ArSha FF-Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas#3 **The End** - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz Update na!!!!!!

waiting to read it...

lag rha hai ek dhamakedaar, solid chapter is on the way
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys….. I was sick of the current track🥱... and bored to death to continue it further🤢….. no, i'm not going to elaborate the airport romance any longer... so if you're waiting for that, then go change your mind😛.

I'm leaping ahead with some time... sue me.😆

Warning- ... like you'll even bother to follow it *roll eyes*... just go... read it.😉

Part 51

1 year later.

A cool breeze on her bare shoulders made her tremble….. grabbing the comforter, she wrapped it tightly around herself…… but something was missing…… she still felt a shiver run through her body.

Shakti- (drowsy) Kunwar?

Eyes still closed, she extended her arm back….. but she was disappointed when her hand touched the cool empty sheets.

Frowning she opened her eyes to look back over her shoulder…… he wasn't there….. adjusting to the dim moonlight illuminating the room she looked around for him.

Shakti- Kunwar?

Some rattling of utensils out in the kitchen, made her jump.

Shakti- (mutter) gosh, uski yeh aaadhi raat ko bhook lagneki aadat se I'l get dark circles.

Sighing she tugged the covers aside…… grabbing one of his t-shirt, which was hers now, she pulled it over her head.

Some more clatter of utensils and she quickly padded bare feet outside….. she had to go get him back, before he woke his entire building…… She wondered how had Dharmesh tolerated him for so many years.

Groggily she dragged herself to the kitchen.

God, she was tired….. her hectic shoots, rehearsals and different shows all over India was taking a toll on her…… recently she had even started with the shoot of her first film as a lead….. a dance musical….. A bollywood remake of the popular Hollywood flick, Black Swan.

[[personally, I would love to see her work in something like that….. anyone, planning to be a film maker?... think about it. ;)]]

These occasional nights and some even rarer days was the only time she got to spend with him... she had just returned from Calcutta after 5 days of doing continues shows all over east India….. and she had come straight to his place from the airport.

Now she wished, she had gone home….. at least she would have got enough sleep….. but she had missed him too much to do otherwise.

****

A glass slipped from his hand….. he tried to catch it back, but to no avail….. the loud shattering racket made him flinch…. crap!!... why the hell am I so clumsy?!!

Clearing of her throat made him look up with a start….. Oh Sh*t…. she's up!!... he quickly hid the bowl he was working in behind his back.

Amar- sorry, sorry.

Shakti- agar tumhari yahan jung khatam ho gayi ho toh wapas chale?

Amar- ummm…… you go back to bed, jaan….. I'll be there in sometime.

Shakti- care to tell me what's going on here?

She eyed his hands behind his back.

Amar- oh….. nothing….. I was just hungry….. you go…… sleep.

Throwing her hands up in frustration, she turned around to leave.

Shakti- fine….. whatever.

Amar- miss me

He called out after her.

Shakti- that's the least I'll do, since you woke me like this... and you better clean up that mess afterwards (pointing at the broken glass on the floor)…… I'm not doing anything in the morning.

Amar- I won't let my princess complain.

Her reply was just a loud yawn.

****

She excitedly climbed back in bed….. she knew what he was upto….. she had seen the batter on the kitchen counter….. and he looked like a cute little white mouse covered in flour…… his cheeks and forehead were stained with streaks of chocolate.

Today was their 1st anniversary…. She recollected their time in Jaipur….. the night when he had first said those words….. and she was thrilled to know that he remembered that day as well….. she would have thrown herself in his arms there and then, but she dint want to ruin his surprise….. so she behaved like she dint care.

Lying down again, she was sure she wouldn't get any sleep now.

[[@Ankita (aria009hera)- you can daydream about your Ani later….. now go read on]]

****

He tiptoed in the room with the tray of goodies…… she lay peacefully in bed….. putting the tray aside, he climbed in with her.

Wrapping her in his arms, he spooned her to him.

Shakti- hmmm……

She stirred and nuzzled closer.

Amar- hii

Turning, she cuddled herself in his chest….. she buried her face in the crook of his neck.

Shakti- hmmm….. what's that smell?... chocolate?

Amar- un huh….. want to try me?

Shakti- hmmm…… would love to….

She wiggled up and found his ear….. she grazed her lips along his throat and nibbled on his collarbone.

Shakti- ummm…… delicious……

His rumbling laugh, encouraged her to continue to tease him further... when she slid her tongue to his chest, he could take no more….. grabbing her up, he flipped her over, pinning her below him.

Amar- my turn now.

Shakti- I'm not the one bathed in chocolate.

Amar- no, but you're exactly what I need.

Lowering his head he captured her lips.

Amar- ummm…. Now that's what I call a sweet treat.

Giggling she pushed him away and sat up.

Shakti- acha bus….. ab batao…… kya kar rahe the?

