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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Arrgh!! SHANA!!!!

i was expecting something depressing but not THIS depressing! you just killed her off? That stupid Meenakshi! Please make her pay for this! Actually the perfect thing would be is that even after doing all this she doesnt get Uday and has to live her life in guilt!
You know I hate your ff! you know why? All those cute Adya and Uday scenes just make me go soo AWWW and then my heart breaks when I think how much I want to see scenes like those in the show!! Uday making faces to appease his daughter! Awww!!!!!
Alright well even though you have made the story so sad, I am still looking forward to the next book desperately! And I guess it wont hurt to add that you still did a briliant job writing it! 😊
So what's next? A leap of five years? Or is Manyata going to lose he memories? Or both?šŸ˜† Shana dear are you seriously gona go the Kekta way? 😲 You know what even if you are, its alright. 😃 I love your FF too much and I'm sure no matter what twist you bring in you will write it amazinlgy! 😊



Thanku Ranjana

U know what is the greatest advantage of writing an FF for like minded people is ,well u'r readers know beforehand what u gonna write and still they read it coz they are fans majboor by their fan heart !!šŸ˜‰

U guessed it so right,yes I am gonna kekta way as usual five year leap and memory loss though Udayveer is gonna change in a weird way why coz his character is the one which is actully inspired by my own real life experience ,the only thing different is that the man ended up in suicide

but here in my FF Udayveer wont as he will be changed and loved and most of all will be lucky to get back his love though with all twist and turns .

Well its better to get back u'r love as u are the luckiest coz those who dont sometimes loose the battle of life in worst way my Maanveer will be the lucky ones 😊

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
manyata phirse uday se dur hogayi:(..but dis tym not only uday but also her daughter needs her...
Hate u minakshi
shana plzz update book 2 soon
hope adya get her mom back soon..

waiting for book 2 :)
Edited by -Tannu- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
Start with happiness..
And their trip was getting exciting came in the kamini minalshi
How heartlessly she pushed manyata off the falls...poor manyata...she will definately come back for prince nd her little princess..
Uday once again he lost his love to this grave world...m sad u made me sad :( ..nd i knw u will again make me happy waiting

Hope she comes back soon

Cont soon
PM me wenever u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry di for the late reply.anyways loved it.n cont soon...n again really very sorry di.
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Posted: 13 years ago
šŸ‘ woow loved it, hope Manyata is ok... can't wait for the book II
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Posted: 13 years ago
Do start on the next book soon!! Reading good stuff really excites me!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Tannu-

lovely update
manyata phirse uday se dur hogayi:(..but dis tym not only uday but also her daughter needs her...
Hate u minakshi
shana plzz update book 2 soon
hope adya get her mom back soon..

waiting for book 2 :)



Thanks Tannu

Have already updated the prologue of book II Wheels Of Fortune

Hope U Like It.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshab

awesome update
Start with happiness..
And their trip was getting exciting came in the kamini minalshi
How heartlessly she pushed manyata off the falls...poor manyata...she will definately come back for prince nd her little princess..
Uday once again he lost his love to this grave world...m sad u made me sad :( ..nd i knw u will again make me happy waiting

Hope she comes back soon

Cont soon
PM me wenever u update



Thank U Shabs

Yes dear Manyata is already back as manya,as i have already updated prologue

though still i have kept identity secret as girl herself does not know her real identity ...

wahi ekta kapoor ka memori loss funda use kiya hai šŸ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Sorry di for the late reply.anyways loved it.n cont soon...n again really very sorry di.



No need to say sorry dear Swini

The big thing is u commented dear and yes dear pls do tell what u like and dislike as it helps me in writing further 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasnee

šŸ‘ woow loved it, hope Manyata is ok... can't wait for the book II



Thank U Tasnee for liking the FF.

Yes dear Manyata is OK and all ready to come back.😊

Do read the prologue for Book II >>Wheels Of Fortune and tell your views 😃



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