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Posted: 13 years ago
wooow...
amazing yaar...
god y does dey always fight...
but luved der fights...
unki fights mein bhi bht mza hai...
n iss update ki ending... superb...
i had a big smile on my face wen i read d last lines...
dont worry u 2 will also fall in dis LOVE... jisse tum dono itna dur bhagte ho...
and corrctly said... pyaar kisi se puch k nhi hota...
thnx 4 d lovely update...
plz post next part asap...
n if possible to thoda ldi update dena plzzz...
lov...
bells...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update di!
Dono ke raaste alag ho hi nahi sakte...jahan bhi jayen wapas toh ek dusre ke paas hi aana hai
and i Looovvveeed the last scene...kamaal ka tha!!
Cont soon
Lov u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb ud sonali...
arihaan n samyukta ke fights scene was very sweet n cute...
luved the way you are putting small lovable moments in their fights...like the last one...
luved it thoroughly
ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
So beautifully described update. Luved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey..just came across ur ff..its lovely..
Pls do pm me when u update the nxt part 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz ud soon,
i m waiting di..

plz ud soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 16

One day passed . there was time to came towards habitation. this is the one place where all worries , tension stress vanished easily . where no one to annoy you and for samyukta it is the place of peace of mind somehow . somehow because her tension is stayed adjacent to her just like shadow . but inside the wall of house she could say that her own place .

" Hush !! ma '.I m back ." samyukta said in while bumped on the couch .flung bag on the ground . Not even don't tried to take little bit fatigue to kept that on respective place . It seems that she had done more work beyond her age by attending college. She glance here and there but her mother didn't seem . she thought her presence might be in kitchen . she arouse her legs towards kitchen but before she reached Supriya entered and greeted with smile. samyukta too gave warm smile but her attenssion mov towards the luggage kept beside the corner . " ma koi guest aaya hai kya '." She keep on thinking who must be that Unknown guest .n thought the guest must be her cousin . " Piya aayi hai but kaha hai vo ..abhi dekhti hu use .maharani aayi aur muje bataya tak nahi " . Here supriya seems little tense, a fine sheer of line kept on her forehead . She wanted to say something '''." Amm vo samyukta '.Piya nahi 'vo tumhare ." before she complete .a male voice somewhat familiar but had not heard perpetually .

She turned around to see . there was a male figure was standing at his late 50. After seeing SAmyukta's eyes widened up .as she knew him ''..as she waiting for him since years . He was his father whose she missed the most .but didn't tell to anybody . what was she waiting for now . she wanted to hug him .but '

She looked at mother whose eyes filled with tears .She carry out the expression reflected from her eyes n only one answer she got. Her mother forgive him''so easily as she forget all days and night of ten years when both lady endure without any kind of support when desperately they need .

" Ma''" she couldn't say anything expect that .but her only one whispered word told everything about her questions .

" Vo hamare paass vapas aa gaye hai " Supriya said with teary voice and satisfaction seen her eyes.

She looked at her father and said pugnaciously " ohh main to bhul gayi thi mere koi papa bhi hai .Thank you so much yaad dilane k liye " " samyukta beta ." supriya tried to explain her but samyukta cut her between .

" what should I do ma'''ya muje khush hona chahiye ke mere papa vaapas aa gaye .ya phir Dukhi hona chahiye '.pehle kyu nahi aaye " she said but no tear in her eyes .as she was hiding her pain inside .

" but vo hamari financial help karte the beta " Supriya tried to explain her . " finantial '''..But that is not sufficient na ''''''''that isn't sufficient " saying this she went to her room leaving her parents without complaining. As chandrakant ( Samyukta's father ) understood her condition and knew his erroneousness. He went to other to abroad ten years back for Business . But he got straded in his work in such way that he didn't get time to give her family But always transfer money to them He was the successful businessman .But when it comes to give some affection he inchoate .when it comes to know aout her daughters well being her education 'her all little little things ''He been inadequate . he knows all about her '''.but never gave time to her daughter to know about him . that's why Samyukta indignation regarding him and he understood that often and only he was responcible for that. So he decided to came back towards her family. But he was worried of the fact if she remain resentful on him .

Samyukta in her Room '.she took a picture from closet . this is picture of trio her complete family .when she was 10 years old . cute little Samyukta sat between her most beloved couple (her parents) .This picture looks so perfect , Happiest ever seen . she thought and smile curved on her lips.But it'sserinity poisoned in the frame itself. Tears were rolled down her eyes. But son she dried up, hold that frame to her chest and slept .

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Morning ,

Samyukta woke up early and without interrupting anyone in house .she got ready for collage .giving reason to supriya that she had some work in library. And she left . But supriya knows actual reason behind this . It didn't hide from her. she worried for her . her daughters taciturnity wouldn't endure by her .

In collage , Samyukta went to attend the lecture but throughout the lecture she didn't say single word to her soronity Nisha and Sonika . they feel awkward that samyukta how could became so quite .there has to some reason behind that .But they know very well that she will never told as she used to hide her misery from everyone from her Buddy also.