Amar- surprise (grin)

Awww, he was so cute….. she bit back an urge to laugh….. frowning instead, she inquired…..

Shakti- what surprise?

He quickly turned around and brought the tray from the bedside table.

Faking shocked horror, she gasped…..

Shakti- yeh kya hai???

Amar- Happy anniversary sweetheart!

Shakti- oh!!

And she could pretend no more…… she burst out laughing.

Amar- (confused) what's so funny?... you dint like it?

His puppy face was so adorable…… she took the tray from his hands….. putting it at her side, she pulled him in her arms again.

Shakti- I love it…… and I love you more….. Happy anniversary to you too, darl!!

She found his lips again….. they couldn't seem to get enough of each other….. cake toh side main hi rehe gayi.

****

Amar- marry me!

What!!!!????... had she heard him right???... Pushing him slightly away, she looked up in his sea deep eyes…… yes, she had heard him alright…… he was serious!!!

Shakti- Kunwar?

He lowered his face to her neck again.

Shakti- wait!!... you can't just throw this bomb on my head and distract me like this!

She shoved him on his side and got out of the bed.

Leaning patiently on his elbow he watched her pace up and down the entire length of the room.

14…… 15….. 16 rounds……. Oh, he couldn't take it anymore.

Amar- would you like to share some of your thoughts?

She stopped biting her nails and sank back on the bed next to him.

Shakti- we've never spoken about this before.

Amar- I know……

Shakti- so why now?

Amar- what sort of a question is that?... because I love you, Shaks….. and I want to be with you….. always…… I hardly get to see you these days….. I'm not complaining….. you know I'm proud of what you're doing….. but now I'm ready to share our lives….. plus it's not like we're getting any younger.

Shakti- oh, please don't start that…… I get that from my parents all the time. (groan)

Amar- oh….. you never told me about your parents insisting on this...

Shakti- that's because I dint want to freak you out, Kunwar!!

Amar- why would it freak me out??

Shakti- (grunt) oh common, don't all guys do?

He thought over it.

Amar- hmm…… maybe.

Shakti- see….

Amar- arre but what's your problem?... why are you panicking?

Shakti- Kunwar, I have commitments too!!... my films, shows….. I still have a long way to go.

Amar- so when have I ever stopped you Shaks for doing any of it?

Shakti- but marriage is a big step and you know it!

Amar- haan, so where am I saying we get married tomorrow?... you can take all the time in the world.

Rubbing her forehead with her fingers she sighed.

Shakti- I need to sleep.

Amar- fine.

Turning over he lay down on his side.

Shakti- you're angry?

Amar- no.

Shakti- yes you are……

Amar- Shaks….. just go to sleep.

She scooted to him and cuddled in his arms.

Shakti- I'm sorry to spoil your mood.

He kissed her forehead.

Amar- and I'm sorry to spoil yours.

Shakti- I love you.

Amar- (sigh) love you too.

Shakti- promise me you'll never leave me.

Amar- never sweetheart….. now sushh….. close your eyes.

And she did….. Dozing back to her paradise…… but for him…… he had to make another plan.

****

Ps- don't ask me what happened to the cake…… I forgot😳….. bechare Amar ki mehenat paani main😛….. pms coming up.

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Posted: 13 years ago

res

unres...

1st one to comment... yay... Dhinka chika Dhinka Chika...

what an update... haww... Kunwar's cake went in vain... now, when they r romancing, where is the place for a cake...

but m feeling bad... that was a chocolate cake...😳

he proposed her for marriage... hayeee...☺️

Tish... u r getting filmy day by day...

loved it...

waiting for Kunwar's 2nd plan...

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww so sweet he asked her to marry him
Ahhh got soo happy but shaks... Ohh
Well loved ur update
Edited by D3FAN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...

so dhamaka here...

well shakti freaking out was expected as thats the way u have portrayed her...

awesome... but achanak se leap???? kahan se???

wasn't expecting it...

chalo lets wait for the further update and what plan amar is tryin to make...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol awsomme tish aww shaks dosennnt wnna get married well lets hope he pecifys her in the next update waiting for it and thnx for updating it today thnkyouuu so much ill wait 4 da next 1 2mrww loll thnx for pm 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am speechless u r terrific at last kuwar ne marriage ke liye propose kardiya but y shakti is noy excepting waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely...!!!
Awesome...wow...jst wow...y dint she say yes...oho...hav 2 wait fr her yes...d convo ws cute...n dat little fite also...luvd it...
Waitng fr nxt part...update soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG asked for marrying him..hayeee
seriously tish your updates only increase my hope for arsha...
shaks going for 5 months to new york,may be they realize what they r to each other as it was in your ff...keep up the good work..awsum update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
aww poor guy his mehnat in water chi chi chi what to do now shaks so horribel i would have said yes without letting him complete his sentence

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