Married For Riyasat-Update-Chap 12-part II-Pg 89

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

i loved d name adya so cute..aww manveer n d litle princess ver so adorable u wrote it so well it felt lyk i was watching a fairytale in front of ma eyes..uggh i h8 meenakshi buh as dey say evry fairytale has its villian...n meenakshi is disgusting...but plz dont do nything to manveer or their lil princess ma heart will break den😉...but getting bak 2 d upd8 i loved it👏⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️...n o yeah r u planning a leap ver manveer get seperated..plz temme no...

ps thanks for pm😃

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

LOVE IT. LOVE IT.LOVE IT. THANKS FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

AWESOME. DO CONTINUE SOON.😊

GREAT JOB.👍🏼

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@Being-Human

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

amazing uppadet will be waiting for the next part thankxxx for sharing

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx
reserved..gonna be teh first one!

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ADYA!!! What a lovely name Shana...i really luv it..its soo unique and different, in fact its the first time i heard it but i really like it! A-D-Y-A, U-D-A-Y ...did u do that on purpose? lol they sound really similar 😃
seriously loved this chapter!
Awww..she looks like Uday? Awww...sorry lol cant describe how i feel any better 😳
OMG Meenakshi is back! you know what? im actually excited Shana..bring it on 😉 ... her being evil is much easier to deal with rather than the thought of her being a depressed broken-hearted girl
my favourite part has to be the ending portion...Adya and her social smile! HAHA the baby is already so intelligent like her daddy 😆 and the best is when u describe her relationship with Uday 😍 so flippin' cute!! And the best line just has to be: 'Like mother like daughter' sighed Uday mischievously

🤣 That really cracked me up!
Really I loved this chap..I just realized how badly I want to see these kind of scenes with UV and his child on the actual show and I dont know whetehr it is ever gonna come true ..still at least I can enjoy it in ur FF! 😃
Amazingg worrk Shana 🤗..seriously loved it! Continue soon adn yea on monday wont be a bad idea! 😃

Thanks Dear
Its the genuine comment like yours that encourages me to write again as now I eagerly wait to read u'r reactions😊

As for Minakshi yes dear I needed an evil to move my story on as it seemed stuck and I felt going round and round the same thing as my ideas of Manveer moments seem to go repetitive(u must have observed it as well )

Seeing our Uday as papa to a little child has always been my dream as his passion and love did need some other outlets too.😆

Will try my best to update by Monday😃

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30
such an amazing update..:)is Minakshi planning to kidnap d kid?she's like female version of Akash..always planning something sinister...can't wait to read d next part:)

Thanks dear,

But Minakshi is not at all planning to harm the kid but its mother ,how u will know very soon😊

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manv

@manv

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

amazing, u know your write up is even better than actual dek episodes u should write novels or romance books, u have a talent to write captivating stories do utilize your talent

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: Amibaiju
Amazing part!!! But u left a cliffhanger for us!!! Please update soon dear...thanks for PM...

Thanks Ami

Will take u out of this cliffhanger very soon 😉

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07
👏👏thanks.loved it.brillaint.loved adya's connectio to uday.a brillaint father-daughter love...👏👏

Thanks Dear

This father daughter connection is going to be the backbone of my future FF as its Adya who is actully going to care of her father now 😊

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Nicely done!!... great work🤗

Now I'll hound the forum for your next update tomorrow 😈😈... must say hun, I'm really enjoying your style of writing👏👏

Plz don't keep your readers waiting!!😳

Thanks for liking it Mahi

I am scared now 😆 will try my best to keep my promise but then I am not Rajawada kya pata bhool ho jaye