ArHi SS ~Unbelievable~ REMOVED.

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

I love how you have described Payal's thoughts about her little sister.

And her knowing deep down inside that there is more to arnav than meets the eyes, you have beautifully described it.

Love arnav's support to khushi.

Lovely update.

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

This s the cutest thing I ve ever ever ever read!! Love the fact that you're taking it so slow, letting us absorb each and every emotion so well!! Please keep writing and dont stop anytime soon! Please! Thanks :)

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Pinkionly

@Pinkionly

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Aww that was soo cute! Just read this SS while on break. I like how you kept Payal's importance intact since the show doesn't seem to be doing too much justice to her role. I can't wait for Part 3!

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Nice update!😊
Loved Payal's concern and Arnav's craziness- "drive gently but reach the hospital fast"😆

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@Chocoangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

haha..loved payal n arnav for their concern..

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

loved it!!!!

n pls cntinue wid the story!!!!

simply loved payal's monologues!!!!!!

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

loved the update...

awesome start..

do pm me plzz..

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Anisha/Habiba Barun Sobti ;-)

@Anisha_91

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Raeee 🤗 OMG awesome update!! Loved how u expressed their emotions. and how u described Khushi and Payals relationship, so cute!! I loved how u described Arnav's emotions it was brilliant! And Arnav was just sooo cute he's like drive fats then...wait slow down Khushi doesn't like fast cars awww he is just sooo cute!! bless him! Amazing update...and Rae you HAVE to continue! pleaseee x