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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god i completely missed chapter 12 ...awww he shared his bad experience tooo so he is hot and not perfect...and by the way ARNAV sound sexy hanaaa.
lets start looking for guys with name ARNAV😉
WAX HIS CHEST Khushi r u mad he looks all sexy and manly with all those hair 😆

oh this payal is playing a sick game she is a 🤬b**** all worried for poor ARNAV

and update soon wanna knw payal's reaction to their hard work last night.
Edited by oops-whoops - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-



Don't act all innocent with me!!

Your very mischevious you are!

Aashifah's off the hook because she's updating now but you missy! -.-



Hahaaa!! Which fic do you want an update for??

Im hopping to watch enders
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup



my jaw is still touching the table! I've replayed the episode like a million times, my dad just said "tu gayi kaam seh" *thud*


Apne aap ko very smarts samjhat ho?! Saari baatein karat ho par ee nahin bataya ki updateyaat howat ki naahi! Peeleej make its clears! ;) :D
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That's a hard choice Aaliyah!

I love both SL and AHFR :(

😳
You decide😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup



YES you lot are ridiculous! what about your FICs? this is like child labour! 😕



Child labour hahahahhaa!! We love your fic
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-

That's a hard choice Aaliyah!


I love both SL and AHFR :(

😳
You decide😛



I havent wrote anything for neither of them ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Bare casually sitting on the sofa with the lappy in my lap refreshing the page like crazy to check if you've updated and the Eastenders SoundTrack playing!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Let me start off by saying you lot are absolutely nuts! I don't even want to talk about it! 😆 WHO SAW THE EPISODE? 😲 without further ado the update! 😆

This update is dedicated to every commenter <3 without you guys I wouldn't be motivated so thank you! 😳 And we made it pass 100! 🥳 *dances*


Chapter 13: Bold dares.




Arnav leafed through the many papers the detective had given him, there had to be another word for shock that could describe Arnav's state better, the word 'shock' had no meaning to Arnav, he was disgusted, horrified, disturbed, angered. Every other word but shocked would be better; he rubbed his eyes to wipe away the tears, which would be a sight wouldn't it? Arnav Singh Raizada in tears?





He wiped them away and barked an order to Aman, his right hand man.




Aman stumbled into the room, he had mastered the temper of his boss, but what he had not mastered was the vulnerability in his voice, whenever his voice came out so strangled Aman was stumped, he had learned how to tame the anger but he hadn't yet learned how to calm the angst that arose.




Looking up at his boss he noticed the furrow in his brow and the snarl to his lip and his eyes didn't fail to notice the red patch under his jaw, he had to supress the bubble of laughter 'Looks like bhabhi-ji got back at him' He smirked.




Aman recalled how Khushi Bhabhi was teased relentlessly by the family the previous evening, him and his wife were always invited on Friday for dinner at the Raizada house, they were treated just like family and both him and his wife noticed the love-bite on the elder bahu's neck but didn't dare to voice what they saw, it wasn't until Anjali burst out into laughter that everyone joined in jibing the couple where they could.




He had to stifle a laugh as he saw his boss barking out orders in regard to the contract at hand.




"Care to share the joke Aman?" Arnav questioned.




"Nothing Sir – Its jus- Nothin-




"What is it Aman?"




"Your neck sir" He stammered




"What about my neck?"




"There is a bite-like-thing sir" Aman dared to say.




Arnav was flooded with embarrassment, so that was why his secretary was staring at him, in his history of affairs there was no entanglement of that sort, he never allowed it but this was different, this was his wife communicating to him and Arnav was amused, highly amused in fact, so this is how you payback Khushi? Well lets see, my turn now. And it was this thought that made him rise with revenge on his mind, he told Aman to email him the information and he left AR that day with a smile on his face.




A sight for all to behold.




_ _




He chose to drive himself home, the pause at the traffic lights helped him with his methodical thinking, he realised his wife played it quite slyly. His brow rose in amusement again, the corners of his lips moving up.




She had him cornered against the mirror while he protested, telling her he was getting late for work, to be honest he was slightly scared when she changed her attitude from bold to demure but that morning oozed charm and passion.




Her lip made a pattern on his jaw line, her lips would trail up to the corner of his and then leave them there, teasing his lips for more and that was her strike, her lips finding a pathway down his neck where she bit, sucked and licked. Once she was happy with the deed she stepped back, her hair disarray from his hands, her lips bent into a smirk, her eyes dancing with joy.




He was bought out from his reverie by the tooting of horns, after that he drove without thinking, his thoughts on a mental mute till he got home.




As he arrived, he greeted his family in the living room and happily made his way up to his room, ready to give his wife a 'beating' of sorts.




_ _




Khushi was petrified; she was expecting him late that night as he had said at the dining table that gave her enough time to be 'sleeping', after she had done what she decided to do, she ran away, hiding from his all seeing gaze behind the walls of the kitchen where she gathered her breathing back to its normal pace.




If all the crazy thoughts about him coming home weren't enough her head began to feel heavy, her skin perspiring with the flames and suddenly she began to feel incredibly cold, her body breaking out into deep sweats. She told Anjali she wasn't feeling well, made her way to her room, and dressed in his clothes wanting to feel his warmth surrounding her.




It was around noon Anjali came in with her lunch and a book for her to read, Khushi didn't want the food and told Anjali she would feel better if she read to her, it may have been childish or something a two year old would ask but Anjali gave in, reading whilst occasionally patting her hair.




_ _




This was the sight that greeted Arnav, his wife in his clothes while his sister was making her way through the many books that were placed on the floor, he presumed the bigger pile was the 'read' pile and the smaller one was the one to read.




He coughed to attract their attention but to his dismay only his sister looked up, it seemed his wife had cuddled into Anjali's lap and fallen asleep, he made his way to them and sat on the opposite end untying his shoes.




