Hey my lovely readers, I'm back with the next part.. Your comments were great as always.. Thanks a ton.. 🤗New readers, welcome and hope you guys are liking it.. I've read quite a few posts asking me to unite Virman.. I want to.. honestly.. But then meri story jaldi khatam ho jayegi..😭 😉 Jokes apart, I have a vague idea which i want to stick to.. But trust me, I won't disappoint my readers.. So you will be getting tinee-winee Virman bits in almost every update now on.. oopsie.. Part 9 onwards..😲 Please hold back your jootis..
And another thing, I wanted suggestions on whether you would like Prem-Heer's love story or do you feel that it is unnecessary? I personally want to start a parallel love story, but then not sure whether you guys will appreciate it.. Please reply.. I will draft my story around it..
Part 8
Hrishikesh
It had been a few days since Beeji and the others had returned back from Chandigarh when they had a few unexpected guests at their door-step. The Singhania's had decided to keep up their promise to Manvi and had visited her. "Arre Uncle, Auntyji aap, aayiye na.. Beeji, yeh wahi family hai jinhone humein Mumbai se aate hue Hrishikesh drop kiya tha.." They all sat down and were being served snacks.
"Jee, Manvi ne bataya mujhe.. Badi meherbani aapki.. varna najaane yeh bacche akele kya karte! Waise pareshaan toh nahi kiya na inhone aapko?" Gayatri smiled. She had liked the Chaudhry's. Very simple and down-to-earth people. "Arre nahi nahi, bilkul shaant aur susheel bachhe hain yeh."
Prem had choked on the lassi.. Shaant aur susheel, yeh ladki!! Manvi didn't miss it though.. She glared at him and he resumed drinking again. "Arre bte, aap theek toh hai na?" Manvi, tum ek kaam kyu nahi karti, zara tum aur Dabbu Prem ko Hrishikesh ghuma lao.. Hum jab se yahaan aaye hain, bass ashram se bahar hi nahi nikle hai.. Yeh bechara bore ho gaya hai.."
Manvi looked at Beeji for approval. Beeji nodded her head but gave her a no-nonsense look. Once they had left, Gayatri turned to Beeji, "Waise behenji, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi.. Ummeed hai aap bura nahi manengi.." Beeji nodded her head. "Dekhiye behenji, hum Canada se hai.. Lekin meri humesha ek khwaish thi ki meri Bahu Hindustani ho.. sanskaari, susheel, acche khandaan se ho.. Aapki poti, Manvi humare dil mein jagah bana gayi hai.. Meri aapse ek darkhaast hai ki aap iss baare mein soche.."
Beeji looked at Madan and Pinky who looked shocked.. Manvi ke liye rishta?? Woh bhi ab, jab who cancer jaisi bhayanak bimaari se ladh rahi hai.. Yeh namumkin hai..
"Dekhiye behenji, main aapka dil nahi dukhana chahti, lekin humne abhi Manvi ki shaadi ke baare mein socha nahi hai.. Toh issliye, filhaal main aapse kuch nahi keh sakti.."
Gayatri was dejected. She looked at Lalit who nodded assuringly, "Jee theek hai behenji.. Lekin main phir bhi kahungi, bohot hi samajhdaar bachhi hai aapki.. apni umar ke liye kaafi mature hai woh.. Agar aap iss baare mein ek baar soch leti toh achha hota..Main aur Prem ke Dad kuch mahine aur Hrishikesh ke ashram mein hi rukne wale hai..Woh kya hai na, humara Chandigarh wala ghar abhi taiyar nahi hua hai.. Agar aapka iraada badal jaaye toh humein bata deejiyega.. Waise aage aapki marzi.."
They seemed like sincere people to Beeji, "Jee achha behenji, hum iss baare mein sochenge zaroor."
Here, Manvi and Prem were back. Manvi had taken him to the Ghats, recited stories about each one of the temples that stood on the banks of the Ganga. He sort of liked the girl. She was weird, crazy and bossy, he thought. The way she made poor Dabbu run all around Hrishikesh was cruel.
The Singhania's had left and the Chaudhry's had another thing to worry about now. This was just the first. Soon proposals would start coming in for Manvi. How long would they be able to hide the truth from everyone? It was going to be difficult and that Manvi's own sister didn't know of it, yet further complicated the matter.
Chandigarh
Heer and Virat had become close buddies. They spent most of their free time together. Virat used to drop Heer at the Hospital in the morning and picked her up in the evenings while returning from office. A single day hadn't passed when he hadn't gifted Heer her favourite white lilies. Vanshika was extremely happy on seeing the siblings bond so well.. Virat had become more expressive than ever! His relationship with others in the family was also back to normal.