Soon they receive call from her mother and she inform everything that happened yesterday . as supriya know her friends will help her in discernment .

Her friends try to entangled her in talks and soon Samyukta remembered she didn't completed her assignment which she had submit by afternoon before practical .

She excuse herself and went to library . In library she busy in completing her assignment . Arhaan came and saw her . He had been seen her quite behavior on lecture and bit felt strage and No argument no taunt from her side . He took book from couter and went to opposite side and sat on three four chairs of hers .

Before sitting he Opened window that blows cool breeze which touched her face and hairs . For sec she closed her eyes in feeling it's purity and unconsciously smile created on her lips. Though Just for moment He could see her smiling he was gazing her beautiful smile . But soon come to his senses what the Hell I m doing " he thought and dip his head in book .
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practical gets over with that same unwanted quiescent.After practical , all get ready to leave there home . Nisha and sonika thought to say something that bring back her previous samy .

" you know samy .What Arihaan is saying about you." Nisha uttered with grete curiocity .

" yes Nisha teel her How could he say that " Sonika said in such a way that there was a big earthquake going to happened.

" please guys . Kya mere life sirf Arihaan par hi aake rukti hai . there is so many thing beyond Arihaaan" saying this samyukta left.

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In Evening ,
samyyukta standing near the edge of terrace . Engrossed in her own thought . she didn't know when Arihaan came and stand parallel to her with some feet distance etween them . He looked at her But same expression .nO change in that . again he looked straight pretending he not interasted in her things .

And after while He said with grin " Koi toy kho gaya kya " still in teasing way

She looked at his face and again looked straight " haan toy kho gaya tha . Ab vapas mil gaya "

Her voice told him . " ohh then you have to happy '.."

" forget it mereliye accha hi hai ke tum itni shant ho gayi ho ..muje kam se kam shanti to milegi ab main araam se yaha reh paunga " He gladly said.and continued " pata hai tum bahut irritating ho "

As he expected she replied with her same annoyance " kya ????"

Yup maine jo kaha sach kaha " He ageed.

" main irritating ''.." she said in disgusting tone .." isse tumhe kya ..huh " and she remembered her Friend Line " you know samy .What Arihaan is saying about you"

" tum mere bare me aaj collage me kya keh rahe the .jarur kuch galat hi kaha hoga " Samyukta retoted

" main kyu kuch kahunga ''Muje aur kuch kaam nahi hai kya " Arihaan said in deffence

But Samyuktawasn't satisfied with his answer " Nisha kabhi juth nahi bolegi Mujeusp[ar pura bharosahai ''Sach batao Arihaaan kya kaha tumne ?" samyukta didn't want to listen anything expect that answer

But Arihaan kept hands on his ear and walking towards door of teraace " I don't want to say it now . Ab jao " He said with grin . samyukta won't leave him so easily

" dekho Arihaan tumhe batana hi Padega" she said while following him.

I this way Samyukta forgot her agony . and her life starts again from the same point where it had been stopped

Sorry Guys for this sady sady part ...I thought it need to explain her family part also Thus added
Hope so you will not get Bor
plzz endure this one too...But after this, all updates will be more fun 😊

Edited by sonalimurat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
reso jii

hum 1st
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samy jaise coll- se aati h, and flat ho jati h sofa pr.. vaise hi main bhi...
okies dokey..
so samy k dad aa gye h,
i dnt hate him, but i dnt like him too..
bacho ko kissi bhi halat main nhi chodhna chahiye...
be it anything...

kuch bhi h, he had a little, a little greed for money.. tabhi tho samy ko choda..
supriya aunty tho beech main phass kr rah gyi...

samy aise hi so gyi, bina kuch khaye piyee...

college bhi kitna boring h na,!...
sachii...

haan samy dear.. tumhare life arihaan pr hi atki hoi h...
agge badegi, tho uske saath hi badhegi.. n jaror bhadegi...

wow, woh library wala scene.. chaar baar padha, chotaa sa tha na.. tho bar bar padhna padha, agli bar se lamba wala romantic scene di...

haye.. arihaan agrees she is beautiful...

hmm..
evning scene
-''toy kho gya h kya?'' hahahaha🤣

kya funny h...
sahi main, arihaan tumhara javab nhi..
samy ka dukh duur bhi kiya tho... jagda karke..
yaar do teen romantic line bol dete tho kya chala jata tumhara?

chalo koi nah..
waiting for more fun ,upcoming...

ud soon, lov u
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...awesome...👏
so sam's dad was back,,,,,,,,,,felt very bad for sam,,,,,,,,,,poor girl chah kar bhi kisi se kuch keh nahi sakti,,,,,,,,,
and arihaan is not liking her silence,,,,,,,,,,,,he too like her yaar,,,,,,,,,,
the way he distracted her oh ho,,,,,,,,,,,,super amazing,,,,,,,,,,,,,just for her he came and talked to her,,,,,,,,,,kinna cute hai arihaan...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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