ArHi OS: Ocean of Redemption [ipkknd]

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nareshSV
wow yaar...really he has swim an ocean to gain her forgiveness...

Well written...u caught the emotions too well...

I hope its an ocean to traverse and she reaches out to him in its last leg. She has it in her to forgive him when the time comes. I'm looking forward to the redemption track on the show...they better not mess that up.

Thanks a lot Naresh. Glad you enjoyed this random OS.

Aria

Edited by olive.green - 13 years ago

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Very elaborately described!! amazing work!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nmyra
Very elaborately described!! amazing work!

Thank you Nmyra.

Aria

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hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Olive ! that was amazing ! heart-wrenching and consumed of deeply felt emotions ! very well written ! :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: hilly
Olive ! that was amazing ! heart-wrenching and consumed of deeply felt emotions ! very well written ! :)

Thank you :)

Aria

Edited by olive.green - 13 years ago

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Sookie

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Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I always wondered why these daily soaps don't do good monologues. You know a lengthy self exploration dialogue output that helps the characterization and makes the viewers understand what the character is all about..

If they ever did for ASR, then this would probably help the viewers understand what he truly is - just a guy who is severely attracted to a woman who is everything he is not.

Quite a tangent from Pot of Gold and Little bit of mad OG. Nice change though my favorite remains "...little bit mad" 😊 When are you updating that? 😆

S

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Boogle.Schiz

@Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Boogle is officially your fan 😳😆 I think I need to catch up with a pot of gold too. Today is so dull and dreary, and it really has really gotten me wound up in its blues so I can't seem to fathom words to compliment this piece.

Sookster, the day Arnav speaks something more than a line or two about himself I will personally fly to India and kiss the writer's hands for penning it down.

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pikudika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wow! beautiful! heart-wrenching!

He had mercilessly snatched her heart, and trampled over it every single day, till it ceased to bleed.

WOW!!

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Ace11

@Ace11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

God that was beautiful...soulful...I m so glad that after all the pain that he dished out no her, she is still there, reaching to pull him out of his self made cocoon of pain. I m a sucker for happy endings. Loved it.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
I always wondered why these daily soaps don't do good monologues. You know a lengthy self exploration dialogue output that helps the characterization and makes the viewers understand what the character is all about..

If they ever did for ASR, then this would probably help the viewers understand what he truly is - just a guy who is severely attracted to a woman who is everything he is not.

Quite a tangent from Pot of Gold and Little bit of mad OG. Nice change though my favorite remains "...little bit mad" 😊 When are you updating that? 😆

S

Sookie, my friend, if they started proper monologues...these shows would end fairly soon! Apparently, ipink is not about "lengthy self exploration dialogues" but all about symbolism and lots of hidden meanings sprinkled here and there... that the viewers are expected to unravel and make sense of! Don't worry, if this doesn't help, I'll link you some more stuff to help you out..there 😆

Pots must seem like an aberration to you after all. 😆 Will update the other one soon.

And yes, Thanks for not reserving.😳

ciao!