The painting competition was just a few days away. They used to practice brush strokes, but she never disclosed what she had in mind. Hum on-the-spot decide karenge, she'd said. And he'd agreed.
Virat was sitting on the terrace in the night and Heer happened to walk by.. He seemed to be in a dilemma.. He was staring at his phone and running his fingers on the screen.. And she went up to him.. "Kar leejiye phone.. itna bhi kya sochna..". "He turned around shocked.. How?? How exactly did Heer manage to catch him red-handed every single time.. Was she actually stalking him?? "Oye, phone? Kisko? Main toh bass purane messages padh raha tha.." He stated innocently without realizing that he had let out a secret.. Sh*t!! Virat Manvi sach kehti hai, ek number ke Chep ho tum..
She smirked and walked towards him.. "O Oh.. toh Manviji ke messages padhe jaa rahein hai, Kyun?" "Nahi nahi yeh kisne kaha tumse?" "Aapke chehre pe jo khushi jhalak rahi hai, usne.." Phir pakde gaye yaar!! "Achha chodiye.. call kyun nahi karte aap unhe?" "Tumhe kya main itna bevakoof lagta hoon, usne mera phone uthana band kar diya hai.. Mera call nahi uthati woh.."
"Theek hai, mere phone se kar leejiye.."
And she dialed Manvi's no. He was shocked.. "Oye Heeriye sunn, tere paas Manvi ka number kahaan se aaya?" Oops pakde gaye Heer.. pagal ladki!! "Woh kya hai na, Vanshika Aunty se lekar rakha tha.. emergency ke liye, you see.." "Kaisi emergency?" "Chodiye, ye leejiye baat keejiye.." and she had dialed the number. It was ringing and they were waiting for Manvi to answer.. "Kya hai yaar, itni raat ko kaun mare jaa raha hai mujhse baat karne ke liye.." She muttered into the phone, without realizing that she had actually answered it..A smile appeared instantly on Virat's lips.. Meri Bandariya.. "Kaun hai.. baat kyun nahi karte.. apna balance udaane ka itna hi shauk hai toh Indian Idol mein phone karke vote kardo.. Bichare bandon ka bhala ho jayega.."
Heer and Virat stared at each other, quite amused. Indian idol? Only Manvi could come up with something like that.. Finally Heer decided to speak, "Pairipona parjaiji.. kaise ho tussi?" Virat glared at her.. What was that? "Huh, parjaiji.. kaun hai? Aur kaun parjai.. kiski parjai.." Heer was thoroughly enjoying this now.. "Kiski kya, meri Parjaiji.. haaye, kinni dukhisi awaaz aa rahi hai aapki.. Veerji se doori bardasht nahi ho rahi kya?" "Veerji, kaun hai yaar' Ek minute, Veer toh Shahrukh khan ka naam tha an Veer Zaara mein..And Manvi decided to play along.. She had found something really interesting and entertaining. How could she let it go especially since it involved her favourite hobby, chatting!! "haan, woh kya hai na, aapke Veerji toh Lahore ki jail mein qaid pade hai.. aur main yahaan.. sochti hoon apne liye ek aur Veer dhoondh hi loon.. Virat was about to fall off the terrace.. Kya? Koi aur Veer.. Damn why was he referring to himself as Veer? These women in his life were crazy!!
Heer was enjoying every bit of it.. "Haan haan maine bhi wahi kehne ke liye call kiya tha.. Aakhir aap poori zindagi mere Veerji jaise Chep ke peeche thodi na barbad karengi.. Samajhdar hain aap.. " and Heer hung up..
And they gave each other a hi-five.. "Wow.. mazaa aa gaya.. Jitna main Manvi ko jaanta hoon, woh kissi bhi baat ko adhoori chod hi nahi sakti.. uske pet mein dard shuru ho jaata hai.. Dekhna agle hi minute tumhe khud call karegi.." And true, that very instant Heer's phone flashed, 'Manvi calling'.. Virat disconnected the call.. Ab aayega mazaa.. bohot tadpaya hai tumne mujhe, meri Chaudrain.. And they walked away to their respective rooms with a wicked smile playing on their lips.
Here sleep was the last thing on Manvi's mind.. Chep? Chep kyun kaha usne? Cmon Manvi, duniye mein sirf ek hi Chep nahi hai.. Phir bhi.. yaar achhi khasi so rahi thi main.. Iss caller ne toh meri neend ki orchestra baja di.. Iss Veerji ki toh main..
