SS- Strangers In New York: Completed

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

@sukirtiraizada

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

great work and a great start...

luved it...

plz add me to ur pm list...

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Jayne

@Jayne

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Nicely written.

There was a switch of personalities for them - Arnav more emotional and acting without thinking, while Khushi being more pragmatic and in-charge - though the pace was good.

It did throw me for a loop at first, trying to get a handle on the story, but I liked that you did not linger on emotional areas and drag them out - they got just enough and no more time - and kept the tempo of the story going very well.

Dialogues are always more interesting to read than description.

Jayne

Edited by Jayne - 10 years ago

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nimra21

@nimra21

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Seems interesting. Looking forward to reading the next part. :)

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Liked ur storyline. So Arnav is gonna b the boss isn't he? Interesting! ;) plse continue

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Loved it! really am looking forward to how u will be proceeding with this story!

do pm me when u update again!

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Very interesting...cannot wait to hear more. Please PM me when you update.

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pri3love

@pri3love

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

I am very happy that the story is nothing like the show. At least in some parallel universe these two can be nice to each other and fall in love. Good work. Waiting for the next chapter. Update soon.