IPPKND SS:The Love Story on Page 3 (COMPLETED)

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

awesome update loved it he knew the truth and wanted to get her back and they never told her understood the father just wished he would have given her a choice loved it thanks for writing the dialogue in English loved the update can't wait for the next one

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

interesting. loved it. but sometimes when u truly need people u love 2 stand by u n they dnt a part of u dies that can never be revived again. love is a g8 feeling but pain of love is to g8.

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

awsome part and lovely story

plz cont. soon

thanx for the pm:)

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Wow! So Arnav is missing her and remorseful!

I love how Shashi Gupta stood up for her daughter, first to the world, later to Arnav, and then to the ladies of his house when they protested!

I am so impressed how you showed her family to be with her, and her father especially. And for sending the message that all parents love their children, and how they (could) do their best when their little girl Is being mistreated!

👏

Thank you for the PM!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

You have an amazing knack for bringing to life the supporting characters. Brilliant portrayal of the father with his roles and responsibilities. So often in real life children just show parent's a facade that they want to see...just to keep them happy. Khushi was doing that too. I thought the happiness and chirpiness was not real...

Please please spend some storytime showing Arnav's side too in the past five months.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

loved it...its an awesime update...love the way u portrayed khushi's dad's love and care for his daughter...

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

OMG ..i started reading this SS today and i'm already in love with it!!😛

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Beautiful

- a helpless father's attempts to safeguard his daughter weighed down by the knowledge that he had failed her once

- a desperately unhappy daughter who once again acrificed her happiness for her family and

- a lost distraught soul, tortured by self loathing and resigne dto suffering in silence knowing that he could never ever reach out to the one person who could give his tortured heart some peace!