekriyaansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: aria009hera
forgot to mention... love the song Raabta.. but had never heard the female version... it really did add more magic to the update!! 😳

i know it magical... nd the female version is my favorite... its amazing ... i just love that song... superb lyrics.. and the tune that i keep on humming the whole day...

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Prerna I'm speechless. It was just so beautiful. Both their POV's were just beautifully described...it was honestly just perfect..like WOW. Can't wait for what is to come next. I guess all I hope is that love can be as pure and magical as theirs is. Loved it prernu :* :*

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

amazing amazing finally rey ne kriya ko i olve u boldiya wonderful and d song was nyc

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

awesome update!!finally!!waiting 4 da the nxt to come!dont 4get 2 pm me!

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

prenu it was MEGICAL DEAR...dat was PERFECT...mjhe lga lyk sach mai mai koi serial or movie dekh ri hu...rey ki feelings hayee!!!!! yaar kitni awsumly likhi h...n dat KISS was jst too way too PERFECT yaar...tune mjhe is baar SPEECHLESS kr dia yaar...n EMOTIONAL b

bt mai tjhse bohat bohat bohat bohat gussa hu...tune mjhe pta h kitna bada heart attack dia h starting note se apne...tu soch b kaise skti h ise stop krne ka...agr tune aisa kia na to dekh lio...u knw wht maine aaj tak confess ni kia bt dis my fav FF n u r my fav writer n agr meri fav writer likhna band kr degi to mai kya krungi...KATTIII...KATTII...

n ha ab mai sidha 11 ko milungi n i want ur nxt update tb tk...n agr ni kregi to bohat sara gussa ho jaungi

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lovekriyaansh

@lovekriyaansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha
prenu it was MEGICAL DEAR...dat was PERFECT...mjhe lga lyk sach mai mai koi serial or movie dekh ri hu...rey ki feelings hayee!!!!! yaar kitni awsumly likhi h...n dat KISS was jst too way too PERFECT yaar...tune mjhe is baar SPEECHLESS kr dia yaar...n EMOTIONAL b

bt mai tjhse bohat bohat bohat bohat gussa hu...tune mjhe pta h kitna bada heart attack dia h starting note se apne...tu soch b kaise skti h ise stop krne ka...agr tune aisa kia na to dekh lio...u knw wht maine aaj tak confess ni kia bt dis my fav FF n u r my fav writer n agr meri fav writer likhna band kr degi to mai kya krungi...KATTIII...KATTII...

n ha ab mai sidha 11 ko milungi n i want ur nxt update tb tk...n agr ni kregi to bohat sara gussa ho jaungi

Awww shaffy..thnk you so much re.. u know na that I love you .. nd even i dont want to stop writing.. but somehow i was annoyed ... so bear with it.. 😭 i hope mujhe 55 + likes mil jaye aur main yeh FF stop na karu... katti mat kar yaar... aur ab directly11 th ko aayegi??? exam hain kya teri??

Edited by lovekriyaansh - 13 years ago