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queenie11

@queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Ahh tricky tricky Arnav - even in his desperate state, it's so relieving that he's seizing the last opportunity to speak to Khushi alone, in his car. After the poolside, the car must be their favorite place~

This is one of those tragic couple moments when each is trying to do blindly the best for each other while ignoring their own needs - almost selfless and just such a couple moment. I'm very curious to read how you will bring them together -

I really enjoy reading the newspaper tidbits - you write gossip so well.

And Naina - I adore that name - is it safe to assume that Shyam has been rid of?

Very excited to read the next installment - thanks for the pm Navin :)

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

He ranted and raved, Khushi, like a madman. But I made him remember that you had a family as well, that privilege was not just reserved for him.

What a beautiful statement. In fact, I love the entire monologue.

(I hope we can see this some day on screen!)

Well done.

I also love the imagery of the dried flower petals...so pleased that Arnav tried, oh man, he tried so hard!

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Sanjana

@akhilash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

thanks for the pm.

Loved it and appreciate the update.

I am going to sound really ungrateful here, this was a cliffhanger, cant wait for the next update.

thanks again, keep them coming

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

What a fantastic twist!

Now, I want to see that steel-trap brilliant brain of Arnav focused on making her stay at Raizada House.

Excellent update.

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

Ohh nooo... Arnav you duffer...are you kidding me,,,speak with you heart boy...honestly the way he's carrying on... he probably will have to marry that Lisa girl lol

Loved the update... he wants her back and so does she... they just need to get it across lol :)

Thanks for the super quick update :) looking forward to the next one..

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hodan1987

@hodan1987

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

I am totally loving whatever is inspiring you to update this wonderful ff. Thanks for the PM. Anyways, desperate people make desperate decision but seriously Arnav…that is not the way to keep your wife who is ready to set you free. Poor Kushi. I hope she gives him hell😛