"Khushi okay di?"




"Pata nahi chotey, the home doctor had come in, claiming she had a mild fever due to stress, other potential factors and off course the pathogen itself, he prescribed her simple antibiotics, and told her to take plenty rest and now that you're here I can go"




"No di, I don't want you to go" Khushi wound her hands around Anjali's waist.




"So you're awake?" Arnav tugged at his t-shirt that was currently occupying his wife's body.




"Don't touch me" She squealed, "Di tell him to go away, I'm not talking to him"




"Chotti" The three looked up to see Shyam enter the room; "If you don't mind I want to take my wife away you see its 7'o'clock, time for her to have her folic acid supplement"




Khushi was reluctant but eventually gave in "Okay jeeju, but she has to come back straightaway right?"




"I promise she will be back tomorrow!" Shyam smiled.




"Tomorrow but jeeju-




"Goodnight Khushi" He said and left the room, guiding his wife to the dining table.




_ _




It was just them now, their shallow breathing evidence enough to the life outside that both husband and wife were in the same room.




"Go away" She grumbled and climbed back into bed, wrapping the duvet around herself.




All games forgotten Arnav pealed back the layers of the duvet for his wife to open her eyes and glare at him, his fingers brushed her hair aside and felt her fever, his cool fingers salvage to her heated body. She closed her eyes again, trying to find peace from the restless headache. His hands briefly left her, but she didn't have the strength to open her eyes so she heard him change his clothes and soon after the bed dipped as he gathered her into his arms, luckily she didn't protest but fell into his arms gladly, her own hands placing themselves onto his chest.




"Why aren't you talking to me?" He asked




"You came home early," She said




He laughed, a wholehearted teeth baring laugh. "Most wives want their husbands to come home early, but here my wife wants me to work late!" and he laughed again, his fingers finding their way underneath his clothes and rubbing small circles on her perspired back.




"You're wearing my clothes" He stated over her hair




"I needed you" She whispered into his chest, and just like that she rose slightly to rest her chin on her hands and said "News"




"Tell me," He said fingering the bun that was atop her head.




"I have almost managed to convince Nani for no sarees!" She said with glee.




"Oo, how did that go?" He said tucking a stray strand behind her ears.




"Payal interrupted the conversation" She huffed




"Jaan if you want I can always talk to her?" Arnav offered




"No, its my battle and I prefer to fight it myself" She exclaimed




"Okay my lioness"




And she found her way back into his arms, tenderness began drugging his veins as the emotion beat through his heart; her fever had dramatically reduced ever since he had come home.




It was his turn to tell her about the happenings of the day, he dictated the stares and then the incident with Aman, cleverly missing out the papers the detective had given him.




"Which reminds me, you learn fast don't you?" His fingers teased her body in the pattern her lips had done.




"I'm a very good student" And she mustered a wink from her droopy eyes




He kissed the corner of her face, where her ears met her face and she broke out into a smile Arnav had quickly learnt his wives most ticklish spots. Her fingers halted the rest of his play.




"Not today please, I'm on" She said, slightly embarrassed.




"On, on what?" Arnav said




"My monthly cycle" It took a while for Arnav to finally understand what it was she was talking about, and when he did he felt her clench up and become a ball.




"Its okay jaan" He whispered in her ear, blowing cool air on her forehead.




"Sometimes it hurts, especially down here" She pointed her fingers to an area below her stomach.




"I'm sure it does sweetheart, but its okay, do you want paracetamol?"




"No" She said and kissed him near his love bite.




"Goodnight love" He said




"Love you" She said unconsciously.




Those two words weren't meant to be said so soon, no doubt Khushi felt this need for him ever since they had made love, it was deep attraction and she felt the need to give back as much as he gave to her, she didn't know whether he reciprocated her feelings but sometimes she felt he did, it was with the little gestures like this one. She didn't know if what she felt was love but that was the only name she could give it, it was deep within her. But she felt it and she felt it strongly.




Arnav felt the impact of those words on his body, muttering for some sanity to the deity above he laughed, before her he never believed in any god or any form of religion but her infectious 'devi maiya' had rubbed off on him.




He gathered her closer and hoped that tomorrow the lawyers would find some solution as he was stumped, confused and unaware what to do next. As he felt her legs tense up he soothed his hand down her back.




"Lord help anyone on a period" He said and laughed again, she most definitely had rubbed off on him.



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How was it? Good? Mostly centred on Khush Khush, OMG WHO SAW THE EPISODE? MY JAW WAS ON THE FLOOR! It was too goddamn good! I think I fell in love with these two again.


We made it pass 100! 🥳


Do let me know what you think


-Aashifa


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, Aashifa!

Arnav has love bites...interesting! And Aman of ALL people tells him about it - LOL!

So cute and naughty ArHi are! <3

Loved their interaction and she finally said it, hope he will reciprocate soon! :)

And also liked the whole Khushi-Anjali-Shyam dynamics. So nice. :)

And along with the cuteness, we had the business...Arnav is so gonna screw those jerkholes. :D

And all this after a brilliant day of IPKKND...hayye nazar na lage! :) <3

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
DAMN! Second😆

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OMG Aashifah! That was just so cute<3

Aww! She was on and she didn't 😆 That part made me LOL😆

Aww! Aww! Arnav was going to cry! Sad times, That was just emotional :( :(

Urgh Payal needs to 🤬 OFF! I seriously hate her to the core :|

Ahh the mystery of Aman, awww he has a wife! And for a second, I was thinking Anjali and Aman should get together before i realised the Shyam in this FF was good! 🤣🤪

Can't believe i'm saying this but Shyam was too cute, He wanted Anji to himself. Awww<3😆
Edited by -JollyJabeen- - 13 years ago

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