Finally, the day of the competition was here. Heer and Virat had managed to keep it a secret from everyone in the family. They reached the venue. The judges signaled all the teams to begin with their work. Virat looked at Heer. She had a 'you-know-what" look on her face. He smiled and began sketching.. It was decided, he would do the figure and she would do the background.
After 3 hours of hard work, what stood in front of them amazed them both. Obviously, they were declared winners. They were being given the trophy. "I dedicate this prize to my Raanjha, my Bhaiya.." and then it was Virat's turn.. "Its mutual, I guess.. I dedicate this win to my Heeriye, my darling little sister. She made me realize that I need to hold my hand out and seek what is mine.." Who's this girl in the painting?, one of the judges questioned.. "Does she mean something special to both of you?" "Of course she does, she is my Bhaiya's inspiration and the love of his life. And that makes my bond with her special as well.."
They walked back with the painting and now it lay neatly wrapped inside Virat's wardrobe.
They were both relaxing on the terrace with a cup of hot chocolate after a day's hard work. "Toh Heeriye, dekh maine tujhe jeeta diya. Ab meri problem ka kuch kar.. Uss din toh badi lambi lambi haak rahi thi.. Romeo and Juliet ko milakar rahungi.. Kaise? 300 km ka faasla hai.. kya karenge?"
She loved to see him desperate. "Yaar Bhaiya, chill maaro, kuch karte hai.. Ab bass ek baar aapki Juliet se aapki mulakat ho jaaye, uske baad toh humare plan ki nikal padi.."
Parr kaise??
Little did they know that destiny was already with them in the mission.
At dinner,
"Toh Jeevika, kal tum aur Viren Hrishikesh jaa rahe ho.. Yeh toh bohot achhi baat hai. Kaafi din ho gaye hai, tumhe ghar gaye hue bte.. Woh sab tumse milke kitne khush honge.."
"Haan Maa, Beeji, Chachu, Chachi aur Badi Beeji kal ek shaadi ke liye Ludhiana jaa rahe hai aur phir wahin se Char-dham ki yatra ke liye. Aur Dabbu..aur Ma..mera matlab, Dabbu akela hoga na gharpar.. toh maine socha ki main hi chali jau kuch dinon ke liye.. aur phir Virenji ne kaha ki woh bhi saath chalenge..
Two pairs of eyes at the dining table looked at each other mischievously. "Kya aapne suna Raanjhe, Manvi Hrishikesh mein Dabbu ke saath akeli hogi??"
"Haan, lekin hum kya kar sakte hai??"
"Aap na.. aap kuch mat kijiye.. karungi toh main.."
Later in Vanshika's bedroom, while she sat oiling Heer's hair, "Maa, kya aisa nahi ho sakta ki main aur Virat Bhaiya bhi Bhai aur Bhabhi ke saath kal Hrishikesh jaayein?"
Vanshika was surprised.. "Kya Hrishikesh, lekin kyun? Tum wahaan jaakar kya karogi?"
"Maa, woh kya hai na, ki maine suna hai ki Hrishikesh bohot hi sundar jagah hai.. isliye maine socha.."
Vanshika didn't seem to be convinced.. "Lekin phir tum akele bhi toh Viren aur Jeevika ke saath jaa sakti ho na, Virat ko saath le jaane ki kya zaroorat hai?"
"Uffo Maa, lagta hai ab aapko sab sach batana hi padega.. Aaiye mere saath.."
She dragged her to Virat's room who was sleeping, curled up on his bed like a baby. And had a sweet smile on his face..
Heer whispered, "Achha bacchu, sapne dekhe jaa rahein hain unke.."
Vanshika was very pleased to see her son that way.. but she was stunned by what Heer had said.. "Sapne, kiske sapne??"
"Shhh.. dheere, yeh dekhiye"
And she showed Vanshika the photoframe that Virat was clutching tightly even in his sleep.
"MANVIII'."
Heer had to drag Vanshika out of Virat's room to stop her from waking Virat up.
"Maa chaliye mere room mein.. main aapko sab batati hoon.."
"Virat aur Manvi?? Kaise?? Kabse??"
"Bass bass Maa, ab aap meri baat dhyan se suniye.. Haan, Bhaiya Manvi se pyaar karte hai.. Lekin Manvi ko iss baat ka pata nahi hai.. Aur aapko toh pata hi hoga ki Manvi ne iss ghar mein kissi se bhi pichle kayi mahinon se baat nahi ki hai.. Toh ab mere pyaare Bhaiya se aur sabr nahi ho raha.. Woh jald se jald Manvi se apne dil ki baat kehna chahte hai.. Lekin Manvi hai ki apne dil pe 'Not reachable' ka board lagakar baithi hai.. Toh meri pyaari Maa, hum iss liye Hrishikesh jaana chahte hain.."
Vanshika could not believe her ears.. Virat was in love with Manvi.. How did this happen? They always used to be at loggerheads.. Shayad nok-jhok mein hi pyaar ho gaya..
"Toh phir theek hai.. Jaao tum dono bhi..Aur mana aao meri choti bahu ko.."
Heer was utterly pleased.. "Waah Maa, aap best hain!! thank you soo much.. Lekin ek pareshaani hai.. Kya aap humara ek aur chota sa kaam kar sakti hain?"
Vanshika looked at Heer's puppy face and she knew she would be in trouble.. All of her children were just the same!
"Aapko Viren Bhai aur Bhabhi ko ek aur din ke liye yahiin rok kar rakhna hoga. Aur main aur Virat Bhaiya kal savere hi Hrishikesh ke liye nikal jayenge.. Kissi ne agar poocha toh keh dena ki hum mere kisi medical camp ke liye gaye hain aur wahin se Hrishikesh chale jayenge."
"Lekin Heer, yeh kaise possible hai? Aur tum dono jaldi kyun jaana chahte ho?"
"Maa, kya aap bhi.. Viren Bhai aur Jeevika Bhabhi ke hotey hue, Bhaiya apne dil ki baat Manvi se kaise keh payenge? Please Maa.."
"Theek hai.. main manage kar loongi.. Ab apne bacche ki khushi ke liye itna toh main kar hi sakti hoon na.."
"Yaay Maa, you're the best.. Hrishikesh, here we come.. Beware meri honewali Bhabhiji, aapke hosh jald hi udne wale hain.."
Vanshika couldn't help but smile at it. She loved Manvi.. And she always wanted a life-partner like Manvi for Virat. Someone who could understand and love him for what he was. She prayed for her son's happiness and left Heer's room.
But sleep was the last thing on Heer's mind. She had packed her bags. She lay down on the bed and shut her eyes while her mind was busy devising strategies.
As soon as the clock struck 5, she woke up, took a shower and ran into Virat's room.. "Bhaiya uthiye.. Bhaiya jaldi uthiye.."
Virat opened his eyes drowsily, "Yaar kya hai? Kyu subah subah apni phati hui awaaz mein alarm ki tarah baj rahi ho.."
"Haww.. meri awaaz..Phati hui?? Aapko toh dekh loongi.." and she finally poured a glass of water on him..
"Huh.. kya.. kaun hai??" He sat up on the bed trying to register the shock and found Heer all dressed up and sitting cross-legged on his bed with a big smile on her face..
"Kya hai.. subah subah kahaan chal di? Aur meri neend ka tambora kyun baja rahi hai meri maa.."
"Kya yaar bhaiya, yahan main aapki life ko art film se romantic film banane ki koshish kar rahi hoon aur aap ho ki .. Abhi ke abhi uthiye, jaake naha lijiye aur phir humein chalna hai.."
"Kahaan jaana hai?"
"Meri honewali choti Bhabhi se milne.."
"Haan.. toh khud chali ja.." He said without understanding what she'd meant.
"Haan, chali jaati.. lekin woh kya hai na, ki unfortunately meri honewali choti Bhabhi, aapki honewali biwi bhi hai.. Toh main akele unhe pata nahi sakti na.."
"Kya!!!" And then it struck him..He jumped off the bed and moved a hand through his silky hair.
"Oye Heeriye, hum Hrishikesh jaa rahe hain??"
"Lo dekho.. behen ki toh kadar hi nahi hai.. Kabse utha rahi hoon.. lekin na.. Aur Bhabhi ki baat kya kardi, aap toh ekdum attention mein khade ho gaye.."
"Oye bass oye.. footage mat kha.. jaldi bata.. tere dimaag mein chal kya raha hai?"
And she told him about the plan.
"Toh tune Maa ko bata diya?", he asked giving her killer looks.
"Haan yaar Bhaiya, waise koi aur option tha kya.. Chaliye ab.."
They were seen walking out of the house within the next 30 minutes.
"Lekin Heer, tu yeh aise kapde? Mera matlab, achhi lag rahi hai.. lekin tu Hrishikesh jaa rahi hai..Hawaai nahi..aur woh bhi apne Bhai ke saath.."
"Chill yaar Bhaiya, yeh baat aap jaante hai ki aapki behen hoon.. Lekin Meri honewali Choti Bhabhi thode hi jaanti hai!! And she winked at him..
She took his arm and together they took another step towards the success of Mission Romeo and Juliet!!
Mission Romeo and Juliet!!
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